#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153 - Page 105

Wow super duper update

Awesome chapter ... U r such a great writer ... That I can actually visualize every scene u write ... & can't wait for the next episode / chapter ... Awesome ... It's too good ... Now jealous/ possessive Manik in action ...!!
Love it 👏

Very nice update

my b'day special treats..updating both ffs

oh thanks a bunch

and manik is the most adorable gadha alive...can I pliss have my Mr. Malhotra now..been too long waiting


loved it...jealous manik is always love nd mad


update soon :*

Hey dear i just read the last three chapters in a go and i must say i absolutely loved them...you have a knack for story telling i must say! Great job! I was so happy when i read the whole family time and manan morning romance ki thank god finally they might get back together...manik's care and affection for nandu is soo obvious! But then he acted like the impulsive idiot that he is...i actually wanted to kill him for what he did! And now, even after knowing why he did it, im pretty sure i still wanna kill him :P i so wish i was in cabir's place so i could punch him! But that apology scene was toh hilarious...manini and her daddy were tooo cute! Loved that bit...cant wait to read further...a jealous, possessive and protective manik is gonna be fun to read im sure... Waiting to know what mukti's master plan is to bring manan back together :P
Thanks for the PM!
Love,
Arunima

Loved the update...
Awsm..
Really liked the marine drive scene...
So cute...
Manini is so smart haan...
Super dooper update

U should for sure write for serials and movies
Hats off to u dear ...
Simply superb
U have the art to make all the readers just glued to the updates
Take a bow gal
Cheers

Poor nandu why r u not understanding manik. Thanks 4 pm.

Oh Gosh such an amazing update
So interesting
Awww I love manini
Kitne ache se smjhti hai woh apne dady ko
Hahahahaha sit ups ka idea best hai
I wanna kill Steve. Manik ko nandu ko btana chahiye hai na us k bare mai
Manik or nandu buhat stubborn hai
Hope ab nandu kisi problem Mai na aajae Steve ki waja se
Hats off to u girl
Great update