Manan ff: {Socha Naa Tha} Part 8B/precap (page6) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Not fair.. This is so small..
Plz next time big update...oh plz na 😛 continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😭 I Know u all are very dessapoint wd small updates..and i'm really soorrryyy for that guyzz..plz maf kar do...kan pakar k soory.. 👏

<font size="4">Part 3</font>

Cabir called Nandini,nd she was turning back for to see the owner of the voice bt someone push him nd she was about to fall bt sudenly manik caught her by her waist, for the first tym their eyes meet nd they both are lost in eachothers eyes..Manik'pov: Oh god she is so beautiful! Her lips!!I just wanted to kiss her right here r8now..Manik shutup what r u thinking?
Nandini's Pov: Oh freak!he is so damn handsome! hez this smell making me crazy..Nandu shutup what r u thinking!
And then Nisha's shout broke their eyelook.
Nisha:Nandu tu thik hai,tujha lagi to nahi?
dn nandini straightn her self from manik's grip.
Manik: You ok?
Nandini: yeah i'm fine..Thnks..Cabir:heey nandini! what's up? Nandini: hi,cabir,I must say your clg is very nice..
Cabir: yes,clg to acha hai he uska sath mere frnds bhi bohot acha hai.This is my frnd Manik
Nandini:hi Manik,i'm Nandini Khurana... &Thnks once again for saving me...Manik: no,no hat's ok.. bytheway i'm Manik,Manik Malhotra.. (Then they both shake their hands by looking eachothers eyes smillingly)Nandini: guyz this is my best frnd Nisha...She is also in this clg..Nisha:hi,,guyzz...!Manbir:hi...Nisha..Nandini: guyzz we got a go..We have a cls.. So we hv to rush..So see u ltr..By..Cabir: areh par.. (Cut in the middle by manik)Manik: Ok..Bye..See u... (Now cabir is confused)Finish...Abhi itne less update par to itna hi milega...Bt nxt part I'll try to update soon ❤️Guyzz.. If itne less respons he ata faha na then I don't know weather i'll be abe to continue this ff or not... I'm very sad wd the respons...
Edited by FarialoveManan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeeahh i'm back..Actually I was thinking not to continue this ff bt after todays epiesode I'm soo damn happy that I thought Manan k liya itna to karhi sakti hu..Hehe enjoy... ❤️ ❤️


<font size="4">PART 4</font>

Cabir: tune ussa jane kyun bola?
Manik: udhar dakh...Whoz comming.
Cabir: ohh..So agar alya,mukti&dhruv na nandini ko dakhliya to wo log samaj jayanga ki nandini is ur new target nd they will try to save nandini frm u.R8?
Manik: R8..Bara samajdar ho gaya hai tu ajkal..Cabir: hehe very funny..Mukti: what' up guyz! whats so funny.? Manik: wo kuch nahi,let's go to the cantin..Dhruv: yeah..I'm very hungry. Aliya: baby, y u didn't tell me that u r hungry? (dhruv&aliya is madly & deeply in lv wd echothr) Cabir: lo ji shuru ho gaya indono ka..Manik: yeaa I swear..Kaisa kar lata hai this two..!! Mukti: wo to jab tujha hoga then we will see..Manik: Oh plz mujha payar nahi hoga.Dhruv: yes, as if u kno ur futcher.. (And all starts laughing like an idiot) Manik: whatever!

After Clg
Nisha: Nandu I'm goingfor shopping..tu chale gi? Nandini.: No yaar i'm tired tu ja..And take my car i'll go from auto..Nisha: are u sure nandu.Tu aur auto se. .!! Nandini: don't worry i'll manage.. U go. Bye.. NIsha : ok bye..tc..[ and all this things were noticed by someone.. ofcourse who else.. Manik Malhotra..]Manik's povShe is going home alone...should I drop her...No,no wo bachi thori ha...And if she refuse! but she is sweet she won't.. Nandini was waiting for a auto...bt suddenly a blck BMW stops in front of her...and she is trying to see the face of the owner... Manik: hey,nandini,,waiting for someone?? Nandini: yeaa w8ing for auto..Bt see ek auto bhi nahi hai..Uff..Manik: haha.. Come i'll drope ...wase bhi tumha auto mai ja ne ki habit nahi hogi.. Nandini:noo,,that's ok..I'll manage..Manik: oh,come on nandini don't be so formal..Come.. (And he open the door of the car) Nandini: okk.Thanks.. 💔 I know no one iss going to reafd it,,but still I write this for MANAN bcz they are back again. 🥺
Edited by FarialoveManan - 9 years ago
Palchinn thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..
Awesome update..
Please post next chapter soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing updates
read 2 in a go
thank god u continued
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here is the next part..Guyzz nd thanks for appriciating me thora sa..It was really neded for me... enjoy,,hope u guyz like it

<font size="4"> Part 5 </font>

[COLOUR=RED] manik is driving nd nandini is looking outside...finelly manik starts the converstin.. [/COLOUR]


Manik: so,how was your firstday at clg? Nandini: not that bad.Acha hi tha,just little bit tiaring... Manik: soo..Tum alone rehti ho yeaa parents k sath? Nandini: actually me n Nisha hum ek sath rehta hai..mom dad k sath nahi.. Manik: oww.. Nandini: u tell me somthng about u..I heard that u r a very good singer? Manik: really! tum ne kaha hai to ho sakta hai.. Nandini : acha! stop flirting.. Manik : noo! i'm not flirting! i'm serious! agar tumhari jaise itne beautiful girl mujha koi complement dagi to wo to sach he hoga. Nandini: oh,plz manik I also heard that clg ki har hot girls tumpe marti ha... Manik: acha ek hi din mai itna infrmtn nikal liya about me! not bad! Nandini: aisa kuch nahi hai wo to bas.. Manik: ha o to bas kaya nandini..bolo bolo.. Nandini: wo to bas girls were talking abot u nd I heard that.. Manik: acha..!! Kaya bol rahe tha..? Nandini: yeaahii ki tum kitne bare flart hoo.. ( nd she stars to laugh nd manik was just stairing At her..) kaya hu manik?? Manik: wo nthng tumhara ghar aagaya... Nandini: ohh,,thnks,,for the lift.. Manik: thanks se kam nahi chalega..I want smthng else... (nandini's eyes poped out aftr listing this nd she asks shookingly) Nandini: what?? kaya?? Manik : dont worry..Waisa kuch nahi...I just want u to be frnd wd u...So, frnds?? ( nandini was very happy after hearing.This bcz she loves to make new frnd nd she smillingli noded nd take his hand for hand shake nd says ofcourse..) Manik: thanks,,now I should leave..Bye... Nandini: bt manik,,come inside na?? Manik: not today,phir kabhi..Now i hv to leave.. Nandini: bt next tym pakka okk... Manik: okk pakka... Nandini: bye... Manik's pov: yeeaahh!! first step complet..Mra.Nandini I prmz next 15 days k ander u will be my gf..Haha.. Nandini's pov : oh god hez such a nice guy...He speeks so sweetly..Nd he asks m for frnship..!!Oh god..this guy will made me crazy!! AT THE EAVINING===== nandini was cheaking her fb frnd repusts nd then she found maniks repust too..she imediatly xcpt his reqst..she gets very happy seeing him online... manik starts to send msgs.. Manik: wHAT's up...my new frnd..?Nandini: smiles nd replied nthng great..What about u?Manik: thnking about u.they chat wd eachother for very long time...they talk about their life,frnds,gf,bf,, they started to know eachother thora thora Nd nandu started to liking manik,,,Manik was also very impressed wd nandini's thinking... Finish...Guyzz aj k update thora big tha..So aap og v thora big big like cmnt kar dena pllzzz
Edited by FarialoveManan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey..i read ur ff today ..!!
nd i quite liked the concept..!!
bt u update so short parts...instead of writing 3-4 short parts sab ko combine karke single part update na!!
nd ur stry is going great..update soon..do pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
just read all the parts and it's so interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6
Few days past,Manik & Nandini became vry good frnds..They both started to feel for eachother..Manik also knows that his feelings for nandini is genuine...& he xcpted the fact..Evryone was noticing there closeness.bt some people is happy by seeing them together,some r confused & some one have evil eye on them..that person is really not hapy by seeing them.
Nandini & Nisha is in cantine...nandini is draking cold drinks then nisha asks nandini..
NISHA: nandu do u love him? NANDINI: love who!! NISHA: idiot manik,who else! (nandini starts caughing nd says) NANDINI: no,nahi,nthng like that,,,
tujha aIsa kyun lagta hai? NISHA: not only me pure clg ko aisa lagta hai.. NANDINI: Acha!! nahi aisa to kuch nahi hai.. NISHA: nandu u know na u can share wd me? NANDINI: yea ofcourse I know its just that I really don't know what is this feelings are! whenever I'M wd him I feel so good.That feelings are very diffrent..I never felt like this..NISHA: idiot that's love.

NANDINI: what love! kaya bakwas kar rahi hai? u know na i don't blv in lv..!! NISHA: YES,I know but your hearrt don't know it..u can't contrl ur heart nandu u r in lv wd manik xcpt it.. NANDINI: no,this can't happend..r u sure..?? NISHA: YES,I'm sure..Bas tuja realize karna baki hai... NANDIBI: But agar manik mujse payar nahi karta ho to? NISHA: hmm pata laga na parega.. (at music room,,fa5 is practecing suddenly mukti asks manik) MUKTI: manik,what's going on between u nd nandini? MANIK: what! we are frnds.. ALIYA: Realy! u r frnd wd a girl..oh plz manik..we are not dumb!! MUKTI: yeah we can see that she is your new target!! MANIK: no guyz,thiz time aisa kuch nahi hai...I'm not playing wd her.I srsly started to feel smthg for her...I don't know kab kaise..Honestly pahele maine socha tha that i can play wd her bt dhera dhera I felt she is very diffrent from other girlz MUKTI: manik,,tu,jhut to nahi bol raha na?? ALAYA: yea,if u r layeing then trust me i will kill u...MANIK: NO,guyzz trust me..i'm not lyieng...DHRUV: do u lv her? MANIK: may be.. (everybody gets very xcited after listening this nd jump on manik) ALIYA: omg!!finelly our manik is in love!! MUKTI: yeahh!! i can't blv it..I'm so happy..CABIR: so fineally tu majnu ban hi gaya..MANIK: cabirrr...!! DHRUV: tu iss paga ko chor aur yea bata nandini ko batane kab wala hai? MANIK: abhi tak kuch socha nahi bt very soon.. ( scene shifted to nandini nd nisha they are at cantine talking about manik sudenly a girl came) Nisha: oh..Hi..Nandini: hey...Soha.How are u? SOHA: hi,girlzz how r u!? NISHA: Yeah,,we are fine..tum kaya kar rahi ho yaha?kuch kam tha? NANDINI: Nishhh...come na soha seat wd us.. SOHA: yea,sure..so nandini all good? lagta hai tumha apna dream boy mill gaya hai.. (before nandini could say anything nisha says to soha) NISHA: why tumha kyun batai ge nandini? nd tumha kyun janna hai? SOHA: nahi wo to bass aise hi.. then she saew that manik is comming so she gotup from the chair nd go to manik...Actualky she was going to manik only for showing nandini..Here nisha and nandini was giving her a disgasting look.. SOHA:hi,manik..how r u? MANIK: hi,soha..i'm fine..what about u..? SOHA: not fine. ..i'm angry wd u.. MANIK: Why maine kaya kiya?? SOHA: I knew it tum vhul jao ga..manik tum ne kaha tha na that tum mujha gitter play karna sikho ga..?? MANIK: Oh..yeah,sry I forgot don'tworry mai tum ha kal sikha dunga... SOHA:realy manik!! thank u do much.(nd she hugged him nd manik hugged her back) here nandini was hell angry on manik she got up from chair nd left from cantine..
Edited by FarialoveManan - 9 years ago

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