MaNan OS: Your Secret's Safe With Me

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Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: if_account

Hahaha.. Itta lamba update and me..🤣

R.I.P Part 3 of my TS..😆😆😆

Likh kar toh dena hi parega! Chodenge nahi😆😆

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: rajirock123
This is very beautiful and total different storyloved it completely

Thank you😳Thank you😳

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: -Appsy-
First timer? This was so freaking amazinggg! I wonder if this was your first try.. What would you end up doing if you write regularly!
I love the plot. And at the end, the way Manik said accept it , your secret's gonna be safe with me.. Awww too cute! :')
I could read this story again and again and not get bored of it! :')
Do write more. :)

Oh I do write, but this is my first try at an OS, which I feel is the toughest to write.
Oh how much I loved your comment!
It made my day😳
Thank you😳

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asmi.6

@asmi.6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Haha no it wasn't hard to continue this till the end ! In fact you have enough capabilities to keep your reader glued !

What a wonderful experience it was reading this os ! :)

It was indeed and an awesome one and something very very different and new ! Totally lived it <3

Would love to read more of your work !

Keep up the great work ! :D

Love,

Ashmita :)

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

U penned down every thing beauti fulllyyy but ek doubt rehe gaya... manik Nandu ko 1st kab dekha???? Itna late cafe kiyu aye n ati hi Nandu ko ghur ne laha n kiss v kar diya ..??? N fir gayab hooo gaya fir wapas aya...!!!!