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Trisha

@BarbieNiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#881

Wowww
Awesome Amazing Superb update
Just loved it
Waiting for next part
Continue soon

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#882

supercalifragalistic xpalidicous...bht lamba word hai na actually aaj hi pada toh socha use kar loon super super update itne sare twists and turns ek hi update mai bt pad k maza aa gya din ban gaya manik ki zabrdasti ki shaddi and jack ki masti and flirting with nandu then their fight amazing update continue soon loved it

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Kajal

@angel2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#883

freaking awesome update mawara..really unbelievable..so unexpected update..sachi..twist was way too best..

but..am having a doubt..in 13th chapter ..manik told her..when did he saw nandini first time..and she was totally blank out..i have a feeling you are planning something big..am 100% sure..i have full faith in you..

but both updates were best..as always..

loads of love

kajal

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falah5

@falah5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#884

I saw your name in hall of fame and happen to read all your ffs in one go within 2days...u r an incredible writer and your dedication is remarkable. kudos to you girl.👍🏼
But in all your ffs "tum mile" "love" and also this dheere dheere. the female lead character is highly annoying. You always portray your female lead as somebody weak and who was harassed in the past and in present is highly dependent physically and mentally on male lead . Either they behave very much annoyingly childish or highly immature for their age.
I hope you take this as constructive criticism and in your future FFs you portray nandini's character as shown in the show where she is mentally strong and not a cry baby.

Edited by falah5 - 9 years ago

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Rasna

@princi_tia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#885

waah!! bada waala update, but i didn't expect that the twist would be like this. Harshad is such a manipulator, he can do anything na. Fab 5 is always fabulous and fantastic too. Fab 4 really took care of nandu in absence of manik but that kidnapping scene was so not nice. Finally our angry hulk manik married our cute si nandu in the most dramatic way.
I am waiting for their grand waala wedding after the filmy proposal, uske liye abhi time hai that i know. Now manan are legally husband and wife, and i am quite excited to see how their new journey goes on.

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asmita46

@asmita46

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Posted: 9 years ago

#886

awww kya twist he agr aise harmful mazedar twist k bad itna mitha mile toh twist manjur hehehe... bloody jerkshad huh pendant baht assahe. eagerly waiting for manan proposal and special night

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sadia_mohona

@sadia_mohona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#887

Awesome update...nandini gets 4 over protective brothers who are not less than manik...fab 4 treat her like a small baby...i really like their bonding.harshad!how dare he to kidnap nandini.kidnap to ki uparse usko manipulate karne ki kowshish ki...the unexpected twist...their marriage...well i love the twist...waiting for next update

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: falah5
I saw your name in hall of fame and happen to read all your ffs in one go within 2days...u r an incredible writer and your dedication is remarkable. kudos to you girl.👍🏼
But in all your ffs "tum mile" "love" and also this dheere dheere. the female lead character is highly annoying. You always portray your female lead as somebody weak and who was harassed in the past and in present is highly dependent physically and mentally on male lead . Either they behave very much annoyingly childish or highly immature for their age.
I hope you take this as constructive criticism and in your future FFs you portray nandini's character as shown in the show where she is mentally strong and not a cry baby.

Hmm..! i am disappointed from your comment..! CRY BABY and all? Yaar i can't understand you all readers sab ki demands ko put in kar kar kay i am tired kise ko kuch pasand hai tou kise ko kuch..! jis ko nahi pasand na plz don't read..! i am hell annoyed and tired by all this criticism..! First you are praising me and second you are objecting on my female lead character.. Chuck it girl..! just chuck it please..! Pasand nahi hai don't read..! Main justifications day day kar thak gai hoon..! like seriously.!