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hopedolly08

@hopedolly08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#881

Awesome story...n take ur time...no worries...n don't forget to PM okay...pls...I'm waiting...

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Naj91

@Naj91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#882

Amazing update Kavya
I loved it so much
Specially MaNan scene
It was magical when they were together and Nandini was on top of Manik
It was for me the most romantic scene till now
I loved when realization hit Nandini and she beat Manik..wow
But still they love and care each other so much
Mukti's expression was priceless when she found Manik..wow
Eagerly waiting for the fun of the journey
Thanks for the update
Continue when possible

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 9 years ago

#883

ohh my so many things have happend..lovely updates...

Loved Chapter 18,19 and 20..his hide game and her annoyed expressions...

felt bad when she was expecting him and thought he left her again...Thanks that you made her feel bad for doubting him, accusing him without knwing his side of the story...

lol..special Biryani with a smiley...lolz..this guy is very cute...

and next,...he saved her...his POV is kinda practical...banda trying hard to bring back his love...let us see what happens...

Thanks for the PMs

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Chocolava14

@Chocolava14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#884

Omg...a verryy longg oneee😉😆

It was really good😊

Finally manik's syd is heree...ahahee😉👏

The song mehn...soo aweesoomeee👏👏

Must say u wrote it very welll😳

Qoutes weree awww😳

Loveely

Always keep writing😊

Ps- srry fr late reply was busy...today was last exam...😊

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RidzKhambhati

@RidzKhambhati

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Posted: 9 years ago

#885

Its awesome yaar..wow Manan part...& thanks for pm.. Hey waiting for update...post next part soon & pm me...

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riya

@Eva.manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#886

Hey kavuu... Sorry for late ho gayi to comment but kya karun very busy +2 and saath mein medical ki coaching time kaam hi mil paata hai. Anyways coming to the chapter it was fab ...as usual u rocked it finally manan r back ... The ddlj seen was gud and the songs mere samne wali ...loved it ..thanks for the pm ..continue soon ...eagerly waiting...

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star_struck

@star_struck

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#887

Okay as I had mentioned ki Ghar pe renovation ka kaam chalu hai..so tomorrow might be..ekdum might be I can write as mom-dad will be out..So I'll try me level best to update YOU BECOME MY STORY and BECAUSE I LOVE MY BEST FRIEND...

But phele konsi..tell me...??

PLEASE...

PROMO CHAIYE??