MaNan Two Shot: Meray Ajnabi..!Final ChapA,B/ Pg45/6th-NOV

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#411

oh my my lovely story perfect romantic ending manik prank ...angry nandani

finally they r together ...manan two shots is really awesome n i m speechles😊😛

🤗

ty for pm

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urvxshi

@urvxshi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#412

it was amazing superb out of the worl a sweet tale of manan love..hea

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mona

@cmamona

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#413

Hey dear
Wow yr amazing
Firstly congratulations for ur dis new success
And yr its so beautifully written by u
I feel so glad to be a reader of ur stories
And dis TS is so cute
I hve just read it...
Nw got d tym to read ur amazing work which is done by u for us
And I m so thankful to u dat u hvnt banned me or removed me frm ur list as I was nt commenting regularly...
Thanks for pming me of ur every update...
And d storyline is quite old bt d way u put it so mesmerising...
Gussa of nandu ,love and passion towards his love, waiting for him for four years...
True love = MANAN
Hats off what a imagination u hot girl it always amaze me... How much hard work u do while writing dis... Wo b just for us...
Thanks for doing this for us...
Stay blessed
And write many more...
Grow and glow... :)
Keep smiling

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RUBI

@bluelake99

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#414

read d completed TS n one go ..

finally u wrote a TS .. bcz all odr wrks f ur r turned into ss .. jst kidding .. lolz .. 😛

u r a flawless writer indeed ...

njoyd ds gayoon ki gori aka nandu nd 'bilaaiti babu' aka manik ...

though it s a 'gheesa pita' plot as u say ,, bt it shines lyk new n ur words ...

shocked .. loved nd lastly njyd ur all twist nd turn ...

pahele dono ka milna .. phir manik ka engaged status dn manik's rejectn nd manik's attraction 4 his 'gayoon ki gori' aka sum Pari ... dn dy bcm 4rnds ... enjoyd their 4rst interaction ... 😳

itna vi suspense thik tha ... bt dn Pari aka nandu ka plan ,, nt only nandu ,, manik's whole 'mayeka' nd 'sasural' ki mili-vagat plan ... 😆 ws shockng ...😲

jst missed cabir's presence ... aftr all prankstar aka cupid he s !!!!!! 😛

nd usse vi zyaada bura tha manik ka prank ... dats nt done yaar manik !!!!!

loved nandu's determination nd dedication ... nd her love 2wards manik !!!!!! ❤️

bt how can manik stays lyk dead whn his nandini ws crying 4 him incoherently !!!!!!!!! lyk srusly !!!!!!!!
hunh !!!!!!!! nandu's gussa ws justified ...

haye !!!!! nandu ruined their 4rst ni8 out f her anger ... thik kiya ...

dn kya !!!!!! mill gaya do bicchre dil !!!!! roothna-manana ho gaya ...

nandu's compensation ws so sensuous !!!!!!! 😳

nd dn literally another MANAN Story jst begins ...

uff !!!!!! Mawara baby ,, u r awsum ...

d way u arranged d whole story plot ,, s commendable !!

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#415

It was a beautiful story. Loved it

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Peu Das

@Daz4488

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#416

Awesome!!

Manik's joke was too much!!

I knew that Nandini was the girl Manik was getting married to but Nandini was acting!! That was the best part!!

No suhagraat 😭 but then morning romance was cute 😳!

Then snowball fight!!

Lastly suhagraat was nice!!

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591994

@591994

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#417

It was damn good...i mean good will really be an understatement...i loved it to the core...it was all her plan to make him realise her importance...n all helped her in her plan...n she compensated fr ruining their first night...that was very sweet of her...
Loved it very much yr...
The wait is always worth...u proved it all over again...
Thanks fr this wonderful story...
Byee...tc

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Naj91

@Naj91

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#418

The final part was superb Mawara
So it was all Nandini's plan
Manik bhi kuch kam nahi
He acted so awesomely
Loved the slow progress in their relationship
Thanks for pm