#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 42

Originally posted by: mananneetu

hi!!
actually na i think i will hve to stop reading this nt beacuse its nt good !!
my exams r on full swing..so i hve to control my reading habit!!!
i read almost all the stories of this forum so now i hve to manage time nd read 1-2 of them!
nd aap bhi isse dark banane wali ho...present scenes padhkar toh i feel so emotional...so its better ke i will end my journey of this ff in a happy note...!!
wish u all the success nd appreciation that u deserve...!!

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Aashna very well done dear...👏

amazing awesome update it was...

romance fight cute comedy anger everything in one update..

full package it was like always...

loved the update...😊

the opening lines very well said...

that two different completely opposite people who were not happy with their relationship...

and got married under circumstances...

are now in so much love that they dont even want to get apart for some time...

but it is said na opposite attracts...

so i think the same happened with manik nandini here...

in the morning nandini got up and she was shy remembering her last night..

it shows that both of them got solace in each others arms...

so happy they are with each other...

but manik being monster was not any chance of teasing her...

and nandini was just blushing...

and while running away manik asked nandini where is she going...

to which nandini being nandini answered that she going to mount everest...

and ufff monster he again teased her to wear clothes before going..😆😆

and they were teasing each other on the love marks...😉😳

so now next here comes our lil devil again...

poking the big devil again again...😆

so lil devil poked him that is he going that he is going to london for meeting or honeymoon...

and big devil scolded him that first he only gives him ideas now teasing him..😆

our devil is our devil...

and that dialogue saying sochne ke liye dimag rent par layega..😆

ufff lil devil giving hard time to big devil..😆

so manik said to nandini that they are not going to office...

and to which when nandini asked why again our naughty monster poked in...

and made her blushed hard...

so finally manik told about his surprise of london tour to nandini...

but the reaction and news he got back shocked him...

as she has lost her passport and haven't applied for another yet...

and manik hearing this so angry...

becoz all his plans to propose her...

and spent time with het goes in vein...

and he in anger mode leaves for office...

but this anger making both of them sulking...

nandini in kitchen cursing him as she was calling him again and again but he was not picking up her call..

she was thinking it is not her fault as manik didn't imform her earlier about the trip...

and she was thinking how to make happy his monster...

and on the other side the situation was no different...

manik was shouting on everyone...

poor employees...😆

again his lil devil poked him that his luck is bad in romance...😆

atlast he got convinced and headed towards home...

he reached home...

but monster being monster ignored nandini royally...

and nandu getting irritated...

but she composed herself and tried talking to her...

she said sorry to him and told him that she made aloo ka paratha for him..😳

but monster again taunted her...

but from inside he was enjoying all her tantics and thinking to get angry like this everyday...

😆naughty monster i must say...

so she took a bite from paratha and while he opened his mouth she stuffed it in her mouth...

and teased him..😆

but our monster is no less...

he did same and teased her...

and finally she started convincing him to go to london...

but being stubborn he was not ready...

finally finally finally...

he got ready but on the condition that next time they will make aloo ka paratha together...

😆😆naughty monster again...ufff only one thing in mind...

could anyone even imagine that two ppl who used to hate each other are so close now that even they cant stay from each other for 7 days...

what a transition...😊

so the moment where they have to say bye to each other came...

it was difficult for both of them...

the hug was so sweet and needed...

where one side nandini was crying and expressing her feelings manik was holding back his tears so that she dont see his vunerable side...

he asked her not to come to airport as she wont be able to see him going...

but nandini being nandini she followed him to airport...

the hug at airport...😳

she was not ready to leave him...

but time came and he had to leave...and they broke...

beautifully described...👏

the song selection bang on...😊

finally the night came...

and i really liked the idea of manik and nandini thoughts and their instant reaction on it...

both of them were missing each other...

both of them wanted to confess their love...

so taunting and teasing each other and missing each other...

they slept with each other belongings...

they found their solace with each other...😳

amazing work done...👏

loving the story how it is progressing...😊

Originally posted by: Mananholic982

Yaaa

We are waiting!!

Update soon!!

Why don't u make an index of ur works

I mean it will be easier for us to reach u!!

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

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