Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF-Thread 2- Chapter 38-on pg 136

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AvikaWinters

@AvikaWinters

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Beautiful..

and

unexpected

Longing for the next update..

Baarish and a hindi hero and heroine

beautiful..

Their love so innocent and pure..

true that she was described so purely her emotions her everything..

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Roshnisk

@Roshnisk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Awesome awesome lovly update...

barish on right time wow ...

I wish manik forget all n forgive her soon ... not even fake anger..

very interesting...

update next part soon ...

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Hi,

What an update...I must say you have maintained the innocence of both the characters so beautifully...Well, that's what i like about your writing, you never go over the top...and you know how to keep the reader engaged...Hats off once again...You simply made my day again 😊

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Tishyy

@Tishyy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

And it's raining :D ab Kya hoga heheh
I love Cabir ... Mauke par chauka maara ... Making sure he parties with Navya
Update soon dear

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Anee_Sharma

@Anee_Sharma

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

aiyoo ekdum jhakass didi...!!! awesome...!!! second chance and all han.. ab toh dhak dhak karne laga hogaya..!!! :D :D :D..!! kab hoga next. update..?? jaldi.. ab yeh dooriyan sahi nahi jae.!!! :) :)

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Saranya

@charanyaaj

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Awesome update...
Aww their first hug! It was so cute. Nandu vl convince manik fr sure.
Actually i started liking this Ayyappa! Lol!
Thanks for the pm

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alind713

@alind713

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Awesome update
Waiting for the next part

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

i m loving ur ff like crazily..such a beautiful update!!!
nandu is such a sweetheart..kitna guilty feel karrahi thi bt thank god maniks anger hve almost calmed down nd regarding the hurt feeling nd wound in his heart wo toh nandu jald hi heal kardegi 😃
so romantic manan in rain...always mesmerizing!!!! 😳
aww!! manan first hug...woh bhi itna unexpected..i was really nt expecting it in this part!!!! bt i really loved this surprise!!!!
will be eagerly waiting fr nxt part..will u update tonight!!!??
update soon... 😛