#3 Stranger (part 35/page 119) 10 oct - Page 17

Originally posted by: edward_twilight

as always amazing update...
manik is so sweet and abeer n manik bond is so pure n innocent
now it will be interesting to see what cabir n nandini will do to make manik confess his feelings for nandini
n the nimbu n vim wala joke was 🤣

how do u manage to write such awesome updates... I mean kaise kar leti ho tum... 😉

Update next part soon

take care
SJ

Awee...thnkew so mch... I also dont know how she does this..., N next part in 29 mins...

Originally posted by: sweet_kaur

Love this ff a lot
And dear first and foremost Congo for
The third thread you deserve it
Nd I hope it keeps on multiplying

Next coming to the update
It was beautifully carved
And the emotional part was also heart touching
And eagerly waiting for jealous manik can't wait
Stay blessed always !!!
Can you pls send me a pm next time u upload
Coz I mostly get delayed in commenting and reading
Due to this reason
Pls try if u can!!!

Awee...rhnkew so mch dear... N sure buddy me n i will pm uh...

Sorry for the typing errors if any...

PART 25

While Manik, Cabir & nandini was busy in chit chat with each other that time shahid took an entry in his balcony. Shahid was staring at Nandini & it was seen by cabir. Cabir thought something in his mind & said...


Cabir : Manik tu abhi bhi yaha pe kya kar raha hain, ja aur dekh Abir kya kar rahe hain. Aur Nandini tum bhi jao manik ke saath, main thori der main ajayunga.


Then manan left from there & cabir started his own mission. Cabir turned towards shahid & said..


Cabir : Heyyy bro, what's up?

Shahid : Up main toh aasman hain.

Cabir : He he nice one, toh haal chaal Kaisa hain,Girl frnd vagera hain ya nehi?

Shahid : Itna acchi kismat leke mera janam nehi liya hain bhai.

Cabir : Ohhh, good good, Aab tu mera kaam ayega.

Shahid : Kuch kaha tumne?

Cabir : Nehi kuch nehi, soch ke teri lottery lag gaya.

Shahid : Par maine toh ticket aab tak nehi kharida.

Cabir : Arey, 1G ka tortoise sun, ish ghar pe jo ladki hain usko Kaisi lagti hain?

Shahid : Ekdam jhakkas lagte hain, par uska toh saayed boy frnd hain.

Cabir : Toh kya hua, Football match main bhi toh goal keeper rehte hain, Iska matlab ye thori na hain ki tu goal nehi dega, soch pagle soch.

Shahid : Haan sahi main yrr, tum mera saccha yrr ho.

Cabir : Wo toh main hoon,Aur sun aab jab mujhe tu yrr bana hi liya toh fir ghar pe aja dinner ke liye, maza aagaya.

Shahid : Haan haan, main abhi ata hoon.

Cabir : Koi jaldi nehi hain tu aram se aaja.


Saying this cabir went from the balcony & on the other side shahid ke maan main toh laddo fut raha tha.


Cabir's pov :

Aab ayega maza, Manik baba tumhare sautan ko maine bula liya. He he ha ha, Mugambo khush hua ho ho ho.


Meanwhile in the downstairs Abir was sleeping in Nandini's lap & manik was doing some work on laptop. Cabir reached there & called Nandini aside...


Nandini : Cabir tumne mujhe side pe keu bulaya.

Cabir : Suno main manik ko jalane ki intezam kar diya hain, aab tum sirf fuel danla ok.

Nandini : Haan wo toh thik hain par tumne kiya kya?

Cabir : Main shahid ko bulaya dinner pe, tumhe usko acche se khater dari karna padega.

Nandini : Arey waaah, tum tension maat lo.


After sometime...

The bell rang & Nandini began to run for opening the door.


Manik : Nandini tum bhaag keu rahi ho?

Cabir : Arey, Manik tu nehi samjhega jab ishq ka bulava ata hain tab log aise hi bhaag te hain.

Manik : Konsa ishq?

Cabir : Tu khud hi dekh le.


Nandini opened the door & here comes shahid with a bouquet of flowers.


Shahid : This beautiful flowers for the beautiful lady.

Nandini : Aww my honey pot, tum Kitne acche ho.


Saying this she pulled his cheek.


Other side Manik was fuming, He wanted to chop shahid's tongue so that he could speak.


Cabir : Manik kuch ho rahe kya?


Manik said absent mindly...


Manik : Haan, aur toh aur aisa lag raha hain ke jaldi se jaldi Jake usko faik doon.

Cabir : Toh fir jaana tujhe roka kaun.

Manik : Haan, ja raha hoon.


Saying this manik walked towards the door where shahid was still staring Nandini. But before manik could go cabir stopped him & said...


Cabir : Tu kaha ja rahe hain, toilet toh dusri taraf hain.

Manik : Toilet!!!!!

Cabir : Tune hi toh kaha ke tujhe man kar raha hain ke jaldi se jaldi Jake usko faik deneka. Toh ja toilet main aur natural call karke aa.

Manik : Cabirrr!!!! Main natural call ke bare main nehi bol raha tha, ufff tu kabhi nehi sudhrega.

Cabir : Manik toilet ke baat per mujhe ek shayari yaad agaya, bolu kya?

Manik : Tujhe jo maan main aye wo kar.urgghh!!!!

Cabir : ok par thori der baad bolta hoon.


Saying this he went towards the door.


Cabir : Arey waaah, love birds aao aao ander aao.

Nandini : Haan, shahid ander aao.

Manik : Ek minute, isko ander aane ka permission kisne diya.

Cabir : Arey, Manik main ishe invite kiya aaj dinner pe.

Manik : Tu toh dost name ki dushman hain.


Meanwhile shahid entered into the house & sat on the sofa beside Nandini. This scenario boiled manik's blood & to adding some fuel cabir began to tell his shayari...


Cabir : Tum logo ko main aaj manik ka zindagi ki sab se jayda dilemma wala matter ke bare main bolne ja raha hoon.

Nandini & shahid in union : Haan haan, bolo na.

Manik : Cabir tu kya kehna chata hain.

Cabir : Khud hi sun le...

Baith ke toilet mein manik
nawab ke jaise. .
Sardi ke mausam mein
sochtaa hain wo aise ..
Baith ke toilet mein
nawab ke jaise. .
Sardi ke mausam mein Manik
sochtaa hain aise .
"Ki kar to li hai tune beta ...
abb thande paani se
dhoega Kaise.."


Hearing this all burst out laughter.


Nandini high fived with Cabir.


Manik : Cabir tu kamina tha ye mujhe pata tha, par itne bade kamina hain tu ye mujhe nehi pata tha. Tune PHD liya hain kya "How to be a kamina " ish subject per.

Cabir : Ye toh mera born talent hain.

Nandini : Kya talent hain tumhara cabir.

Shahid : Cabir, tum mere saccha yrr ho, tumhare liye main aaj Nandini ki inti kareeb agaya.


Hearing this manik's eyes become red & he looked at cabir & cabir give him a "I'm the love guru "wala expression.


Manik : Mere peyare cabiraaa, tere acchai ko dekh kar main chahta hoon ki tera lamba umar ho, isi liye ek advice de raha hoon.

Cabir : Kya advice bro?

Manik : Haan bol raha hoon..
"Meri Baat Gaur Se Sun
.Zindgi me kabhi bhi ..
Dettol Se Mat Nahana
Dettol Kitaanuo Ko Maar Deta Hai.
Or main tujhe Khona Nahi
Chahta.!.!"


Nandini began to laugh. Manik also smiled.


Cabir : Nandu tum has rahe hoon, Huhhh.

Nandini : Main nehi has rahi hoon.


Saying this she again began to laugh.


Cabir : Huhhh, tumhare liye bhi ek Shayari hain mere pass,suno...
"Dua karta hoon ki
Bhagwan tumhare jaisa frnd aur na banaye
Ek hi toh cartoon thi hamari pass
Kahi wo bhi common na hojai "


Hearing Manik high fived with Cabir,while Nandini was fuming.


Shahid : Nandini, darling tum gussa maat ho,mera eyes pe dekho tum Kitna khubsurat ho. Tum bilkul pari jaisa ho.


Manik wanted to just pull all of shahid's hair & suddenly one idea came into his mind.


Manik : Shahid tumhe zarur bhuk laga hoga, chalo khana khane liye.


Cabir's pov :

Volcano itna Shaant kaise hua, kuch toh chaal raha hain Iska dimag main.


All sat on dining table & manik said...


Manik : Main serve karta hoon.


Saying this he began to serving & while serving Shahid he wantedly dropped the whole curry on shahid's head.


Manik : Opps, sorry sorry. Washroom idher hain mere saath aao.

Shahid went with Manik. Manik lead him towards the washroom.

Manik : kisi cheez ka zarurat ho toh mujhe awaz dena, main bahar hi hoon.

Shahid : Thik hain.

Manik : Tum ander Jake acche fresh ho jao , aur haan ye lo cabir ka clothes.


Shahid went inside the washroom but he couldn't found shampoo there. He called manik for shampoo. On the other side manik was busy in establishing his plan. Firstly he took the shampoo bottle & made it's two third empty, then he took a "VEET "in his hand & put the whole cream into the shampoo bottle.

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PART 26

Outside the washroom...


Manik was ready with his weapon. On the other hand shahid was asking him for shampoo.
Shahid : Manik can you here me?


Manik's pov :

Haan haan, araha hoon, pehle bar dekh raha hoon ke koi beld hone ke liye itni utavla ho raha hain.


Manik went near the door of the washroom & said...

Manik : Bro ye le shampoo ekdam branded hain.

Shahid : Thanks bro. Saying this he took the bottle.

Manik's pov :

Pehle bar Miss Murty koi kaam pe ayi, thank god ki usne "VEET "saath main layi thi.


Thinking this manik went out of the room & saw cabir & nandini was sitting.


Manik : Heyyy guys, kya chaal raha hain yaha?

Cabir : Pehle tu bata tujhe itni der keu hua?

Manik : Thori der ruk climax hone wala hain.


Saying this he winked at them.


After five minutes all of them heard a scream.


Nandini : Guys guys, ye scream toh upar se arahi hain, lagti hain shahid koi bhoot dekh liya.

Manik : Hmm, lagta hain usne mirror dekh liya.

Cabir : Par wo itni bhi buri nehi hain sakal se, tune kuch kiya toh nehi na, pakka manik?

Manik : Mera jaisa sharif ke bare main tu aisa kaise bol sakta hain.

Nandini : Let's go & check on him.

Manik : Kya baat hain Nandu, itni payer kisipe pehle bar aya hain, kya?Itni fikar keu kar rahi ho uss monkey ki?

Nandini : Cabir let's go.


She totally ignored him & this made him more furious. They began to walk towards upstairs & stopped seeing someone.

Nandini : Aiyooo, Shahid kaha hain?

Cabir : Manik tune washroom main saloon lagaya kya? Ander gaya usne Michel Jackson jaise aur bahar aya toh Pitbul Kaise bangaya!!!!!!

Shahid: Main bolta hoon, Jab maine shampoo lagaya tab achanak se mujhe aisa laga ke mera sar per thandi thandi hawa chal raha hain, toh maine rub kiya shampoo ko jor se aur mera haat main uth kar chala aya mera sara hair. Mirror main aapne aapko dekhne ke baad mujhe laga ke main nehi koi buri aatma khari hai.

Manik : Itni time baad tune pehcan liya aapne aapko. Tu sach main buri aatma hain.

Nandini purposely went near shahid & placed her hand on shahid's shoulder & said seductively...

Nandini : Awww, tum Kitne cute lag rahi ho,just like cuppy cake.


Saying this she pulled shahid's cheek & Manik's anger went out of control.


Manik's pov : Huhhh, That shahid ko toh main aise dhulai karunga ke usne mera nandu per line marna bhool jayega. But one second, kya main abhi abhi bola ke she is my nandu. Ohh god am I in love? Kahi payer toh nehi hogaya mujhe.

Manik's self talk disturbed by Cabir's talk.

Cabir : Tu kya soch raha hain bhai?

Manik : Kuch nehi.


Meanwhile shahid was smiling at Nandini & said...


Shahid : Nandu,
"Agar manzil ko pana hai to
honsla sath rakhna
Agar pyaar ko pana hai to
etbaar sath rakhna"


Manik : "Aur agar hamesha muskurana hai to
daant saaf rakhna "

Cabir : Arey waaah manik kya baat hain.

Manik : Shahid tujhe ek baat batana chahta hoon, kya tu mera saath thora side main ayega?

Nandini : Shahid tumhe Jane ki zarurat nehi hain, tum mere saath aao.

Shahid : Manik ji ek baat bolna chahta hoon main aapse,
Tbyt thik nhi thi Tantrik ko dikhaya , usne kaha tum par bhoot ka saya h kisi papi ko dekho thik ho jaoge, aaj sach main aapko dekhne ke baad main acche mahsus...


But he couldn't finish his Word and he fall on the ground, bcoz someone punched him heard on his face.

Nandini : What the Hell, tera himmat kaise hua meri manik ko papi bolne ka Huhhh. Sakal dekha hain aapna, pura ka pura nariyel jaisa lag raha hain tu, maan toh kar rahi hain ki tujhe bhagwan ki name par fod du.


Manik, Cabir & specially shahid was speechless.

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How was the update guysss... Hope uh all have enjoyed them alot... N yeah plss scroll down n read the note below...N sorry in advance...

MUST READ NOTE

Hello guyss... I know uh guyss were waiting for mah updates so I posted 2 parts today... N M really sorry guyss for the news which now am going to give uh all... But I cant help it... So guyss M leaving the forum from today and wont be able to update any of mah stories from now... I wanted to just leave like that but then I thought I would be called a coward for not infroming uh guyss... So thats why I am telling uh this... I dont know that I will be back or not... So plss forgive me... N I love uh guyss... This forum gave me many friends n dida's... N I owe them for this... So sorry for just leaving like that. but I have some personal problems... N yeah M keepjng all mah works for ON HOLD now... So sorry for the inconvinience...

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Hlo dida... No dida m not angry with uh,... Thmkew so mch dida... Aap next comment ki bat kar ei ho dida... Mai pata ni next update kab dungiii... So babyee ... Ot was great to jnow uh dida...

Why are you playing RES games...
Aur why you didn't went for school today??
You okay naa??

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Why are you playing RES games...
Aur why you didn't went for school today??
You okay naa??

dida M all okayyy... Aap chinta mat karo n aaj mai out of town hu esliye school nahi gyiii...

Hey padi what happened baby..

Arrey tiny ab tujhe kyaa hogaya..??

Originally posted by: myruh

Arrey tiny ab tujhe kyaa hogaya..??

Y r u leaving yaar.. Dekh agar tu gai naa toh tiny bulaao aviyaan suru kardungi.. I swear..

Plz yaar aisaa mat kar.. Don't go warnaa main ro dungi..