#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 51

Originally posted by: RakaSama

finished 32 parts in one go... my head is spinning...

awesome story... loved it😊😊

where was I till now????!!!!!!!😲

Originally posted by: jeyapirakas

HI <font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Aashana yesterday I came across your FF, It was GOOD,SUPERB, AMAZING, AND FANTASTIC dear. Oh my god I can't wait pls update sooon</font>

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Aashu...you're back with your old charisma... Kehte hai na after every dawn there is a silver linen to raise... But aksar log ye bhool jaate hai that silver linen only always leads us towards that dawn... This dawn na it always teaches those lessons which we can't learn when we are in light... This update also in one of those... The way we takes it depends on us...you portrayed the state of girl what she goes through when she came to know this truth of her life... Nandu loved him and waited for him to return from his so called business trip... I really don't know what to say... Both are correct in their places.. But here being a girl I'm talking in her point of view... We girls always become Lil reserved...in front of our loved ones too...coz deep down we always protect ourselves from falling in any kind of trap... We always make sure to give our most precious asset to the one whom our heart choose...coz we trust our heart blindly...coz we know it recognize the right person for us... But lil did we know it always cheats... It always make sure to drive us insane...people say when we are in confusion close your eyes and listen to your heart... It will give the solutions... But we always forget its not our heart... Its our soul which drops us in right place... Kehte hai na ham apne dil KO jhoot bol sakte hai...par apne aatma se nahi... Kyunki aatma hii hame khudse milaane mein help karte hai dil nahi... Same goes with nandu she gave herself to him not even thinking twice... Coz they are soulmates... They don't need to confess their heart out... Coz their souls already did that... Dil toot sakte hai... Bhikar sakte hai... Yahaan tak... Dhadakna bhi band ho jaate hai... Par aatma nahi... He's not her heartbeat he's her soul... He's her existence... He's her everything... He may say her its all joke what was between them...he may say its all over between them...but she loves him enough to let him go...he may bring new girls everyday with him to hurt her and doubt herself on her purity in love...he may made her fell disgusted of herself for loving him and letting him inside her... Lil did he know she's his pride she's his possession she's his everything... No matter how and what those girls whom he bring with him...cannot take her place... Cannot take his soulmate place...he may have se* with them... But it doesn't call as he's making love to those girls... Its the definition in choosing between heart and soul... He said love is a crap and screwed him...but he's not understanding he screwed her whole damnn life...he may under any misunderstanding now but what about her... How she felt when he kissed someone in front of her... And nyonika's concern... I don't think she has the right to give suggestions in their personal matter... She may say he don't love her...she has being played in his games...she have to leave him for his own... But what about her duties toward him did she ever gave him those love which a child crave from their parents... Did she ever try to be his friend... Did she ever gave him her lap to sleep and erase his frowns from his forehead... Did she ever gave him those assurance which a mom gives to her child when they feel weak in their lifes... No naa...so now she doesn't have right to talk to him and take decision on his behalf... I think nandu made very big mistake by saying nyonika about her pregnancy... And yeah from this update i don't know why but I have doubt on nandu's dad... I think he's only behind every fuss... Don't get me wrong pataaka but its my view... Anyways one more update with lots of twists... Confusion... Questions... It was nice... Continue soonish.. Take care stay blessed
Lovee you...your butterfly

Originally posted by: cmamona

Hey dear
I m sry for nt commenting on ur updates as I was out for some work...
And ya congratulations for ur new thread and d chapters which I hve read dat was just amazing
And I m truly liking d storyline and directions in which u r taking it...
I seriously appreciate your work...
What u r doing for us...
And most importantly thanks for considering me and nt blocking me and thanks for pms yr
It really means a lot to me...
Bt yr I hve a question
Although u hve said in a note dat u r hvng all d ppl in ur story still I wanna knw dat is there will b cabir's entry by anychance ...

Pls update soon
I will be waiting
Keep smiling
Stay blessed :)

Originally posted by: s1133

Seriously yaar...a big confusion.
What happened to him all of a sudden...
He loved her like anything still he is but what is this??????ahrrr dying with this suspense yaar...so nandu is pregnant now...that means the flashback is gonna end soon right...I really want to know the reason behind manik's this behavior... Poor nandu ...can't see her like this...that too at this time...she must b happy now as she was pregnant with manik's child...and she is gonna have a complete family soon...but now...i really feel sorry for her...plz plz plz open the suspense soon yaar...u have completed 33parts but still u haven't opened this mystery... Plz reveal it very soon...thanks for the update yaar...will b waiting for the next one...

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Ha yar thanks to her banner is so awesome she did a wonderful job

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

What to give in feedback..!! And present track kab aayega, nandini is going to die in present track and manik ko koi idea nahi hai.. He is such a jerk.. Please yaar, jaldi flashback end karo..so that we can continue from present.. Anyways,update was asusual painful.. Manik did vowed everything opposite at their marriage and he is doing everything possible for it.. Sayad nandu k marne k baad hi thodasa akal aajaye.. Please update soon..

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

You know what tu ek writer ban ja teri starting lines wohoo faadu awesome i want your permission can i use those lines in my ff or butterfly nyo ka character ke bare me abhi me kuch bol toh nh skti hu kyuki ek hi nh kai mysterys devils me jo dhire dhire open hogi or even i was feeling bad for nandu yar but nothing is in my hands yar i can't do anything that's the story line but atlast manik will be on his knees or wo bhi kafi nh hoga or ha yar schi tu story likh de comment itna acha likh rhi h toh story to awesome hogi or wese how are you now tbiyt thk hui