MANAN FF== {PHIR LE AAYA DILL} cghapter 7 (page21)

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Plz don't discontinue yr...

We can keep manan alive through ur story

Even fab5 ...

I know All are disheartened Bcz of that controversy but still plz...

Continue soon..

Happy New year 😊

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A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Plzzz zzz zz dont do this plllzzz zzz atleast add Epilogue plzzz plzzz

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ramamananfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Nooo plzzz dnt end plzzz nooo

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F17_200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

hey plzz don'T do this yaarrr... that's not fair...I really like this story..I beg u don't end this...I know that controversy thing is very dishearted..But plzz keep that a side nd continue to write this story..Don't worry this mess will sort out soon.. waise bhi ky2 is end nd now u r also leaving this ff in the middle..Plz don't do this

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FarialoveManan

@FarialoveManan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: F17_200
hey plzz don'T do this yaarrr... that's not fair...I really like this story..I beg u don't end this...I know that controversy thing is very dishearted..But plzz keep that a side nd continue to write this story..Don't worry this mess will sort out soon.. waise bhi ky2 is end nd now u r also leaving this ff in the middle..Plz don't do this

No need to beg dear!!! I know u r very upset with my this decesion...I'm also very sad..Bcz I'm leaving my story in the middle...But I just hope thiss mess getS clear soon...

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shaan...

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Plz don't discontinue...

Plz plz plz

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hs77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

please dont do this!

every person in the fandom is facing this crisis with their fav show to which they have given all their hearts!

towards the end, even i started feeling a disconnect with the episodes! what an end to the most loved youth show! 😭

but honestly, let's just remember the good things! and i'm sure most of us feel happy and good to be in this forum and read the stories here!

and especially when it comes to your story, i had commented earlier too that i love your plot! please do not discontinue!

at least give it a proper closure!

we have already had enough of these haste forced ends--both in season 1 and 2----and a lot of things havent got closure ,,,,,, so kindly give this one a proper closure!

a least for the sake of those who liked and followed your story
take care! 😊

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FarialoveManan

@FarialoveManan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: hs77
please dont do this!

every person in the fandom is facing this crisis with their fav show to which they have given all their hearts!

towards the end, even i started feeling a disconnect with the episodes! what an end to the most loved youth show!😭

but honestly, let's just remember the good things! and i'm sure most of us feel happy and good to be in this forum and read the stories here!

and especially when it comes to your story, i had commented earlier too that i love your plot! please do not discontinue!

at least give it a proper closure!

we have already had enough of these haste forced ends--both in season 1 and 2----and a lot of things havent got closure ,,,,,, so kindly give this one a proper closure!

a least for the sake of those who liked and followed your story
take care! 😊

I Guess you r right...I'm soory for hearting you guyz..Ok I won't stop writting this story ...I will continue... thanks for make me realize...I will give this story a proper closure..

Edited by FarialoveManan - 9 years ago

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hs77

@hs77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: FarialoveManan

I Guess you r right...I'm soory for hearting you guyz..Ok I won't stop writting this story ...I will continue... thanks for make me realize...I will give this story a proper closure..

awww...i'm so glad!

Thankyou dear!

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FarialoveManan

@FarialoveManan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Ok,at first I really wanted to,say you guyz soory..Bcz I know I have hurt you guyz by saying that I won't continue..But watching your comments..Pms I just couldn't stop my self..And I'm back for you guyz to again continue this story...Soo enjoy many twist nd turns are about to come..

CHAPTER 5D

Manik nd Nandini are still kissing eachother.After a while the kiss became wild.Manik is bitting her lower lip..She is sucking his upper lips..Both of them were not ready to leave eachother.As if they were hungry for eachothers lips since years..After sometime manik realize nandini is getting out of breath..So he unwantedly left her. ------- Then they both realize what they have done..They both were very emberesd for there sudden act..but suddenly some one knock on the door..Nd it was Nyonika.. seeing nyonika they both stratten their self from eachothers grip..
NYONIKA:- Areh you both r up? Nandini beta how r u? After manik's marriage tum kaha chali gaye thi.We missed u so much..nd we r really sorry we couldn't save your sistr..hume maf kardo beta.. NANDINI: No aunty! what r u doing! don't say like that..Infact it was all my fault..Mai to apni behan ki akhri waqt par uske sath bhi nahi rehsaki..I'm so shamefull on my self..Saying this nandini again started to cry..Manik was feeling very helpless so just to make the situation normall he started the convertion.. MANIK:- Listen agar app dono ka yeh drama khatam ho gaya ho to May I take some rest..It's all ready morning.. I also have to go to the office..So can u plz leave. NYONIKA:- Manik how can you talk to her like that..she is your friend! MANIK: No,she is not..friend thii.. NYONIKA:- Manik..(but cut in the middle by nandini) NANDINI: Aunty it's ok.manik is right..it's already morning I should leave.. NYONIKA:- NO,beta you can't leave like that..tum itne din baad aye ho..I can't let u go just like that.. NANDINI:- Aunty I hv some work..So,I have to leave..But next time I will surely come.Prmz. NYONIKA:- Ok,but next time.I won't let u go so easily ok? NANDINI:- OK. NYONIKA: nandini wait.manik will drop u. Nandini looked at manik but manik rolled his eyes nd said " I'm not going..I have some work.Wase bhi..I have waste lots of time on her..." "Manik what is wrong wd u..Nyonika said..But cut in the middle by nandini.. " It's ok aunty..Manik is right usne apna bohot time waste kar diya hai mujpe..nd anyways I have called Aryaman he will come to pick me up anytime..Don't worry aunty..NNDINI SAID " " ok,beta as u say..But don't get deappear again..stay in touch..Maan se milne zarror ana..He likes you..Nyonika said" " yes aunty oviusly..Nandini said.." After that nyonika went away from room again leaving Manik nd Nandini alone in the room...they took a gleance if eachother nd nandini was about to say something to manik but her phone beep..It was aryaman..she recvd the call.. "Yea,aryaman..Ok you reached,fine I'm coming.Don't worry I'm ok.." Manik was listening there convrstion,silently nd was thinkng... " Who is this aryaman..Nd why she is talking wd him so nicely..As if he is her boyfrnd..What!!no,no this can't be happend..But why not..!! oh god no..This aryman can't be her boyfrnd...Manik thought...But his thoughts were broke by nandini's voice.. NANDINI:- Manik..Bye.. MANIK:- Hum..haa..kuch kaha..? NANDINI:- Yea.. I'm going..Take care of Maan..He has still fever.. MANIK:- I know that you don't need to tell me... NANDINI:- I know..you r a vry good father..nd I'm happy to see that.. Manik gave her a angry glare..Nd again started to do his work..Without giving her any ansWr..Nandini was very hurt by his behaviur...But she again called manik nd said... " Manik,if possible then plz try to forgive me..For what had happend in the past..That was not in our hand..." Nandini looked at manik nd ws waiting for his ans..That maybe he will say anything but her dismey he didn't say anything..So,she gets upset nd was about to leave but..Again stopped by his voice.. "Nandini,what happend in past..That was in your hand..So,don't hope that forgiving u would be so easy for me.." Manik said all this by looking at her eyes on a angry look...Nd then left the room..Nandini also left the house with a havy heart...

Edited by FarialoveManan - 9 years ago

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