MaNan FS: Hey,Rude Boy! (PART 4: PG 38) Completed! - Page 23

Originally posted by: myruh

Sorry for late commenting.. Waisey update toh kal raat ko hi padh li thi n comment ab de rahi hu..

M really loving it alot.. Its damn awesome...

So finally nandu had fall for manik...

This jerkshad naa i hate him alot... I hate him frm the bottom of my heart.. How dare he insult manik.. Bt nandu ne usse thappad maarkar ekdam sahi kiya.. Aur ussey aur 10-20 slap padne chaahiye.. Bt insab mey ek cheez aaccha hua ie nandu confessed her lov to manik... Yipee...!!! So as u told mainey khud hi ek small fight sequence imagine karli..

Love manan convo.. Nandini is really selfless matlb she loves manik n she isn't expecting anything in return.. Kaafi strong hain yaar yeh ladki..

So i guess manik is also pleased by her words..

Issilye toh concert mey jaaney k liye subah subah happily red shirt dhund raha thaa.. Oh shit her mom made her remember that today its his nandu's bday.. He is so upset wid himself as how could he forget this...???

Precap padh kar mera mood vi sad hogaya.. He didn't came for the concert... Nahi.. Kehdo ki yeh jhoot hain..!!

The update was upto the mark n m getting addicted yo it.. Hope u turn it into a ff...

So as u hv given a dosti offer so will like to use this offer.. It's me myrah frm Mumbai n m 17.. So aaj se frnds..??

Lastly happy diwaali..

Stay blessed..

Loads of love..

Originally posted by: mini_manan

Beautiful...
Awesome...
Finally nandini confess her love for him...
Seems like i have read or seen this type of story somewhere...mujhe yaad ni aa raha...but bahut similar feel ho rahe he...
Have u taken this concept from somewhere..
Loved it.
Cont soon.

Originally posted by: Sofiafarooq

Hi I'm from UK. Basically Sofia Farooq is my daughter's name. I love to read good stuff. Your story is realy awesome. I want to wish u a happy Diwali. Actually dear I'm form Pakistan basically so don't know much about Diwali. Still wish u a happy Diwali. God bless u. Love u. Tack care.

Originally posted by: puccha

Hey ishu baby..
I have not ur chappy so right now I m not unressing it.. But I promise when I will come back I will surely unres it.. Iss pe aur sab pe.. Sorry.. Gussa mat hona..
N thanks for understanding my problem..
Love you..
Chalo bbye..
Gona miss u alot...
Miss me too.. Hehe..
Take care..
Lots of love..
Puccha..