#2 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE PART LINK TO THREAD 3 ADDED PG 143

First Previous

Page

100

Next Last

Frequent Posters

rimsha01

@rimsha01

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

We would never want you to stop dear cause the way you write is so beautiful that we will never be able to get enough of it.

Nd those few people who have pm'd you useing harsh words they should not matter coz if they would have even a little bit of brains they would have kept their point of view in front of you but a little more sensibly without using any harsh words. I just dont understand y do people behave so.

And we should also keep in mind that life is not always a bed of roses with all happy happy faces. Situations change nd people have to deal with them accordingly. We should know how to strike a 6 when life throws a bouncer at you.

And dat is how nandini dealt with the fiasco in her life when manik left. She didnt lose HOPE. And manik had no other option other than to leave. He left for his love to be happy.

And d distance of 5 yrs has made their hearts grow fonder. Their love has increased many folds.

And Manan is a love saga a little bit because of their never ending love but more because the way they deal with situations being together always nd never losing hope in their relationship.

Quote

anumanan

@anumanan

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

PART 128 :

NANDINI POV :

Kya bath hain mr malhotra aap tho kaafi handsome banke vapas agaye irada kya hain maarna hain kya mujhe hmmm and smiles

She looks him for sometime.

Manik mujhe nahi patha ki tumhe kis vajah se hame chodkar panch saal hamse door rehna pada main ye bi nahi janthi ki tum soha ko kyu apna gf kehkar gar main laye mujhe bas ek bath patha hain aur wo ye hain ki tum mujhe kabi bi dhoka nahi de sakthe ho.

Ye jo muskurahat iss vakth tumhare chehre par hain na wohi sabse badi sach hain manik jo khushi mere tumhare paas hone se main tumhare chehre par dekhri hoon wo mere liye kaafi hain ye bathane ke liye ki main tumhare liye kya hoon.

I know ki koyi cheez tumhe mere paas ane se rokri hain par don't worry main jaldi sab jaan jaongi aur tumhe bas thab thak hi pareshani jelni hogi.

She slowly moves a little and brushes her lips on his heart.

He slowly opens his eyes and blushes.

He moves his left hand and caresses her cheek.

MANIK :

ye sach hi hain na tum sach main yaha mere paas ho na ouchhh and takes his hand back

Nandu smiles but hides it.

He bends down and looks her.

MANIK :

ye tho sori hain phir mera hath kaise kaat sakthi hain ouchhh dard tho sach main hora hain ab tho pakka ho gaya hain ki ye sab sach hain lekin ye neendh main kaise

SOHA : manik manikkk

MANIK : ooo shit

He tries to move but nandu makes irritated face and holds him more tighter. He smiles and gets lost in her.

SOHA : manik

MANIK : shhh

SOHA : yeee

Manik nods his head smiling.

SOHA : manik i cant see her clearly mujhe use dekhna hain

MANIK : she is sleeping na

SOHA : aha tho majnu manik doesn't want to disturb his princess sleep haaa

Manik smiles and caressing her hairs "haan"

SOHA : acha listen need to talk to you

MANIK : ahhh nahi not now

SOHA : par manik wo

MANIK : maine kaha na nahi matlab nahi

SOHA : okkk so I'll leave

MANIK : door lock karke jana haa

SOHA : vaise bi andhera hi haan tho door open rahe ya bandh kya farak padtha hain hmm and winks

Manik turns his face blushing.

SOHA : someone is blushing haaa

MANIK : sohaaa

SOHA : ok okk enjoyyy and leaves

Nandu was trying hard to hide her face because her cheeks were completely turned into red.

Vaise madam jab ankhe kolke mujhe dekogi tho tumhara reaction kya hoga hmm. Mere paas baagte hue aaogi ya phir apni jagah pe hi kadi rahogi. Mujhse kuch kahogi ya bas mujhe dekthe hi rahogi. Intezar tho bahuth kiya hoga na mujhe dekhne ke liye and caresses her cheek with his thumb.

Am sorry am really really sorry

Nandu kisses his thumb brushing her lips making him smile more

He remains silent for sometime and then agar ham aise hi rehthe na hamesha ke liye tho kitna acha hotha na.

Jab tum ankhe kologi na tho mujhe soha ke sath dekogi and I know it will break you par phir bi mujhe wo sab karna hoga.

Nandu slowly moves her hands and places them around his neck.

He looks her and a smile falls on his lips automatically.

SOHA : manikkk

MANIK : soha I said na ki

SOHA : manik its about her

Manik expression changes and kya hua

SOHA : we need to go and meet her

MANIK : tum chelo main aara hoon

Soha leaves and manik lovingly places a long kiss on nandu's forhead.

MANIK : am sorry

He slowly removes her hands from his neck and makes her sleep properly on couch. He tries to get up but nandu's locket gets stucked with his shirt button.

He sees locket and smiles.

He slowly removes the locket from his shirt and kisses the locket. He looks her and tries to get up but again something stops him. He turns back & his face glows seeing the thing which stopped him.

Manik bracelet gets tied with nandu's ring.

MANIK : patha nahi tumse door kaise rahunga jabki sari cheeze mujhe tumhare paas aane ke liye majboor karthi hain and smiling slowly frees his bracelet with her ring.

He holds her hand and kisses the ring.

He looks her and walks out of the room silently.

Nandu opens her eyes immediately and sits straight.

Tum mujhse door nahi mere paas mere peche peche aaoge manik and smiles.

She gets down and takes her cell.

She calls kabir and asks him to check about power problem.

KABIR : shona tum vaha kya karri ho maine kaha na tumhe

NANDINI : kabir please yar mera mood bahuth acha hain so please not now

KABIR : lekin

NANDINI : acha tum log kaha par ho

KABIR : malhotra mansion se das minute ki doori par

NANDINI : great tho jaldi se ajao

KABIR : shona gar par koun koun hain

Nandu smiles and main aur koun acha chelo ab byyy and cuts the call.

After five minutes power comes.

NANDINI : kya bath hain itni jaldi problem solve bi kardi

She immediately calls kabir again

KABIR : kya hua shona tu

NANDINI : thank you power aa gaya

KABIR : acha vaise maine tho kisi se kuch nahi kaha kair chodo acha hi hain

NANDINI : hooo teek hain byy

KABIR : hmm byyy

NANDINI : agar kabir nahi tho phir hooo of course and smiles.

She just sits thinking and blushing about manik.

Soon rain becomes heavier and she starts playing with water droplets.

She suddenly stops and "nandini moorthy baarish hori hain aur gar par koyi nahi hain"

She smirks and quickly runs out.

LIVING ROOM :

SOHA : manikkk ruko please

MANIK : soha I don't want to talk anything

SOHA : lekin aise beech rasthe main se

MANIK : maine kaha na mujhe kuch nahi and stops listening a familiar voice

SOHA : ye awaz

Manik starts running while soha silently follows him.

He finally stops and smiles hugely seeing the view infront him.

Nandu was standing at centre of the terrace streching her arms and facing her back to manik.

"Behka hai mann kahin
Kahan jaanati nahin"

She slowly turns towards manik but was having her face covered with her dupatta

"Behka hai mann kahin
Kahan jaanati nahin"

She slowly pulls down her dupatta

"Koi rok le yahin"

She streches her dupatta and turns around singing

"Bhaage re mann
Kahin aage re mann
Chala jaane kidhar jaanu na"

She takes two steps right side running and then again left side and smiling continuous

"Bhaage re mann
Kahin aage re mann
Chala jaane kidhar jaanu na"

She closes her eyes and

"Behka hai mann kahin
Kahan jaanati nahin"

Aa.. aaha...

She runs towards one corner and

"Haan.. chale thandi hawa
Haan.. sang mann bhi gaya"

She acts as if she was searching for "him"

"Dhoondhun main kahan usko"

She folds her hands around her chest and pouts

"Batlaaye koi mujhko"

She again runs from one corner to another

"Ke haan haan haan re
Bhaage re mann
Kahin aage re mann
Chala jaane kidhar jaanu na.."

She feels manik around her but thinking that she was imagining she slightly hits herself on her head singing

"Behka hai mann kahin
Kahan jaanati nahin
Koi rok le yahin"

She remembers her moments with manik and

"Haan.. haaye aisa sama
Hmm.. phir hoga kahan"

She blushes and moving her waist

"Ji loon main ise khul ke
Sawan mein zara ghul ke"

Arre sun sun sun..

She covers her head with her dupatta and dances moving her head

"Behka hai mann kahin
Kahan jaanati nahin
Koi rok le yahin"

She moves her hands and legs in sync making beautiful steps

"Bhaage re mann
Kahin aage re mann
Chala jaane kidhar jaanu na"

FAB 4 enters and sees manik standing lost looking nandu who was dancing like mad singing

"Bhaage re mann
Kahin aage re mann
Chala jaane kidhar jaanu na..."

Manik sees them and changes his expression.

SOHA : manik she is just amazing yar

Manik smiles.

SOHA : you stay here I'll leave

FAB 4 runs towards nandu and stops her from dancing.

NANDINI : tum log agaye and smiles hugely

KABIR : shona tu yaha kya karri hain

NANDINI : main wo bas

KABIR : chod chel yaha se

NANDINI : nahi kabir please mujhe thodi der aur beegna hain baarish main

DHRUV : hamare gar chelthe hain phir jo karna hain wo karlo

MUKTHI : haan chelo

NANDINI : guysss mujhe sab patha hain relax

ALIA : kyaa what are you talking about

NANDINI : wohi jo tum log chupane ki koshish karre ho

KABIR : pagal hain ham kya

NANDINI : guys I know ki manik vapas agaya hain

FAB 4 get shocked and look each other

NANDINI : arey isi liye tho main itna khush hoon aur tum log hain ki

DHRUV : pari wo manik actually

NANDINI : kyaa

KABIR : wo manik ke sath

MUKTHI : matlab wo ek

ALIA : ek dosth ayi hain

NANDINI : guys and smiles

KABIR : dekh bath ye hain ki

NANDINI : soha manik ki gf hain

FAB 4 open there mouths and stand looking her without blinking there eyes.

Nandu clicks her fingers.

MUKTHI : tu janthi hain ki soha

ALIA : manik ki gf hain

NANDINI : haan

KABIR : tu usss mili??

NANDINI : nahi wo actually jab tum log bath karethe thabi sari bath sunli thi

DHRUV : thu teek hain na

NANDINI : haan bilkul

KABIR : lekin shona hame laga tu

NANDINI : kyaa kyaa laga ki roangi khud ko kamre main bandh karungi kana nahi kaongi pagal ho jaongi ye hi sab na

ALIA : nahi wo

Nandu bursts out into laughter

MUKTHI : tu aise kaise react kar sakthi hain

NANDINI : kyu

ALIA : baby you were waiting for him since past five years

NANDINI : haan tho aaj main khush isiliye hoon na ki finally mera intezar katham ho chuka hain

DHRUV : lekin

NANDINI : lekin kya tum logon ko kya lagtha hain ki soha sach main manik ki gf hain

MUKTHI : kyu nahi hain kya

NANDINI : nahi hain bilkul nahi hain

DHRUV : tujhe kaise patha hain

NANDINI : chehre pe lika hain

ALIA : kyaa

NANDINI : yehi ki wo jhut bolra hain

KABIR : mujhe kuch samaj nahi ara hain

NANDINI : hmm mujhe bi lekin don't worry ham jaldi sab sought out karlenge

MUKTHI : tu usse mili kya

NANDINI : haan bi naa bi

KABIR : matlab

NANDINI : baad main samjaongi

DHRUV : lekin ab tu karegi kya

NANDINI : main kuch nahi lekin haan tum log usse normally behave karoge

ALIA : what

NANDINI : haan guys dekho hamari relationship main jo problem hain wo alag hain lekin jo FAB 5 ka relationship hain wo alag hain tho isliye tum log vaise hi rahoge jaise pehle the

MUKTHI : lekin baby

NANDINI : guys please wo aaj hi vapas aya hain I want to see his smile

FAB 4 smiles and nods there heads

NANDINI : chelo vaise bi manik bahuth der se aise hi kada hain

All shout in unison "ooo"

Nandu smiles and "shhh chelo"

So here is the update for all those who were sending me messages to update soon I could only manage this so I hope you are happy and now start commenting because jitne lambe comments utni jaldi agli update 😊

105

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

manandeeplove

@manandeeplove

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Lovely update...
awww...manan...
sooo pure...sooo cute...

manik ...
unknowingly u confessed everythng ...
loved it...

nandini...
finally she got her manik...her love...her trust...

she knew him better than himself...
mili usse aur nahi bhi mili...
awesomely beautiful...

lets see...
what nandini will do to make manik spill the beans...

cont soon
waiting

Quote

samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

love it ...
soha is sweet yaar ..
manik bachke nandu is going to irritate u so much .
aww manik is adoring her but his bad luck she still dnt saw him ..
update next part soon ..
if possible ..
thnks for soon update ..
cont .