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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Guys b4 writing this chap i wld agn like to tell u that its real story all the incidents are real that take place bw me nd my best frnd cum boyfrnd
Coming bk to the story i would like u all to cmmnt nd appreciate the story as i m a new writer!
Chapter2
Aftr 5mins at the station
N-yes manik(angrily)
M-lissen till we come..just keep talking to me ovr the phone
N-wat?no..mjhe tmse koi baat nhi krni..bye
M-arre nandini accha baba baat mt kro bs call pr rho kch bolna mt
N-kyuuu?
M-arre pls na
N-fyn(stamps her feet)
Aftr 10-15mins
N-tmlog kb aaoge yrr..im sweating its so hott..
M-ya in 5
After 5mins
Manik sees nandini as usual in shorts nd tshirt..nd shoes..he ran as a cheetAh nd enclosed her in a bone crashing hug forgetting his surroundings and evn the presence of her dad..nandini could feel him crying..
After 5mins manik came back to his senses nd broke the hug..eyes still red.
We came out of the station
N-manik whr is the car
M-ya evn i am looking fr the driver.
N-wt do u mean by u r looking fr the driver..u dnt knw ur car..
Dad- beta calm down
N-arre wt calm down hm chal ke ghr jaayenge?
M-chuppp!
Nandini huffed
M-see there is the car..ab chalo..
During the entire way nandini did nt say anything manik kept on seeing the photos..just thn manik gt a call frm harshad(guys in my story harshad is nt a negative character..bt he is nt entirely positive..you will gt to know as the story proceed)..
M-tumhare liye fn aarha
N-pr ye to tumhare fn pr aaya na..so he must hv to talk to u..
M-pr tumhare liye hai
N-(strange)
She took the call
N-hello
H-wt r u dng with manik at this time nd whr r u?
N-he came to pik me at the station.
Gived bak the phne to manik..
Aftr the call they reach her home
N-bye manik nd pls study..we hv an exam tom
M-tm ho na..
N-manikk
M-okay!
Nandini's dad thanks manik..and goes inside to give the kids sme privacy..nandini also turns to go inside..when manik holds her wrist..
N-kya hua
Manik suddenly hugs her..nandini was taken aback.
M-i missd u so much..
N-evn i missd u..
Manik stood still hugging with his head in the crook of her neck.
N-manikk(lovingly)
Manik reluctantly broke the hug..
M-ok see u tom..umm i will come to pick u up tomorrow fr skl bye..
N-byee nd ya pls study!

Guys i hv my phy exam tom pls wish me luck!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Awesome

Mind blowing



I think harsad nandu ka bro hai



Best of luck for your exam.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Awesome


Mind blowing



I think harsad nandu ka bro hai



Best of luck for your exam.

well ur doubts
will be clarified in the next chap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Awww..
Manik is so sweet...
Loved it...

Al the best for ur exam

Continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Chapter 3
Morning 6am
Phone ring
Nandini lazily opened her eyes
N-yes manik
M-
N-hello..hello
Cut
Nandini pov
Wht yrr itti subah subah uthaya nd mum...kch bol kyu nhi rha..
I woke gt fresh all the time thinking wts wrng wid manik..when i gt ready i calld him nd as soon he pikd d fn
M-u cm down i am reaching in 2
Cut**
N-okay
We wnt to skl.gave the exam manik as usual by cheating frm me..nd me aftr the exam scolding him fr nt studying
M-nandini common i hv u so y shld i study
N-manikkk
Just then our frnds came
Harshad mukti alya navya cabir dhruv and ryan..everyone huggd me..manik was all the way calm till harshad came to hug me..manik was kind of furiously luking at harshad..b4 harshad cud hug me manik intervened in bw
M-nandini i think u must be tired so lets go..guys will catch up later.
After reaching home
Manik huggd me nd kissed my cheek nd hairs bidding bye with the promise of coming later
As soon as i came to my room my fn beepd with a msg frm harshad
H-hey
N-hi
H-u wre luking vry beautiful in that hairstyle nd colour.!
N-thanks
H-i need to talk to u
N-yea
H-not right nw abhi m wid cabir dhruv manik nd ryan
N-ok u enjoy we will talk later
I slept bt nt b4 talking to mukti
After half an hour i woke up due to the constant buzzing of my phone nd who else it could be "manik".. U knw we share some kind of telepathy..i mean the girl jisko alarm bhi nhi sunaayi deta usko vibrating call sunaayi dediya..amazing
N-hmm
M-wt r u dng
N- so rhi hu
M-u wnt smething
N-no..mereko tmse baat krni hai
M-mei tumhare ghr k neeche hu..aao
N-abhi nhi in evening ryt nw i m sleeping
M-aree pr mei niche hi hu
N-manikkk
M- aao na
N-(poker face) fyn..mereko pta hai tm niche nhi ho..to jb aao tb call krdena
M-main 5mins mei aarha
N-hmm call krdena
Aftr exact 5mins
N-aarhi
Nandini goes to open the door nd both of them go to her room
Manik as usual considering her room as his own lies down taking her favourite minion blanket..
N-manikkk(shouts)
M- haa baba i m awake just lying down..accha u wnt to sleep with me in this blanket only..waise i dnt mind u knw..the hottest guy of the schl is at ur home with u alone..
N-manikkk(screams)
M-achha ok kidding baba..ha so lets strt hw was united states..!wt did u do
N-it ws amazing(note-i dnt wnt to narrate it all agn here..srry)
M-accha nw wt did u wntd to tok
N-yes..so manik i hv been told that u are jealous of harshad bcs of me.
M-me?jealous of harshad?bcs of u? Like srsly aisa kb hua nd who told u this
N-harshad told that u said this wen u were at cabir's place..
M-i nvr said so nd srsly why will i!
N-okay manik just ans me one thing
M-hmm
N-a yes or a no..were u hurt wen u came to know that meri harshad se frequently baat ho ti hai
M-i found it weird.
N-manik a yes or a no..
M-(aftr smetime) yes(coldly)
N-okay
M-wt okay wt will u do nw?
N-i wnt talk to him
M-lissen dnt drag urself into it..ua i dnt like when he talks to u bt i dnt wnt to control ur life okay
N-manik ur the most imp person in my life..nd if u r hurt then it hurts me.
M-(smilingly) kisses her cheek
Just than my alarm rang
M-ye sone ka alarm tha ki uthne ka
N-manik sone ka alarm kon lagaata hai
M-nhi kyuki abhi tk tm harshad se baat kr rhi thi na
N-main?
M-hmm
N-manik mei so rhi thi..wen u calld i ws sleeping..haa jb mei ghr aayi to arnd mins meri usse baat hui bt uake baad mukti ka call aaya nd den i slept..and ab mei uthi hu
M-dhruv k ghr pr harshad bahut smile kr rha tha..nd he ws engrossed in his phone to dhruv askd him ki kisse baat kr rha hai..to he rplied ki frm the past 2.5 hrs m talking to nandini!
N-W*F!
M-to vo kisse baat kr rha hai?
N- how do i knw
N-accha lissen
M-haa
N-did u say to harshad that u r nt intrested in talking to me?(hopes that the ans is no)
M-what do u mean by that..u were the one to say so when harshad asked u to talk to me.
N-(confused) bt he nvr askd me infct i told him to ask u to talk to me..nd den he said that he asked nd u said that u r nt interestd!
M-f**k..that means he ws playing with bth of us..nd trying to create a rift!
Nandini pov
I was literally shattered at another revelation..i just wntd to go and slap that douchebag bt ryt nw i wntd my facts cleared
Manik pov
How could he! I mean how could he even try arre try kya how could he even think to create a rift..i swear he has to pay fr this..
N-(shooing me away frm my thoughts) bet ka idea kiska tha abt who knws me well?
M-harshad ka nd i turned it down bcs i knew u wnt like it wen u gt ro knw
N-(god he knws nd cares fr me so much..how could i hurt him)
M- nandini wen did harshad propose u?
N-(confused) when?
M-thats wt i am asking
N-he nvr proposed me
M-u mean to say that u bth r nt in a relationship
N-noo
M-wt is wrng yrr that jerk announced to the whole class that you and him are in a live in relationship
N-(i had facepalmed myself)
Ok guys this chap is really close to my heart this was happend with me..exactly the same thing except fr the fact that names are different..so i wnt u all also my silent readers to appreaciate it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Guys if u all wnt appreciate nd cmmnt then k wnt update the nxt chap!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
wow super
hashard how dare him to play with manan
I hope that your success your exam
plz continu soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Sorry guys i wnt be able to update till monday..chem exam..!
Hope u guys understand
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Just now came across ur story
I luv manik caring and possessive nature
All the best for exam😊
Or next part jaldi jaldi dena😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: ruhimak1

Just now came across ur story

I luv manik caring and possessive nature
All the best for exam😊
Or next part jaldi jaldi dena😃

thanks nd ya i will try to update soon 😊

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