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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 4


Manik's pov

Its 2 weeks i have been following her this is the time she came here but what happen she's late today i hope everything's fine.

I don't know what was happening to me its been days i have been following her when on that day...

FLASHBACK

The day when i came to Shimla for my next movie's shoot. First day itself, that incident that girl was saved by grace of god. But why m thinking so much about her, don't know why but she didn't look like a crew member she shouldn't be here, her appearance she's not meant to be here. My God whats wrong with me m thinking about a girl that to she's a crew member of my film, i have totally lost it. Dhruv is right i guess i m in need of someone but m not that lucky here everyone thinks m d luckiest i have everything what a person dreams of but how wrong they are i don't have anyone beside me who cares for me everyone is selfish when my mom didn't think of me then how can i expect from others who have no relation with me.

I was feeling suffocated its not the first time since childhood m all alone but atleast my music gave me some peace but today music was also unable to calm my nerves. I left d hotel wearing jacket nd cap to cover myself everyone knows me but i didn't even know a person personally whom i claim mine.

To distract my mind from never ending battle i was walking on streets unaware where it goes i was just walking nd walking. I stopped when i saw a girl walking ahead i was facing her back she was wearing a long coat with blue jeans as she took a turn i could see her half face it didn't took a sec i recognised her as everytime since that incident her face her eyes didn't left my mind. Don't know why but i started following her.

She was also lost it seems like she was just walking nd walking. After what like 20 minutes walk she stopped we were not too far from city. She moved towards a hill yeahh..!! It was a hill top where she sat nd i was hiding behind a tree from where i can see her face her eyes were closed Damn She Looks Beautiful, her eyes closed calmness on her face indeed the place was beautiful nd peace that now reflected on her face.

I stood there admiring her for hours while she sat there. My trace broke only when she stood up may be she was returning back but its too late its not safe don't know from where i grew possessive. I followed her till her hotel i guess...yeahh it was a hotel she was staying without letting her know.

This didn't stop here this continued 2weeks i was following her as on 2 day i came there i saw she was there only when weeks passed i didn't realised.

FLASHBACK OVER

Writer's pov

He was being all restless he cancelled his shoot whole week he used to wrap up his shooting by the time not to miss it. Whenever his mind questioned reason why he ends up here on top hides here not coming face to face he shuts his mind coz somewhere his heart knows the reason that empty space in his heart..that loneliness..that craving in heart to have someone besides has somewhat decreased. His mind wasn't ready to accept it.

His trace broke when finally his eyes caught the figure approaching close he had been waiting. But it wasn't same she didn't have the same smile she used to have and was lost in deep thoughts.

He was busy staring keenly when something hit his mind he rushed out of the place he used to hide.

She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realise she had already reached her place where she used to sit but she didn't stop she kept taking slow steps.

She was about to take another step but her foot slipped as she came ahead on hill top nd path wasn't smooth but was having small stones. But she didn't rolled down the hill else she was in strong grip that grip became stronger nd dragged her back to safe area.

Everything was so quick and her mind working too slow today that she didn't realised at first place what's happening to her.

She moved out nd looked up as her mind registered everything but what she saw next shook her.

Firstly she didn't believe it can't be true but then she heard which cleared it was for real

"Hy..have you lost it...were you planning to attempt suicide...are you listening m talking to you." He said taking breaks observing her expression

"N..no m not here to attempt suicide i..i used to sit at this place its pea..peaceful." She couldn't believe her eyes she was shocked but replied as his words processed in her mind

"If you don't mind can i sit here its very peaceful this place is really beautiful Pure Nature."

She was still in shock it's really him or she was dreaming "I think these are side effects of being with Aaru"

While what came next was more shocker to her..her hand was gripped in strong and in next sec she was sitting beside him. Shocked to hell she was staring him "have i lost it" she thought "or he's here no may this is the double role twin or something real The Manik Malhotra never behaves like this.."

He snapped his fingers to gain her attention nd said "M for Real only The Manik Malhotra"

Another shocker of the day its real she instantly replied "tum..??"

Seeing her bulging eyes he said while chuckling his thoughts "Hy..m not a criminal you r reacting like that..m also a being human you know..!!"

Nandini absent mindly "Yeah..i can see that"

There was silence no one said a word after that he was enjoying d view cold weather it was the first time from past week he was having a clear view.

Nandini still unable to digest the truth "what he's doing here.? This is weird than my weirdest dream.!! If everything is true than i guess there's a mistake from God's side he had send me here mistakenly Aaru should have been there. I wonder God seh bhi galtiyaan (mistakes) hoti hai."

"You haven't believed yet.." There he breaks the silence

She replied instantly "No i have.."

"You agree you not believed at first instance" he was enjoying never felt so light

She replied smilingly "I mean The Rockstar sitting beside me talking to me is it believable..?"

"M a human being nd two human being can sit nd talk i guess..?" He was too playing around

Manik's pov

"Yess"she replied laughingly

God her laughs is beautiful than my music. She looks cute when she laughed. I wonder why didn't i did before what i did today i wasted 2 damn weeks. Seems like everything is planned already. I smiled at his thought

We talked for a while whey a ques popped out of her mind

"You're different from what people think" she said looking at me

"Nd what they think.?" I said continuing watching the mountains

"That you're Arrogant Aggressive Egoistic Mean Rude...umm"she said in flow but soon stopped abruptly seeing my expression changing nd realised she spoke too much.

"You think same about me.?" Don't know from where that ques popped out where i should have been angry...here m concerned if she thinks same about me. I was impatiently waiting for her reply

Finally after few min silence she spoke meanwhile my heart broke all records...beating fast

"Umm...mm Actually i didn't knew you nd i don't judge people by hearing others. But today i got to see truth that what others say isn't truth you are not what they say." She went on breaking her shells she spoke freely as i can see it we talked before she wasn't talking freely.

But nxt I don't know what came in her mind she stood up nd said "umm.. M getting late i have to go" nd turned to leave but i too stood up nd said "Its too late come i'll drop you"

She didn't agreed to me but how could i let her go alone so i followed her without letting her know.

Writer's pov : A Week Later
Its been a week they met on this place but today its different.

There was no hesitation today it's absolutely different they were holding on each other as today was finally a day when they both had accepted there hearts saying since they have met was restless and today finally was at peace

Its been an hour to confession and know they were sitting close holding hands silently everything seems perfect.

There trace broke when they heard some noises coming startling them nd they stood up looking from where voices were coming but couldn't find anything.



Hey..!
Hows it?
You guys must be having may ques after reading this lyk Where is d confession part.? How could she accept.? What about Aaru.? Did he know she's faking her identity.? Many more
Everything will be clear in next part i.e. last part of this FS which is going to be super long.
Thanxx for waiting nd bearing me 😃
Keep Loving ❤️
Good night
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
manik following nandini that too 2 weeks

finally he talk to her
seeing her in shock he confirms he is manik wow
superb scene
loved manik nandini convo
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update dear...finally they talked...loved the update...
will be waiting fr next update desperately...
cont. soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. nyc.. so finally they meet and talk..
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
aawsmm...update loved it..
but too confusing
waiting fr nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm update
Loved the caring side of Manik
Eagerly waiting for next update
Tysm for pm
Keep smiling always 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
THERE IS A LOT OF QUESTION...
PLZ NEXT UPDATE ASAP...PLZ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww Amazing part after sooo sooo long yr

Enjoy it to the core yr

Actually confused
Eagerly waiting for next part dear

Do pm me next part pretty pretty please
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Posted: 9 years ago
get well soon ...he is following her ...
when she is shocked he let her know he is manik
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
The update is awesome...amazing ... marvelous...really lovely
Manik was following her and then they talk .. it was nice

Love it

Thanks for the pm

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