#2 MaNan SS: ZAHENASEEB [On Hold] reason on pg 123 - Page 9

wow what a date yr.. hotness ki dukan... itnaa intensity ka chapter itne beautiful way me only u can write. .. matlb kya update thaa... ... amazing wat a romantic date.. n manik ka gift. haww .. so naughty. .. . ab dress dekhkr to or excited ho gyi.. ab wait krnaa pdega. update was awesome . I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love to the core. .. Soo .fantastic. ... Keep updating. .. U r such a beautiful writer... Update soon.. Waiting for next update eagerly .. Thanks for this update . Stay blessed. . Love Geet

Super duper awesome

awww sooo romantic... lovely update..loved it

tnx for d pm

It's really hot update
love the dresses
awesome update
nd date is also nice
love the setup
update soon

Awesome update

SUPER👏... SO ROMANTIC

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Thanks for pm..my dear...sister.

Awesome awesome awesome.

It was amazingly beautiful. .😛😳.

The dresses and jewelry. .was very beautiful. 😛.

And all the date set up was awesome. .😳😛.

Their romantic moments was awesome. .

Very real. .😳.👍🏼.

I just loved it when manik say her..jaan. feels so real and awesome😳.

The black nighty was hot..

The date was like everyone's beautiful dream. .😳😛.

You wrote very very beautiful. .

I found it very close to my heart. ..thanks.

You are a awesome writer keep it up. .👍🏼.❤️.

Looking forward to seeing more and more.

Stay blessed and very happy dear..

Thanks.

With lots of love. .❤️.

Your sis..Jyoti.

Originally posted by: manik11

Aaiyappa ye ladki bilkul sharam nahi hai na hahahaha... it was too much hot yaar sexy haaye no words... awsm gift... maa aur bete dono ki soch ek jaisi... poor Nandu... wat a date yaar... it was too romantic... aur update to boss pura hotness ka dukan tha wowww... yaar tumne ek galti ki wo black dress dikha ab to next update k liye wait nahi kar sakti... to tum abhi se likhna chalu kardo... waise ye Malhotra mansion me kya problem hua hai wanna know that tooo... haaye m swetting while reading m to total read yaar kya intensity thi woww... ohh God baby kya kar diya hai tumne now ur punishment next chappy update soon matlab very soon...

Awesome awesome awesome ... All I cAn say fantastic update loved each ND every line ... ... ND plz update next part soon ... M seriously in love with ur story 😛 👏