#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Sm0405

Yes yes yes ... I'm crying ryt now ... U made me cry with this sweet update also n now I dnt know what will happen in the upcoming disturbing updates ... I think a new river will strt flowing frm my eyes ...

Bt seriously this update was so awesome ... Matlb itna lovely update devil's me ... It's so shocking fr me ...

I jst can't tell u how much I loved this update ... All emotions were available in this update ...

Sooo loved it ... N u know while reading when it was abt to end I was thinking yaar its the last happy update to this ff fr now ... I'm so going to miss it ...

Hmm toh this trip will change everything in their lives ... I think when Manik will come back all excited abt his confession n all he will see her with Dhruv nd misunderstanding will take birth in their relationship ...

Arrrggghhh !!!!! This is so nt done ... Kaash k Hume aise Hi updates milte ... Sweet sweet romantic wale with their lil nok jhok ...

Bt what to do ... Yeh storyline hai Hi aisi ... Sabse alag ... Hatke ... So we have to adjust with everything ...

So I'm going to make myself stong now fr the upcoming updates ...

Bt seriously this update was a treat fr me ... Thank u sooo veryyy much fr this update ...

Loved it to the core ...

Originally posted by: sweet_kaur

enjoyed the mushy update

but im really curious bout the reason for the fall out

pls reveal soon coz i seriously cant guess anything like i must say u have a very good skill of writing u have briliantly managed to keep the mystery under the wraps

anyways cute update but human nature WAITING FOR MORE !!!!

update soon

Originally posted by: anupandey

Aashna plz clr 1thing
2 update phle tera note aaya
Tht we r going to see the worst side nd all
Fully prepare kiya khud ko wo pdhne k liye
Nd tu hme d rhe h mst wala romance
Mtlb yhi worst side tha to we actually loved it
Nd update was amazing cute romantic
Nd acrding to my instinct
Jb mnk ayga to wo kuch dkhga ya sunnega
Jise wo misunderstood kr jyga
Nd sochega tht Nndu still loves dhruv nd all
Just instinct nothing else
Thnk u for pm
Love u

Originally posted by: unzela

Yar really i m crying while reading this update jinke bich me itna pyaar tha to ab itni nafrat kyun hai ? Yar u were asking ki you want to know ke what we readers want in the update yar i just want ki tum manan ko sath le ao yar i now even you r a manan fan mai yeh nahi keh rahi ki abhi bring them together end me hi sahi bring them together i want manik to be guilty for what he did plz aisa hi karna aur plz nandu ko mat marna plz plz plz yar this z the choice of our readers i know ki sabh log mujhse agree karenge chalo ab mano ya na mano meri advise tumhari marzi but update soon this chapter was awesome atleast isme to manan sath me the now bbye update soon take care

Originally posted by: Chievi

hello😊...i just read your story in one go...your an amazing writer.. keep it up👏👏👏a very diff plot, i was just glued to it that i finished in one day...😃

Originally posted by: Snehasn

UNRES

Hey pataaka... I know you don't want any sorry or explanations for my late appearance.. But still I'm asking for apology... Well chuck it..
I'm feeling Lil better from previous days so as promised to you I'm here...
So writer of Devil's apne mann banaa liye to give shocks continuously... Yeah I know I know you must be thinking problem kya hai inka.. Rocking update de toh bhi problem hai...shocking update de toh bhi problem hai... Ya phir shaant waale update de toh bhi problem hai... why I'm saying this na I couldn't digest after make out waala coochy coos... Seriously aapne Jo suspense built kiye teh na ye thread horror honge and all... So I thought itna hawwtt make out k baad...devil will return back... I mean manik itne saare pee Jo rakhe teh... I thought nashe mein sab bhool gaye honge... Par yahaan toh mahaashay kuch aur hii ahemm ahemmm...aur apne wifey KO tease karne mein lage huye... Its unpredictable... Atleast in Devil's right...then nandu our dearest tigress ek hii night mein itne bold ho gaye.. .I must say sanghat ka asar hai.. Then again manik continuing his teasing session... Aashu I thought I've land up in some lala land sacchi... Then comes the biggest shock of the update...manik booked tickets for London... Ek theer se do nishaani...honeymoon and meeting in same city... Wow I mean just wow plan teh ye... Par here comes the most expected answer from manik's better half... Sorry manik I lost my passports.. Like seriously... Nandu KO itne toh akal hona chaayiye teh na ki she's working in such a great industries... Being employee of that industry unhe kabhie bhi abroad jaana parte hai... Isliye passports ki zaroorat toh parte hii hai...hai naa??...par how to forget she's Nandini murthy malhotra... Saara kaam tamaam karne ka copyright holder Jo hai...so sab kuch last minute mein karne mein madam KO mazaa aate hai...then comes the most expected outburst from his side...of course yaar itna romantic holiday aur confession ka dajjiya udd gaye toh kisi KO bhi ghussa aate hii hai...par ye toh monster hai inko toh obviously aayenge hii naa...so janaab vahi kiye Jo har koi aiSe situations mein karte teh...bhook and talk hartaal (strike)...aur har kisi pe chillaana... Uff...poor employees... Then wifey is way more smarter than hubby.. Apne pati parmeshwar k liye khaana banaana... Wo bhi paraantha's...tch tch tch...kitna difficult hai na... Phir bhi bannaye... Aur successful bhi huye... Lo jii jinke liye banaaye unhe khilaane k jagah khud kaaliye...chalo accha hai Monster KO pasand bhi aaye...phir monster on chutti and majnu on duty... Wo bhi over time... Janaab KO teasing karne ka mouka chaayiye... Milte hii chouka maarna shuru inka...thore hubby wifey lil cute moments... It was nice... Ab aaye most difficult time... Alvidaa kehne ka... Jo kisi mushkil se kam nahi... Why it's always difficult to say byee to our loved ones...both are hiding their tears by each other and pretending all fine and its only matter of some days... But kehte hai na ham ishq karne waalon KO shaayad rok sakte hai.. Par behte huye aansuon KO nahi... Same happens here also... He stopped her form coming airport to see off him...to not show his vulnerable state... But kehte hai na we can't stop what has written in our fate... He tried his best to be sane... But when she arrived in front of him he forget surrounding and his call for flight too and cocooned her in his protective embrace... Love is all about make the things and break the things...option is ours... Finally she bade him...and came back to her place...where they have their life's most dreadful to beautiful memories... Both are in dilemma whether to call or not... Coz they don't want to disturb their love's beauty sleep... But Lil did they knew ki sleep is far away from each other not only for today but for remaining days too...so started their favorite time pass virtually... Blame game... After the lots and lots of kitpit's and virtual coochy coo's both finally find out their solace... The warmth... Aroma and presence of being with each other in the form of her stole for him and his shirt for her... The thing matters is their comfortness and promise of being together with each other forever no matter what and how... And they drifted into slumber promising to meet in dreams... Aashu its just tremendous update... I've less words to tell you how I felt these previous and this update... I'm confessing you today that English languages full 26alphabets are less to describe your writing skill... Kudos to you my pataaka... You may feel ki what's so special I got in these updates which being writer you didn't get that.. And not your other reader's...so i wanna say you never get what I felt and your other readers too... Coz its definitely impossible for you guys to take and feel the story in my style and my point of view... That's it!!...I'm so happy pataaka...keep on going like this only... One fine day it definitely reaches you to the place which you never expected...

PS: sorry i wanna write more but I'm not in that condition and these shakunis are not allowing me to write more... Lovee you pataaka... Aqsa lovee you too...both take care stay blessed

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

you wanna write more seriously itna bda aww love so much for this one you know what tere comments pdhne ke bad me sachi regret karti hu is ff ki writer hona kash me reader hoti i wanted to feel the same thing they way felt while reading my updates but chlo tere comments se hi dil garden garden ho jata hai
a huge smile was playing on my lips while reading this comment love you butterfly for this awesome one and get well soon baby missing you and how are you feeling now[/OTE]

Wow I'm feeling blessed...coz...my writing made you smile... Uff pataaka don't ask what's my condition now...gosh this virus mahaashay is not leaving me...my house has became mini nursing home...god i am regretting now for not going hospital for check ups...bhaai na wo ghar mein hii sab shift kar diye hai...aur hame guard karne k liye apne chamche's aur hamaare life ki shakuni's ko chor diye hai...you know woh log na hame apne cellphones choone nahi de rahe hai...keh rahe hai bhaai k strict orders hai...god i am seriously pissed of these extra caring of my family members...can you believe my pet too pampering me like anything...poore patient waale feelings yaar...i wish isse accha i would've died...sacchi its hell frustrating...of this over protective family...and over possessive besties... 😭 😭