#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153 - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago
woww.. this is soo long update. I just love this. . this update is fab... I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love to the core. .. Soo .fantastic. ... ... Thiss is whole long update. . ohhh manik is such a tease yr... n poor nandu she is already loosing it badly.. n manik mje le raha h... ohhh manini she is soo cute n adorable. . feeling like eating her.. n her language is soo cutee.. hayeee mar jawa. she is such a adorable. she is januable... manini in manik's shirt. . haww. she is such a jana. or manik ko aas pass dekh kr. to manino k nakhre to dekho... n manik phir se tease. bad thing manik. poor nandu... ohhh... n manik ne kitchen ki kyaa halat bnaa di... hahahaha... finally manini k wish sb same bad pr so rahe h. .. ought.. manik is ...naughty. . n ye rewa iska kuch kro yar.. but update was fab. amazing. . hatss of.. a big clappings. keep updating. . waiting for next update eagerly impatiently update. .. update soon. . thanksss for this beautiful update. Stay blessed. Love Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww!...family times!!...chapter actually justified it!!... bt i dnt understand y manik still supports rewa!!!...anyway loved your update!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear that was awesome update mannie is such a cutipie and manik cooking skills are hilirous and jelous nandu always treat to read and the morning scene was awesome pls countinue soon next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sumana di!!! No pm? Even i sent buddy request

"De..dek..dekho..main..chill..chillaungi', I threatened him fighting to blurt words out of my mouth
( sersly and even manik replied like a serial villian... Damn!)

I stared at him like a fool; it was long since I had seen him laughing like that. He looked adorably cute as cute as his daughter.
( so true:D his smile<3<3<3)

Shit!!! Since when is she here", I whispered softy looking at Manik. It was grossly embarrassing to be caught in such a comprising position with your husband in front of your four year old daughter.
"Princess what are you doing??", Manik asked still binding me in his grip.
( shit manik! What a scene it would be surely tooo embaressing...)
"You are right baby Mommy wants to do nau nau with Daddy but you see Daddy is too busy with his princess now", he winked at me smiling mischievously.
"Hawww shammy shammy", Manini lips coiled into an O and she covered her mouth with both her hands.
( ohky! I accept... I was wrong in earlier part... This one is highly embaressing... Dharti phate and woh usmein sama jaye types... Hehehehe)

Hehehehe... Seeing the condition of the kitchen apne din yaad agaye!!!! Hayeee... Woh bhi kya din thy jab hume kitchen disaster se taj poshi ki jati thi...hehehehehe

"How does this damn thing work?", he muttered unmindfully while randomly poking the buttons of the oven as if he was playing video game with it.
( sumana di! Dekho he is not to be blamed... Its nit even his work to cook and he has never cooked also... I can seriously imagine this manik! Comeon its a cute gesture at least ge trued but isska try is gonna be soo disasterous for nandini)

"Baby watch your Mom..don't let her get down...and you, I know you are jealous of my skills but I wont let you spoil it tonight just wait and watch", while I rolled my eyes at his over confidence the father daughter gave a hi five to each other and he flocked to the kitchen once again.
( mtlb itna self obsessed... Facepalm)
Hurryyy finally family cooking time!!!!!!
I gaped at him while he made attempts of putting the vegetables in the hot frying pan, everytime he put a few slices the boiling oil spluttered and he jumped like a frog. It was hilarious to see Mr. Manik Malhotra the MD of AURA struggle with cooking.
( rolf... And addition to it when ever he jumps he looks back at the frying pan muttering curses to it under his breath as if frying pan was the biggest enemy in the world... Damn! Adorable frown)
Manik and I could just snigger at her frolics and she gleed more looking at us. I saw Manik admiring Manini in his clothes. He so missed these moments with her. At times I felt guilty of depriving him but the next moment he did something that made me want to hit him.
( hmm... Feeling sad for manik... All these make me curious what actually caused them to part their ways!)
Shit! Jelo nandini... No correction jelo manini was fun to watch... Manik!!! Urgghhh can i hit u hard!!! Hiw can u be so dumb at times.
"No..no..no...its okay say..yeah I know Rewa you were not at fault..you don't have to apologise in fact Nandini is sorry for her behaviour", he looked at me and I responded clenching my jaws together and sniffling my nostrils, "yes she said sorry..actually she wanted to apologise to you directly but then I stopped her", Manik pursed his lips while blurting the lines. He had flared my annoyance to the last limit. I took the cushion and threw at him and he dodged like an expert.
( dafaq was that!!!! Urggghhh manik! Like what a tease it wad but i m afraid of after effects of this on rewa and Nandini... Damn! But it will be fun reading that too)
Ohky suddenly calm and composed manik... Strange!!!
ouldn't, I felt a heavy weight around my tummy. Something was binding me. I quickly removed the blanket to find Manik underneath, his face was shoved by my waist side and his arm was my tummy. I gasped to realize that his hand was conveniently or should I say rightfully inside my top god knows trying to find
( diii he was on a treasure hunt!!!! Hehehehhee!!! AND THIS WAS REALLY NOT A MOMENT TO STOP THE UPDATEE!!!!!!!!)
Keep writing
Keep shining
Stay happy stay blessed
Mishshergill



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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... Nuce update. ..
Actually awesome.. . 😉
Update soon.. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sooo...Cuteee Chapter...dear...u r d best...as always...in giving grinning humour...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww.. Soo cute..
Loved their family time a lot..
Manini is soo cute...
U made me laugh a lot..
Update soon
N ya pls update lips do lie
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Posted: 9 years ago
No one in the world can manage the 'tantrum queen' Nandini like our very own Manik Manlhotra .
Her mood , behaviour and 'nakhras' ! Uff .<3 Manik really loves het a lot . Still


I loved this update
And that little kid is adorably cute :)

My favourite part was when Nandini started crying when Manini wasn't listening to her.
And when she snapped at Manik after he finished talking to Rewa .
Oh My ! Possessive much ?!
Hahah

This was too good .
-God bless
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow superb fantastic fabulous update

Loved teasing manik as he missed that to do with her

Jealous Nandu and daughter too cute cant able to share their love with anyone else

Women intuition is stronger when she see another woman trying to hover over her man

How come he will sleep alone when they are in same house

He wouldn't miss a chance not to hold her and feel her warmth

Continue soon and waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
Haha! So Goood!
Manini is one hell of a cute creature!
And our very own MaNan kya bat h :3
They know they cant stay without each other then why :/

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