#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153 - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi girls...
This was amazing...
You have really got a nice story...
It's indeed very grasping story...
It's also funny...
I can feel Mana very well...
Please don't Chuck out this story...
Continue..
Egarly waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Only some words I LOVED IT is needed

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey it was too good and funny..hehehhe manik and his sarcasm good...
and then jealous manik hahahha..
manini is sweet but she very well knows how to get her work done..
nandini and her stilettos ufff... and a big sorrry for underestimating your writing in the beginning of the story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooow awesome update
I love jealous manik. Oh ghosh yeh dono kitna larte hai. Manik lunch krha tha ya use Jung krha tha itna gussa. Nandu bhi kum nhi hai use pata ko kaise pareshan krna hai. Chala laga li nandu ne chot khud jo kitna pareshan huta hai manik use pain mai dekh kr. Wooow manik ki mom bhi puri drame baz hai acha dialogue mara unhu ne. Yaaay manini baby I love u bachaaa kitni intelligent baby hai dady ko rook hi lia usne. Ahemmm yeh kya hurha hai manik n nandini same room mai.
Eagerly waiting for next update
Baby u rock
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ty for d pm...
Woh dat was an awesome update...
loved d update to d core...
hehe loved jealous manik...so cute...
loved d part wer nandu got hurt n manik came der...
hehe cute manan car scene...
awww such a cute family...
Loved d part wer manik's mom was wantingly saying all dat...
yay manan together after so long...
so can't wait for d nxt update...
plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nooo... don't take break pls 😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved it this Ex's war...and the way to wrote it

now this one is the awaited update
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMGGG😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 Cliff hanger!!!!! yaar you are the queen of cliff hanger ... Through your amazing writing you captivates us .. how you manage to do so.. i wonder sometimes.

i loved the whole chapter starting from Manik's tease abt Nandu's high heel.. the way you describe the scene.. i felt like i am actually watching that particularly Manik's smirk.. 😆😆😆😆

Nandu's assistance.. lol ohh goshh. hilarious...

I love Manini too.. may i suggest.. you should put a pic of a kid that would just give us the reader a glimpse of her ...

I also loved Nyo's character here .. i mean not the regular vamp.. thank god for that.. and i her tactics of having Manik staying at night.. wayy to goo..

I would die if you wont update sooner yaaar.. Humme aur tarsao maat!!!!

Regarding your spirit.. all i can say is we the readers always hope and wish you will feel loved and inspired because we all love you and your work. I am with you that watching Manan now a days is not inspiring rather discouraging (for me personally). The magic of Manan is long lost.. and the writers need you.. suna tumne.. you and your writing to have the magic back.. did you hear all the immature stupid si dialogues..

I am sorry when Niti said that drunk Nandu was he surprise.. i personally thought it was the biggest joke on KYY bc all the creatives, cast, Channel and NIti (even though i am her fan ) should go back and watch S 1's Drunk Nandu and Manik.. like oi wanted the slapped the creatives so hard and say.. is this why we trened day and night to get our Manan back.. when Manan was on Scrreen, my technological devises used be on FIREEE😡😡😡😡😡.. Kamino.. Abb fire to durr ki baat hain.. Chingari vi nehi lagti..

Please Please Please Please i beg you send karishma some ideas and remind her the essense of Manik and nandini.. she has lost it in her other jobs i guess!!!

Sorry if i offended anyone..

I am a disheartened Manan fan.. who feels cheated and betrayed that a beautiful story was destroyed piece by piece
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awesome blossom i so miss dese manan kinda thing in d show thank u fr keeping d charm of manan alive ..great update keep writing much love
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Posted: 9 years ago
I always enjoy reading ur updates
Manini is so adorable n her sweet toddler accent I just can't get enough of it...n she knows that manik can do anything for her
I thank u...coz I'm getting what I wanted to see n can u pls get us some romantic moments between manan n manini disturbing them

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