#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153 - Page 64

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg!

Kya story hai yaar!

Loved the way u progressed it...the morning romance, nandu getting hurt, manik's explanation...of him not wanting her to work with steve...awww

plzzz update sooon n give a longg promo :p

asking for too much but hugeee fan!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
how happy nandini was before pesentation n after dat her hope got ruined
I know their must be sum kind of misunderstanding between them
but still manik shouldn't do that
waitng 4 nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gud update...BT manik's bhvr...is sooo disgustng...poor nanadini
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Posted: 9 years ago
This update was like- frm smiling/blush face to angry/painful one
morning was so sweet n romantic !
N den manik .. how gnda.. he stole her presentation!
Yes i want to kill him... like aise kaise!

N nandu's reaction was so apt... anyone wud think he did all dis so that he cud steal her designs..huh
let manik suffer 😡 😡
btw awesome update! I never find any of ur updates long 😆
take care
shruthi
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was awesome... eagerly waiting for the next update. . 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww poor nandini.. felt bad for her... but d update was amazing. . loved it... plzz post next part sooonnn..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update. Loved it. Great job. Update soon. I thought things were finally looking up for MaNan but then Manik had to go and ruin it. Hope MaNan work things out soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
What the bloody f**k is wrong with Manik ? Has he gone nuts or something ? Matha thik ase toh ? Naki or brain shokale washroom e flush kore die ashche ? I just want to kill him..i literally want to rip his throat off ! Mon chachche kan ta tene dhore chire dei ! I hate him ! I hate him ! I hate him ! I was literally boiling in anger after reading the last parts ! If i was in Nandini's place na..i would have slapped him hard ! Amr literally rage matha kharap hoe jachchilo ! He should be punished by my Kaddu with her study scale !
How can Manik be this much stupid idiot and moron ? Wth is wrong with Manik ! I am so so angry on him !
Ok i get it that he did all of this so that Nandini doesnt need to work with that flirt..n i can nvr blv he would do this out of jealousy bcz he loves Nandun.but in this way ? Seriously ? Didnt he know or hadnt he thought of the consequences after that ? Well after all Manik Malhotra never thinks ! These thoughts never cross his mind that..how much humiliated insulted Nandini would be ..that she would be called as a spy n a betrayer ? That she would loose her job n effect her career ? Chagol goru gadha ram bolod akta ! Manik akta pig ! Ufff ! Uff ! I want to kill him api !
Iccha krtse oke lobon morich die mishai veje dal die vat die kheye feli ! Uff ! Uff !
U know if Manik had done this so that Nandu comes back n works at Aura..then he is highly mistaken ! Bcz as far as you have shown Nandini..she is a girl with self respect ! She would never do that !
U know..its just that Manik is utterly stupid n.idiot ! He didnt do this to win the project or to be superior than Nandini but just bcz she doesnt get to work with that leech ! But in this way ! This guy has got no brains at all !
R shobche beshi majaj ta kharap hochchilo when he was giving her wicked n victorious smile n ofcourse that innocent face as if he had done nothing ! R amon vab dekhachilo as if nothing big hapnd ! And this seems like a mole to him ? Like seriously !
All i could say is he is going to have a hard time to convince Nandu ! To be honest ..right now i feel like he should be never forgiven..
I want to cry ! Y did he do that ! Nandu is so hurt !
And api..all this gussa is only on Manik ! Not on u api ! I toh have got so much love for u na ! Sorry for nagging ! But i seriously love u for giving this lamba update !
All the love for u !
Edited by FarhinLamisa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
its beyond awesome..
I kind of knew from the ppt point..that manik might have done this ...not wanting nandu to work with steve😆
m not angry on him..he is always like this only..apna stupid baba..
anyways u r amazing writer..kya update thi re..loved it..
I glad that nandu told him ..she thought to give them a second chance..
so our manik baba might get some senses what had he lost ..
update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesum awesum awesum




i lovd it 2 d core



ur update b4 sunday was just lyk me dating parth😛




bt i lovd d suprse


2oo gud chappie!!!!!!!!!


i wish it didnt end




cnt wait yaaar


updte soon


asap


waiting...

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