#2 Tum Hi Ho - manan ff (imp. Note pg-136)thread 3 pg-1 - Page 45

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww awesome update Dr...
Manan was so cute. ..
Manan was so happy to see mukti baby...
Nandu was so sad of all happenings.
Hehehehhe manik malhotra was afraid of dogs...
So the revelation of the twists is cmng cool dr..
Thanks for the pm dr..
Waiting for the next update eagerly dr...
Always stay blessed nd happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bt h kn aisa jo manan ko separate krna chahta h??
Manik se badla lena chahta h by keeping the lyf away 4rm her or nandini se badla lena chahta h bcoz dat person might b girl n might obsessed wid him...
Update soon...
Sry 4 late cmnt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Updates dear
Sorry for not commenting so long
manan scene is really beautiful
Ab ye kon hai jo nandu ko pareshan kar raha hai?
please revel the truth jaldi
Update soon
Thanks for the pm
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear sry for comenting late update was good i think may be cavya are there in this or that adi pls revel it soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update .. Thanks for the update and pm.. Suspense is killing me now .. Waiting for the next part to see who is behind this.. Hopefully MaNan will survive this storm auccessfully.. Loved cute MaNan moment ..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonu137

Heyy

Thanks for pm
Nice update
Manan moments were as usual cute
Finally manik and nandini met Mukti's baby
But who is doing all this
Waiting for next
😊

thamx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manikmalhotra2

its awesome...amazing... marvellous ... fabulous ... fantastic

Mukthi gives birth to a baby girl ... awww ... and their scenes are so amazing

Someone is really playing with Nanidni's mind ... i think it may be Adi ... and its really good to see that Manik is there with her

their scenes are awesome ...amazing

Love it

thanks for the pm

thamxk u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Superb Updates dear
Sorry for not commenting so long
manan scene is really beautiful
Ab ye kon hai jo nandu ko pareshan kar raha hai?
please revel the truth jaldi
Update soon
Thanks for the pm
Take care dear😊

thanx
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Tum Hi Ho

Part : 94

Manik turns n hold nandini face n say " nandini... " n nandini shivering n says " manik... thank god u okay " manik says "nandini... relax n tell me clearly wht happen " n nandini say pointing towards the pool " manik... somebody wants to kill u vha... see pool main wires hai " manik says " nandini relax vha kuch nhi hai " nandini says "u don't trust me na so come with me " she take him to the washroom n see that nthng written on mirror n than she says " manik abhi iss mirror blood se likha tha that "n manik cuts her word in b/w n holding her face says " nandini... first u calm down n come " n nandini about to say something but manik stops her n hold her back n hand n make her to come outside n thinking " nandini u don't need to be show any proof i know someone wants to harm u not me n main bhut jld sb thik kr dunga "n he make her sit on bed n put pillow on her back n give water to her n nandini is lost in thought n that voice is again n again disturbing her
Manik bend down n hold her hand n nandini didn't response n manik put one hand on nandini face n say " nandini... "n nandini back into her senses n sees him with her eyes that are filled with tear n manik says "nandini... u don't need to be worry i can't see u like this " n nandini crys n say manik... why...
Always this happen why we can't remain happy " manik put his figner on her lips n say " sh..." n he touch his forehead wid her n both close their eyes n lost in eachother

After sometime

Nandini is sleeping n manik is busy in giving instruction to someone n than door bell rangs n manik sees it's mukti n he goes to her

Mukti : hi manik

N manik take pari from her hand n say "hi baby howz u"

N they sit on couch n mukti take pari n make her sleep
Mukti : manik... itna sb hogya tum dono ke sth aur tum done humhai kuch nhi btaya
Nandini kaisi hai

Manik : she is not f9 mukti
Thik bhi kaise hogi somebody is playing wid her mind
Maine tumhai yha isliye bulaya taki nandini feel relax wid pari
Mukti : wht's the plan

N manik tell the plan to mukti n than nandini comes outside the room saying manik name n than she see mukti n says "mukti... "

Mukti : i was feeling bore in home so i came here
Manik : nandini... tum kb uthi

Nandini : just abhi

N nandini goes to pari n touch her face n say " howz my pari "

Mukti says " last night isne kisko nhi sone diya
Kept crying whole night n main toh yeh soch how u n manik will handle to 2 child "

N manik n nandini smiles

Nandini : mukti come in room pari can sleep comfortably there

N they go inside the room n talks for sometime n manik say "sorry guyz i have to attend one vedio conference so u keep talking"

Manik go to pool site taking laptop wid him n thinks now it's time to check wht happening in house

N he sits there n kept the laptop n watching the every corner of house wht's happeing n he thinks come on koe toh kuch karo N he sees someone in kitchen doing some thing n he pose the vedio n zoom that n his got shock to see that n he get up n thinks " i will not leave him " n he immiadiatly goes back in room n see nandini is not there n mukti is sitting with baby

Manik : mukti where is nandini

Mukti : manik... kya hua sb thik nandini goes to kitchen for bringing ...
N without listenig her sentence manik immidaitly rushes to the kitchen
N mukti says " manik... "
She take the baby n come outside

N manik sees nandini is about burn the strove n manik stops her n open the window of kitchen
N hug nandini n say " r u okay na " n nandini says slowly "manik... " n manik break the hug n touch her hand n face n again hug her

Nandini says " manik... kya hua i m f9 "

Manik break the hug
Nandini : manik...

Manik : nandini i know wht u want to ask

N mukti also come there n they all go to room n after sometime they came outside n manik is looking very angry n calls every servant of the house
N they stand straight

N manik shouts on them that i m giving a last waring jisne bhi yeh sb kiya voh apne aap bhr ajae vrna agr main uska naam liya toh acha nhi hoga n nandini mukti standing there wid him

Mukti : manik yeh log aise nhi bolenge

N manik goes to everyone n hold someone collar n drag him forward n puch him n he fallen on ground

N man get up fold her hand in front of nandini n say "mujhe maaf kardo yeh sb krna meri majbori thi " n nandini get emotional by seeing this n mukti hold nandini

N manik again took him n beat him n say "how dare u to that "

N the man again n again saying yeh sb meri majbori thi maine kuch nhi kiya
Manik holding his collar says " stop lying otherwise i will kill u "
Servant : sir main sach bol rha hn

N manik again try to puch him again n nandini shout kiskne krvya yeh sb

Manik stops n sees at nandini n she coming toward him n nandini says " manik... yeh sb iske akele km nhi ho skta yeh sach bol rha hai "

Mukti :i also think that manik yeh sb ek nokr nhi kr skta

Manik again hold her shoulder n ask him " kon hai in sb ke piche "

Servant : mujhe nhi pta bs mujhe call ata tha kiska
Phle toh voh mam ko pagal shabit krna chte thai
Lekin fir in sb se kuch nhi hua toh they ordered me to kill nandini mam

manik nandini n mukti all of them shocked to hear this n manik again punch him n say " how dare u to dat " n ask him to call on that no. N he calls on dat no. But it's coming switched off n police came n take servant wid him

N after sometime nandini is sitting n tear of her r not stopping n manik sitting wid her holding her hand n nandini resting her head on manik chest n nandini says after sometime " manik yeh sb kon kr skta hai "
Manik says " nandini... i know ki yeh sb kiskne kiya hai "
Nandini puts her above from her chest n say shockingly " pta hai.. kon hai voh "
Manik says slowly voh nurse n nandini says " nurse... ?" N manik tell about that day to nandini n nandini says "manik.. why didn't u tell me "n manik says " i don't want to disturb u itne dino ke bd sb thik hua tha " nandini says " but manik howz dat nurse n manik says " maine jb ushai first time dekha tha mujhe lga maine ushai phle khi dekh rkha aur main hr time bs yhi sochta tha ki voh kon hai aur mujhe ab yd aya ki voh kon hai
Jb tum 2 sal tk mere sth nhi toh main uhse london main mila tha n nandini says " kon thi voh"

Full suspense will be relvealed soon wait for next part
Hope that u guyz like this part if u like this than plz do comment because comment encourage me to write the story more beautifully
Stay blessed
Love Mehak




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