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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian



Seriously...u and mishu..in collaboration...haye...wat magic are both the super amazing writers gonna do...damn excited...hehe...




He he thnxx..
Yeah we will update today ..probably
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akkukh




Are don't make me feel guilty na
Kal krdungi..
And han uh know mishu Di??
Misha shergil..
Di and I are coming in a collaboration story..
Hopefully will update today..



Aree dun feel guilty
Kal kr dena...eagerly waitn fr it

N yaa i knw her
Pm me wenevr u update the new collab stry
Wese is it guin to b a dark one or light one like this...or emotional???
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ps_angel



Aree dun feel guilty
Kal kr dena...eagerly waitn fr it

N yaa i knw her
Pm me wenevr u update the new collab stry
Wese is it guin to b a dark one or light one like this...or emotional???




Padlo Di pata chalega ;)
Edited by akkukh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akkukh




Padle pata chalega ;)


ok
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago



Di I told uh na ..
Mein apko sapne mein bhi ni bhool skti
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akkukh




Di I told uh na ..
Mein apko sapne mein bhi ni bhool skti


mai ye thdi kaha h
lolzzz

😆

n evn i cnt frgt u nd ua stry dear ;)

n i ws sayn k mai wo tumari new stry ka wait kr ri
fr its theme

agr emotional si hui naa
rona dhona typz
to phli hi btaa ri hu
m nt gnna read it ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 11

Manik saw nandini struggling with the flowers ...

She was standing on the staircase trying her best to make them proper but due to her chotu height was having a tough time dealing with it ...

Manik smirked and went to her ...

"help ..??" he offered his help smilingly ...

"no .!! thanks ...its my work i can manage ...you are paying me for this ..." she said pretty arrogantly that it hurted manik but he ignored it ...

First of all she was fighting with her own feelings ...so this pissed mood of her was expectable and normal ...!!

But the almighty was very well enjoying her state ...so to add a little more spice in it he let nandini slipped from there and she directly landed in mankks arms ...

Nandini closed her eyes scared but finding her secure she opened her eyes and her eyes met his eyes ...

For the first more then him she was lost in him ...

she noticed his brown eyes which are even capable to drown an ocean inside it ...

he was holding her placing his one hand on her bare back due to her backless jumpsuit ...sending jitters to her body

she was fitting in his arms so perfectly as her petite body was meant to be in his arms ...

manik was smiling like a love sick foe holding her so close to him ..but yet he was smirking too as he didn't expected this reaction from nandini ...

she was in his arms comfortably ...she didn't tried to come down as she was so lost in him...!!

their trance was broken by alya as she called manik a little angrily ..."manik ."!!!

nandini immideately come out of the trance and was embarraased ...

manik took put her down and turned towards a furious alya ..

"what you guys were doing ..??" alya asked furiously pissing her teeths..

Nandini didn't answered anything and just made her way out irritatedely cursing herself for losing it ...!!

Alya too gave manik a look and left with dhruv without giving him any chance to speak ...

Manik sighed throwing his hands in air and followed nandini ...

Nandini came outside and sat down in the garden leaning on the tree ...

She closed her eyes and some tears trickled down her cheeks ...

She was feeling so helpless on loving a man who is going to get married in next few days ...

She was feeling so irritated and helpless on seeing no way out of these feelings ...

"how can i love him ...??" she asked to herself and opened her eyes and cried ...

" I LOVE HIM ..." she confessed to herself helplessly and cried more ...

" I LOVE MANIK ..." she confessed to herself and palmed her face with her both hands and then dig her face in between her knees and cried ...

...

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Mohabbat...pyar ...ishq...ashiqui ...

Yeh chote se lafz

Kab zindagi badal dete hn pata nhi chalta..!!

Par kab ...kaise ...kahan ..or kyun ??

Pyar ho jata h

ye tou usse bhi nhi pata ..

isiliye kisine sahi kaha h

mohabbat ki nhi jati

mohabbat ho jati h !!!!!

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She opened her eyes and what she saw made her shocked ...

Manik was sitting beside her leaning on the tree looking at her smilingly ..

"tu..mm.. ya..han...??" she stammered scared what if he had listened her ...

Manik didn't answered and just smiled more and pressed his thumbs on her chubby cheeks wiping her tears ..

Nandini looked at him shocked widening her eyes ...

If he had listened her then this reaction was not expected ...

And if he hadn't listened her thn too this reaction was definitely not expected ...

She was confused of his actions ...

He then leaned forward and kissed her head ...

Nandini closed her eyes in anticipation feeling his soft lips touching her skin .

He moved back and nandini opened her eyes and stared at him ...and there was only and only love for her ...!!!

He then without saying anything got up and left ...

Nandini was hell confused of what he did ...

atleast she was expecting him to say something ...atleast something ...

And suddenly manik came back and cupped her cheeks and came close to her ears that his cheeks touches hers and said ..." I LOVE YOU TOO ...NANDINI .."and kissed her cheek and left leaving a shocked and flushed nandini behind ..

Manik came inside and saw cabbir still sitting and busy stuffing his mouth ...

Manik went to him happily ...and said excitedly..."cabir listen ..."

"dekh manik ...pehle khana badme bhabi ...mujhe pata h vaise bhi tune kuch nhi kiya hoga ..."cabir told him taking a bite of sandwhich ...

Manik shook his head in disbelief and then said ..."sun ...i proposed her .."

Cabir who was sipping the juice spitted it out the very next moment on maniks face completely shocked..

He stood up and freaked ..."kya bol rha h ?? pagal h kya ...?? matlab yeh tou kuch jyada hi fast ho gaya ...action ke liye bola tha ...world war 4 ke liye nhi ..." cabir blasted on him ...

While manik was sitting silently pissing his teeths cleaning his face with the tissue paper ...

He cleaned his face and got up ..."this is enough cabir ...if i wont do anything you say majnu ban gya hn ...abi kuch kara tou bhut fast ho gaya ...chahta kya h tu ...??"

"are tou tu pehle cycle ki speed se jaa rha tha ...abi seedhe plane kyun udake aya ...?? crash ho gya tou ...??"cabir asked him furiously..

"what ...??" manik said not understanding him ...

"what ...chod ...ye bata usne kya bola ...??" cabir questioned him curiously ...

"kuch nhi ..." manik told him ...smilingly..

"kuch nhi ...hain ...??" cabir asked him confused ...and picked the water bottle from the table and sipped water ...

"are matlab ...she proposed me ..." manik said and again his face was showered by cabirs mouth ...

Cabir spitted the water on maniks face again ..the very next moment manik said this ...

Manik clenched his fists tightly and whispered angrily pissing his teeths .."caabbiirrr"

But cabir didn't paid any heed to him as he was totally out of his mind on listening manik ...

"manik kya bol rha h ...explain kar ..." cabir asked him furiously ..

He was literally pulling his hairs in anticipation ..

And then manik explained him everything that happened ...

"yar tum log ki love story tou way too alag nikli ...no lyk seriously ..she too loves you ...but is not ready to exept it ..."cabir said more to himself then to manik ..

"yes bro ...but thank god she too loves me ...and its ok i will make her exept as now i know she too loves me ..." manik spoke positively ..

"wah mere sher!!! ..." cabir patted his back ...

Just then nandini entered and cabir waved a hello to her cheekily ...but she just passed him a little smile and looked at manik who was looking at her smilingly ...but she ignored it and left inside ...

Just then maniks cell rang and he picked up the call ...it was from his office and he was called as some important investors were coming ...manik sighed and made his way to his room ...

Manik got ready in his formals and came down ...

He saw nandini nandini talking to someone down the stairs and made his way to her smirking ...

He stopped at her and whispered in her ears slowly huskily ..."leave all this ...be ready for your own marriage ..miss planner ..."

Nandini cheeks flushed and she looked at manik but he just winked at her at left ...

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Kyun aajkl neend kam khwab jayada h ..

Lagta khuda ka koi nek irada h ...

Kal tha fakir aaj dil shehjada h

Lagta khuda ka koi nek irada h

Kya mujhe pyar h ya

Kaisa khumar h ya

Kya mujhe pyar h ya

Kaisa khumar h ya

Wooowowowowooo!!!!

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For the first time the Manik Manhotra entered his office smilingly ...

He greeted his employees by himself smilingly and complemented his secretary ...

His employees were shocked to see their boss in such a good mood ...

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Pathar ke in raston pe

Foolon ki ek chadar h

Jabse mile ho humko badla har ek manjar h

Dekho jahan mein neele neele asman tale!!

Rang naye naye hn jaise ghulte hue

Soye se khwab mere jage tere vaste!!

Tere khaylon se hn bheege mere raste!!

Kya mujhe pyar h ya

Kaisa khumar h ya

Kya mujhe pyar h ya

Kaisa khumar h ya

Wooowowowowooo!!!!

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he gave the presentation in an extra happy mood ...

all the time he was busy thinking about nandini ...her thoughts were distracting him a little ..but yet he tried his best to concentrate ...

he was not able to hide his happiness ...

the investors can also sense his happiness but they were very well known about manik manhotras professionalism ...

manik was also relaxed of the fact that now it was just alya he have to deal with ...

as now he didn't have to put efforts to make nandini fell for him ...

so he was relaxed and was happy that she also loves him ...

he completed the presentation and as usual he cracked it ...!!

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Tum kyun chale aate ho

Har roz in khwabon mein

Chupke se aa bhi jao

Ek din meri bahon mein

Teri hi sapne andheron mein ujalon mein

Koi nasha h teri aankhon ke pyalon mein

Tu mere khwabon mein jawabon mein sawalon mein

Har din chura tumhe mein lata hn khayalon mein

Kya mujhe pyar h ya

Kaisa khumar h ya

Kya mujhe pyar h ya

Kaisa khumar h ya

Wooowowowowooo!!!!

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Manik came out of the conference room and entered his cabin ..

He came inside and sat on his chair ...

He removed his blazer and loosened his tie and revolved his chair ...

He then saw his guitar and started tuning it...

His secretary entered inside and was shocked to see manik playing guitar in office ...

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Manik was sitting on one of his employees table tuning his guitar and was singing the song with so much of passion as if he meant every damn word ...!!

His employees were gathered around him and were very happy to see their arrogant boss behaving way too insane !!

...

On the other hand nandini was sitting in a corner in her room ...

Her eyes were tears and she was sipping coffee ...

"kal haldi h ...tumhari manik ...after this function i will deny to carry on with the wedding ...i cant do this ...i cant ..."she muttered to herself sadly...

...

Phewww !!!! bapre bap ...itna lamba ...someday mere hath kasam se toot jayenge !!

Ok so don't tell me ki manik bhut easy samajh rha h sab kuch ..or nandini faltu ka natak kar rhi h ...

Just have faith in me ...i will show everything senseful ...

Ps-: guyz i know i am being late in all my ffs ...and will be till 20 ...or maybe wont update any ...

I have exams ...but still see i updated today !!

I kmow brutal love and lafz too .i have not updated from pretty long ...will try to update them soon too !!

And guyz i am having my exams so can help it with the speed ...!!

Silent readers do try to leave your views !!😳🤢

Thnx for the appreciation !!!😛

Now plz shower your love as you likes and comments ...as seriously it is your love only which forced me to update this !!😛

And han i and mishu di aka misha shergil is doing a ff in collaboration ...😃

Plz do have a look UNNATURAL DISASTERS

LOVE!!❤️

AKANKSHA !!

Edited by akkukh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bohot Bardiya update
Nandini n Manik finally confessed
Par Nandu ko kya ho Gaya
Waiting for the next eagerly 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey hi,
i just loved the innocent cofession of Nandini...keep the great work going...😊

The plot seems very intiguing to me now...😆

Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres


wait

first let me laugh😆😆

hahahaahahahah🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Cabir🤣

that mahn is crazy

khana pehle

bhabi baadme

kash manik ne uski baat manli hoti

toh shayad apne handsome face ko bachapata

but nai... bohot ghai thi na usko toh


next time remind him to carry an umbrella

taki cabir k un warned shower se bach sake




now coming serious things


nandu ne accept kiya that she loves him🥳🥳🥳


yeeyyyeee

and manik ne woh sun bhi liya

aur badiya kkya ho sakta hain

but us idiiot ko yeh b samjhna chahiye tha

that its not easy for her

ab kya karega woo

mumma

m so curious

please jaldi update karde

warna tere xams k chakkar main humlog b latak jayenge

but iska matlab yeh nai k padhai mat kar...

warna bolegi mere wajha se padhai nai kiya😭😭

anywaes... jaldi update kariyo...

ill b waiting😉

Love
Apurva
Edited by apps33 - 9 years ago

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