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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mene stories read karliya OS 5-6 read kiya n Unexpected n my fake wedding full read kiya n it's story lines r awesome ...but ye sab avi avi track p aya h n Dark Mature nehi tha sooo story progress k sath sare dark ness bahar ayega...sooo m waiting for that...but plzzz want Manik little bit grey plzzz...update next part ASAP plzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kya tum reader k request se ek new story likhogi?????????
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Loved the update..She didn't even realize that she is standing naked in front of a stranger lmaooo..I love this clumsy nandu ;)

P.S. The FB link is not working :/ It says that the content is currently unavailable
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Posted: 9 years ago
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here is the update...! i posted the chapter and characteristic too... So u might be not confused later.




Strictly Out of Bounds

chapter-2

Nandini's pov:


how dare he..! I already paid.. and now someone is saying... Move out from here..! No Way.

for now I have no place to stay.. and I worked hard for to pay this rent.. there is no way that he is going to make me move from here.

I was leaving then suddenly I noticed some rose petals r fallen...huh

then I remember his words..

"Please take the rose with you when you move out..?"

I boiled with anger...i was about going to burst out my anger to him.. but I interrupted by Navya.

"Nanduu.."

"Why are you only here now..?" I snapped at her.

"ah.. you don't look too happy.. Beside u told me to come..whats happened that made ur mood so bad..?" Navya asked.

crap.. !
I burst my anger to Navya.

"whatever happened just then, I cant explain it to you right now... so when we finished our office our.. I will slowly tell you everything. That's it for now.. we have to go." I took deep breath and said.

Navya shook her head positively.. that she agreed.
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Manik's pov:


that girl is really clumsy..! she cant even clear the house properly..! oh god.. I have to clean my house...

I took her towel from dining table and her cloth and put that in the dustbin.

then I was about clear the mess from dining table then I noticed it...

a table..! my childhood memories..

I went to touch the table... and open the drawer.. then I saw it.. my art.. I draw a family portrait there.. mom, dad and me..! I smiled a little.

then a memory came..

---------------------------flashback----------


"Manik.."

"Daddy.."

"what are u doing.." dad came to me..

"oh I m drawing our family portrait." I said happily

"really.. u r so talented..! but who is this..?" dad asked

"Mom.." I replied.

"and this one..?" dad again asked

"Daddy.." I answered.
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(another memory came to him)

"Happy birthday to you.."

"happy birthday to you.."

"Happy birthday to Manik.."

"lets cut the cake .." mom said

"daddy is giving this to you..." dad said.

"yay.. a new desk..." I said happily.

"did u like it.." dad said.

"yeah."

"okay open it up to have a look.." dad said.

then I opened it up..and saw the picture I draw that day is painted on the drawer...

"this is the family portrait I drew..!" I said happily..

"Thanks daddy.."


---------------------------flashback end---------------

I was 5 at that time... it was one of the best memory I had..

I stare at the whole house... My house...! Everything is the same.. but.. a some part is missing from there...! Love.. care... MOM..!

I sighed.! I really come back.. here..!

I took my bag and open a file..

"Gaze Ltd. Sale contract" written on the paper.

okay.. I will take care of this matter later.. 1st I have to take a charge on my company.

then I left from my house.
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(In office): narrator's pov:


after reaching the office nandini greeted everyone. Then step into the elevator.

and murmured, "it is all because of that demon... I m late for my work." then she look at her watch nd said, "Good thing I still I have time.."


nandini greeted her colleagues then she noticed Aliya Stood in the front of notice board. Then she slowly went nd shouted "Good Morning..!"

Its like Aliya get a heart attack.

you r so annoying.." Aliya said and navya laughed. "Aliya I thought u already used to that type behavior from Nandu." Navya teased.

"hahaha.. not funny.." Aliya said.

"okay... I wont do it..! So Dhruv is here..?" Nandu asked playfully.

"Um they r all here I was scared that u were going to be late." Aliya said.

"uh.. when was about to leave, I met this demon." Nandini said irritatingly.

"What demon..?" Aliya asked.

"Its that... Anyway he was an irritating person. Lets stop talking and go inside now.. why r u waiting for.. its ur day..!" Nandini said... and pushed Aliya forward.

"Nandini.. don't push her.. she is nervous." Navya said.

"That's y I am pushing na.." Nandini said.


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I think that's enough for today... my mid term exam is running.. nd maybe I cant post...very soon.!
hope u like it..! give me feedback guys.




Characteristic:


Nandini Murthy: clumsy and cute bubbly girl.

Manik Malhotra: Cold Hearted person. Emotionally weak but doesn't want to show it.

Ira Mathur: manik's ex lover.

Aryaman Khurana: a play boy.. and manik's friend come rival. He is really a sarcastic person.

Cabir Dhawan: Cafe owner and manik and Aryaman's best friend.

Navya Naveli: Nandini's best friend. And they r working in same office.

Dhruv Vedant: Nandini's colleague and Aliya's bf

Aliya Saxena: Nandini's best friend and Dhruv's gf

Mukti Vardhan: Nandini's colleague. She is blonde.. might be known as gold digger.. but.. she has a soft heart only one person recognized that.

Abhimanyu Thakkar: Nandini's colleague.

Madhyam Singhania: Ira's lover.

Mehul Malhotra : manik's dad

Nyonika Malhotra: Manik's Mom

*** if any new character will include for situation I will tell.



Edited by nur.dola - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manik nandini kyy mein maine request bheja hain wohi gurop par apki story hain na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
SORRY..
I want to post badly. But some sites are banned to my country for some reason. Facebook Instagram, and india forum and so many sites are banned from some little problem. And I couldn't open this site. That's why I couldn't post earlier. Now its opened.. and the problem is solved. There was some wrong programming on the data. That's why the sites are banned. But now its solved. I will post from now. Hope you will understand my reason .. !

thanks for giving me your love. and i transformed my sign nur.dola to death_angel00.



Strictly Out of Bounds

chapter-3



"It's that... Anyway he was an irritating person. Let's stop talking and go inside now.. why r u waiting for.. its your day..!" Nandini said... and pushed Aliya forward.

"Nandini.. don't push her.. she is nervous." Navya said.

"That's y I am pushing na.." Nandini said.

"oh Nandiniii.. you are acting nervous more than me." Aliya said.

"well I'm not nervous.. by the way you shouldn't feel nervous. Instead you should be happy." Nandini said.

"yeah, there's going to be a romantic show at this office soon. You should be happy Aliya." Navya agreed.

"Where is Dhruv..?" Nandini asked

"He is decorating the trade wall." Ayesha said quickly.

"Decorating What..?" Mukti, a blonde lady asked.

"Of course it's the proposal venue." Nandini replied excitedly.

Mukti turned around about to leave... nandini blocked her.

"Hey Mukti, where are you going..?"

"the trade wall." Mukti replied.

"Then wait, we'll go with Aliya." Nandini said.

"Okay." Mukti shrugged her shoulder.

By the way, you are so lucky.. Dhruv is so romantic." Nandini said that with a dreamy eyes.

"Nandini.. come back from your la la land..!" Navya teased her.

"huh... um.. yeah.."

everyone is laughing.

"what..? I was just saying. She is lucky. Um Aliya.. I want to see your notebook again. It's so romantic.." Nandini said.

"A dairy is romantic..!! how Nandini..?" Mukti sarcastically asked her.

"She wrote every details about her and dhruv encounter in past.. and her future plan with him.! I found it cute and romantic." Nandini replied innocently.

"yeah I everything is going by my plans... I m so lucky..!" Aliya said dreamily.

Everyone smiled approvingly to her.

"Aliya, what would you do if it didn't go by your plans.?' Mukti asked suddenly.

Aliya thought.. then replied, It's not what if it didn't go by my plans, instead I would make my plans come true."

"yeah because she is the queen of plans." Ayesha said.

hm.. life should have some plan. Then we can achieve each goal step by step." Here comes the lecture. Yeah Aliya love to lecture about life.

"hmm. And the first step is a proposal." Mukti said playfully.

then everyone chorus .."propose, propose, propose..."

Aliya blushed and said, "Don't be like this."
but they didn't stop teasing her..

"sshh.. please stop.." Aliya pleading.


(other side):


Dhruv decorating the room... His co-worker Abhimanyu and Harshad helping him. On the wall they wrote beautifully.

"WILL U MARRY ME, ALIYA.?"

Dhruv place the small velvet box on the table beside the cake. He is also nervous.. anyone can see that. After dating for 3 years, he is finally going to propose her.

"Man don't be nervous okay.? Chill like me.. if she doesn't agree then you can propose to another girl." Harshad said.

Dhruv glare at him..

"Harshad, are you encouraging him or something else.?" Abhimanyu said in a serious tone.

"Oh I just want to make him feel good." Harshad said in low tone.


"yeah but your encouraging words are not that much helping." Dhruv said firmly.

"oh you know I don't know how to cheer up people's mind." Harshad said "But bro don't worry she will say yes." Harshad added excitedly.

"yeah yeah... " Dhruv response.

"Office romance.. seeing each other at work and at home. After 3 years, even you're not sick of each other...I thought you would be looking for a separate ways." Harshad again said wrong words. Doesn't know what to talk in serious situation.

"Manager Harshad, Don't be sour with your words. You should improve your sense of talking." Abhimanyu said in a hard tone.

Harshad lower his head... "oh seriously I need to improve my sense of talking." murmured slowly.
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when everyone busy with their surrounding then a delivery boy came..

"please sign the delivery"

"here" Ayesha signed the paper.

"thank you."

"thank you."

Ayesha read..

"CEO"

Everyone attention is now on Ayesha.

"What CEO.?

"the new CEO.. idiot." Aliya said.

"oh.." everyone responds.

"Yeah I heard that.. this company is brought by a young boss." Aliya said

"I heard the new CEO is coming but didn't know that he is young." Mukti said.

"He won't be coming to work today.. right.?" Ayesha is scared.

"It hasn't been a few days that we were having good days." Nandini said dully.

"ah new young boss." Mukti is excited.


"Please Complete This Within TODAY." Ayesha read .. it's a small envelope with the things.

"What is it now.?" Nandini asked.


Ayesha opened the letter...

"this is... huh what is this..?" everyone asked in unison.

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Nandini's pov:


so everyone is curious to know about that letter, right.?

Well that's a paper only.. Where the new boss instructed them how to arranged his office room.
He gave all the measurement and cleaning idea on the paper. And instructed that to follow the every details.

I mean seriously.. is the person a machine or something.

It's so irritating.

right now. We are busy doing his stupid demand.

Ayesha arranging the shelves and me and Aliya arranging his table. I mean seriously. I'm tired now.

"5 cm.. 16 cm.." Ayesha murmured the measurement.

My new boss... wait why I'm saying my boss.. Our boss.. he instructed us.. book should be positioned in 5 cm distance from the edge of selves. God he is a maniac.



"book should be positioned to the order. And needs an angle. I think this new boss... must be really picky." I said.

"the new boss.. must be a detailed person and I'm guessing he's a young handsome guy." Mukti said.
we stare at her.

then I noticed it's nearly 9am

"hey watch the time."

let's quickly go to the trading hall to witness the moment of love." I said.
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everyone went for trade wall.. I came back to collect a gift for the couple...

then Ayesha came.

"what are you doing.?" She asked.

"gift.. I left it here." I said.

oh ok now you have it na...lets go." She dragged me.

we are running to the lift but suddenly lift open and...

"You." I shouted.

"what are you doing here..?" I asked.

He looked at me up and down...

"Nandini, this is... Do you know him..?" Ayesha asked.

"The one I told about. The demon I met at home." I said.

"Really.?? And he's coming here.?" she asked. "so strange." She added.

yeah.. Are you following me..?" I asked him firmly.

he doesn't reply and turned around to go to the other side.

"Hey.. Don't tell me, the other than buying the house, you've also bought this company." I said mockingly.

he turned around and giving me a smile.. a mocking smile. I slowly hide behind Ayesha..

"Ayesha, don't worry about him. We'll get the security to take him away." With that we ran away.
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Trade wall: (where the all notice was hanging on the board.):

everyone shouted..

"marry him.. marry him... marry him..."

yes he proposed to Aliya. That was a so cute moment.

She nodded her head.

Dhruv hold her hand and about to put ring on her finger then..

he came and pin a notice to the wall.
our eyes widened to see the the notice. Harshad went near and started to read..

"To Increase The Work Efficiency, No Workers Are Allowed To Develop Any Office Romance. If Anyone Break The Rule, They Will Be Fired Immediately."

CEO, Manik Malhotra.

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I m sorry for taking a lot of time to post.. but as I said before. In my country.. some sites were banned.. so I couldn't update. The site is opened recently and here I came to post.. and from now I will try to post soon. But. Cant promise cause.. my xm is knocking the door.
Edited by nur.dola - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This looks like fun start
Let's see what mode is to come
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