I lik ur story a lot...thnx fr sharing it wth us...
Manan's fights r lws cute...I lws njy them...
Dis chp ws intense in a way...
Manik xprsd his flngs...
Hope nandu lso accepts n xprses hr flngs...
I lik d pace in which d story is movng...
I don't think it is fast ...atlst fr me...
But ya..as u r d writr u kno well wht is bst fr ur story...
Wl b lukng frwrd fr d nxt updt...
Continue soon...