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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AN1993

but vampires can't eat food...please dont make vampies eat normal food..bcoz they are lifeless souls...


Sorry! But in my story vampires can eat normal food. But only if they don't drink human blood and drink only animals blood.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update pm me if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome concept...
loving all the characters...each have a different story...
can't wait to find out how the story goes...
nandu is botha vampire and a witch...very interesting...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guy's I'm going to update 1st part of this story. Hope you all like it and please comment and likes thick. Guy's I've write a note on both my stories than why u all don't answer that. It's very important please someone tell me about that 😡

Chapter - 1

In New Zealand

At nandu place

"A little more, a little more and than splashhh !!!

A lady is lying in swimming pool and it's looking like she is sleeping and someone has thrown her in Swimming pool. Her age is looking like she is in her 50s.

"Nandiniii, Navyaaa "

That lady shouts. By listening her shout a man who is looking like he is of 30 years came there. He is looking very smart and handsome. He asks

"Who did this to you stella "

Stella spokes "who else manish other than our two not so sweets little witches.

Listening this Manish laughs and says

"Those two can stop their pranks and mastis "

Stella "but why I always become their target"

Suddenly two voices came from back and Stella feels 4 hands hugging her from back

"Because we both love you "

Manish speaks " Nandini and Navya come in front"

Both nandini and navya come and stand in front of Manish with their heads low .

Manish "why you both throw aunty stella. You both know she is a normal person. She doesn't have power like us. See her age. Than also she is staying with us from your childhood just to take care of you both.

Nandini - " from next time we will never use our powers on her."

Navya - "same pinch "

By listening this all of them chuckles. Manish spoke

Manish - "if you want to trouble her than also you will not be able to trouble her"

All three looks at him confused by his words

Nandini "what are you trying to say uncle"

Manish "I'm trying to say that tomorrow you both are going to dehradun by tomorrow's flight"

Stella " ohh! Yeah, I have toh forget about that"

Nandini and Navya both are shocked by listening this. Both together speaks

Both "but why "

Manish speaks seriously "that you will come to know, when we will go today to the old palace to the Lords and also navya your relatives from dehradun 'Sinha's also wants to meet you. How many letters they have sent to yours father and Manoj sinha's brother dies. They want to take care of you as the last memory of his younger brother"

Nandini and Navya don't know now what to speak. After sometime Manish again speaks

Manish "and nandini you also have to go with her. Because of 3 reasons 1 - you both are inseparable. 2 - you also have not meet your cousin from so long and you also have not gone to his marriage. So,he is also living in dehradun toh you both can meet him also. "Also u both have a big responsibility which you will get to know today when we go at old palace and meet Lords which you both have to fulfill. "

Navya and nandini became confuse after listening the last sentence.But they decided to be quiet and will see the responsibility at old palace only

Manish "now u both go and pack your bags for tomorrow's trip "

Nandini and Navya suddenly got dissappear from there into thin air and Manish sigh

Stella " Manish you don't have to take tension. One day you have to tell them about this. It's their destiny "

Manish " but with this truth coming out their life is also going to risk. When other people come to know about this they will try to harm them, to take their positions "

Stella " but now u don't have to worry about them. They knows how to take care of themselves. Till the time they both are together no one can harm them."

By listening this Manish smiles a little and then he also vanishes into thin air. By seeing this stella sigh and speaks

Stella " kaash I also have some powers than I don't have to walk that much and then I also don't have any age problems "

Then after sometime she walks inside the mansion to take a nap before helping her two little witches in packing. Because she is so sure that till now their will be a total mess.


At other side

In India

At malhotra mansion

All the three brothers are doing their most common thing. That is cabir and dhruv are fighting that who wins in the race and manik is trying to sort out their fight. After sometime manik's phone rings which diverted their attention. Manik picks up his phone seeing the caller in which is written " Mukti ".

Manik "hello "

Mukti "please come at home your champ is very angry with you and has locked his door and had ordered me, abhi and aliya to not try to break the door, and has say he will come out only when his manik's chachu will come. He is saying that you have promised him something for yesterday and you have break that promise. "

Manik " Shit ! Mukti u don't take tension I'm coming in few minutes "

Mukti "okay "

By saying this they both cut the call. Manik sees his brother standing at the far corner of the room and trying to act casually and say

Manik "I know u both have listened my talks and u also want to come there. So, what we are waiting for let's go "

Both cabir and dhruv smile listening this and in a second they all are standing outside their mansion.

Manik "guys now we can see who is the fastest "

Listening this cabir laugh Sarcastically and say

Cabir " ya! like truly manik when you are racing with us than how can we win. You are the fastest vampires from all the vampires whom we met till now "

Listening this manik chuckles and say

Manik " but you both can try na to win from me"

Cabir and dhruv shrugged and in a blink of they are running so, fast that for a normal person is impossible to see them. After 5 mins they all are standing in front of Sinha's mansion. The distance of malhotra mansion from sinha's mansion for a normal person to cover will take atleast 40 minutes.

They all jump in a room from the window which is on first floor. They all see a child is sitting on a bed his back facing them.

That child speaks to manik in his brain while he manik all other's. So, no one can listen their talks

Child " partner you have promised me that tomorrow only we both will go outside for some fun. Because I am getting bored by sitting in a room. Because my vacation are going on "

Manik "Sorry, aarav I have forgotten. But we will go today, OK !"

Aarav jumping excitedly on the bed

Aarav "ya! okay, but from next time you will not break promise "

Manik " pakka ! "

At last cabir spoke

Cabir "we all are also present here can you talk normally "

Dhruv " yess! Manik you have also blocked us, so when you both talks in mind, we cannot listen your talks "

Manik " Yaa! Because you both are very nosy "

By listening this both of their faces fell.

Manik opens the door of the room. And instantly mukti, aliya and abhi came inside. Mukti hugs aarav and say

Mukti "beta never do this again "

Aarav "okay! mom and sorry mom , dad and maasi for troubling u all.

Abhi "no, son u don't need to say sorry, just keep this in mind that never do this in future "

Aarav "okay! dad"

All smiles listening this. After sometime manik spoke.

Manik " Mukti I'm taking aarav with us outside for some fun "

Mukti " Manik u don't have to ask me, he is your nephew also and I knew when you are nothing can happen to him "

Abhi "we trust you all "

Then after sometime cabir and manik takes aarav with them outside and dhruv goes outside with aliya.

At evening they all return simultaneously like 1 - aliya and dhruv then manik, cabir and aliya. After dropping aliya and aarav at Sinha's mansion. They also meet manoj sinha and shivani sinha and after exchange pleasintries with them , they all return to malhotras mansion.


End of 1st part. Tell me how much you like this. Pls comments and like pls. 😉😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Awesome
I wish mere pass bhi powers hoti
Plzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Nice update waiting to know what nandus uncle was talking about n manans meet it should be like love at first sight now vampires will meet the two vampire+witch.
Update soon I'm very eager to read further parts so pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
it was amazing update. Please post the next part soon. And do pm me if possible. As your story is like my favorite movie twilightsage. Want to know more about it. Thankyou dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awsome start yaar...super excited for MaNans 1st meeting hope it happens in the next chapter.
Plz do update soon. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
It was awesome ... I really would love to read further ...super duper hit ...the story line is just amazing ...please do continue ...I have send u pm please if possible include me in ur buddy list and send pm when u update please...I just love vampire and ware wolves ...u are doing a great jid sweetheart...::update sooonnn ...will be waiting for ur further updates...love u ...tc...:with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Amazing
Superb update
Lovd it
Continue soon

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