*NEW MaNan FF: Perky Lies (Chapter 4 UPDATED PG 17 (16+)

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lorina24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: A12609z
Awwwesomeee

addd more more more n more Manan scenes n less other stuffs and plzzz
addd Manik's POV...n clear everyyy thing...unhone essa kiyu kiaaa...add Manik's char sketch plzzz want to know more...akhir woo dono chahate kyaaa h??? Plzzz UPDATE ASAP

Thank you for the lovely feedback! :)
And yea I have to include the supporting characters, in order to complete the story, but don't worry there will be plent of Manan 😃
Manik's POV will be up pretty soon! Don't worry 😆

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lorina24

@lorina24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: aishapl013
Awesome update loved it 😉but confused about maniks character 😕nandu S character is lovely 😳do continue soon will be eagerly waiting for next update so update soon ⭐️

I hope Manik's character will make sense to you in a few updates!
And thank you for the lovely feedback,

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Princeraj1425

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

I loved this chap so much...
Firstly drunk Nandu hahaha...
Then manik taking care of her... . So cute
And the surprise was awesome it was like cherry on the cake. It was so passionate.
Eagerly waiting for nandu's reaction now ... ...
Update soon.

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lorina24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Princeraj1425
I loved this chap so much...
Firstly drunk Nandu hahaha...
Then manik taking care of her... . So cute
And the surprise was awesome it was like cherry on the cake. It was so passionate.
Eagerly waiting for nandu's reaction now ... ...
Update soon.

Definitely!
Drunk Nandu is a treat to watch, and Manik's reaction is just the perfect thing, always takig care of her and etc..
Nonetheless thank you for loving this chapter

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Well this was definitely hot!
Loved it ^_^
Please pm the updates if u can :)

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vhakkal

@vhakkal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Mind blowing Update..!!..👏

Update next part soon...

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

This was classy loved the surprise at the end and this story gives me the fifty shades feeling..

Totally in love with this story of yours love how you write can't wait to read the next chapter update it soonish..

Love,

Kashmi

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lorina24

@lorina24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
This was classy loved the surprise at the end and this story gives me the fifty shades feeling..
Totally in love with this story of yours love how you write can't wait to read the next chapter update it soonish..

Love,
Kashmi

You're soo sweet, thank you very much dear 😃
I appreciatw your lovely comments and love, I'm more then happy since
50 shades of Grey is a sensual story and so is this FF

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lorina24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: payal94
Nice update

Thank you! 😃

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: lorina24

You're soo sweet, thank you very much dear 😃
I appreciatw your lovely comments and love, I'm more then happy since
50 shades of Grey is a sensual story and so is this FF

Your story sounds equally promising like 50 shades rather more than that I'd say I wait for Manik and Nandini's romance to unfold they have always been passionate and I can't seem to imagine them otherwise.. Atleast Manik has been the passionate lover sweet and cutie heart isn't Manik and you're living up to that trace of his character kudos girl way to go.. 😊

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