ADarkMaNanSS-WILL MAKE YOU MINE CH-7 PG-30 25/10 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
it was awesome
eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi i am your new reader
loved the 4 updates
desperately waiting to read the next
so plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
loved it
Manik is such a jerk!
After knowing that she's pregnant he let her go!
According to me nandu should never ever forgive him
aliya did the right thing by slapping him
he deserved it
anyway update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay manik is being a jerk.. nandini should surely give him a tough time.. Nice different SS...
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's oswm,,,,,,,šŸ‘ plz jaldi jaldi nxt part post koro na 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love to read dark ff.. And trust me ur ff is one of the best dark ff I have ever read.. I like to read more.. Can't wait.. Pls next part.. Update soon..

Love
Suji :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Dear the chapter is very beautiful.

Now fab 4 clearly get the idea that

Jahnvi is manik daughter.

It's very good to know that they

Are are sporting her.

Manik is also crying over his

Bad deeds. ..it's very interesting to see.

What he will do now.

It's very interesting chapter.

I am liking it the way you unfolding. ..the story.

Please update soon can't wait to read more.

Thanks for sharing this chapter.


Keep smiling.


Stay blessed.



Dear please don't be disappointed with the comments.

We are loving your story very much.

And waiting for more.

Thanks





Thanks for pm.


Love. .
Jyoti.




Thank you di..
Aap ke sarre comments padhti hoon...
Bohot encourage karte ho..
I will surely update soon..
It's just that i was a bit disappointed but aap dekho ki itna likhne ke baad last update pe silent readers ne bhi comment kiya...
And jab comment kam hote hai toh lagta hai ki story achhi nahi hai..
Jo comment kar rahe hain wo bhi bas iss liye kar rahe hain kyunki story manan ki hai so..

I will surely give an update tomorrow..
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Posted: 9 years ago
when will you update... 😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start... Read all d parts in one go. Nice story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well i am happy now.. Off course with the response and ya please agar kissi ko bura laga toh phir se SORRY and late update ke liye bhi SORRY...

CHAPTER-5

FLASHBACK.. ( 5 YEARS BACK )

Nandini's POV

C- hey nandini are you okay..

Said Cabir patting my cheeks...

D- hey nandini open your eyes..

After a few minutes when they sprinkled water on my face i got concious..
Well yes, i fainted...

A- are you fine..

N- yes , thank you guys..

Mu- no problem.. Waose nandini i have seen ki tumhe bohot zyada chakkar aane lagen hai...I think ki you should see a doctor..

N- yeah even i was feeling the same..achha guys now i will leave baki ki discussion kal kar lenge and please Manik ko bhi bol dena nahi toh mujhpe chillayega..

D- yeah ok..

N- than i'll see you all..bye..

All- bye..

TWO DAYS LATER..

N- may i come in..?

Voice- yeah come in..so...

N- woh doctor from last one week i have been feeling dizzy and i vomit frequently...

Dr- ok ap bathiye and main aapke kuchh tests karti hoon..

N- yeah ok..

AFTER TESTS..

Dr- so Nandni it's a good news aap pregnant hai...three weeks..

And as the Doc. Said this...everything went blank for Nandini..

N- are you sure??

Dr- umm..yeah..why aren't you happy??
Doctor found it a bit strange..

N- umm...nahin aisa kuchh nahi hai.. Achha thank you aab main chalti hoon.

Dr- yeah and take care of yourself and aapni sdiet ka khayal rakhna..

N- yeah sure..

NEXT DAY.. MANIK'S CABIN..

MANIK'S POV..

Someone knocked my cabin's door while i was doing my work..

M- come in..

And then i saw nandini coming in.. She looked stressed.. Although i started feeling something for her but my EGO overpowers my heart every time..

N- manik..mm

As she said Manik i looked at her marrowing my eyes firstly she called me MANIK and secondly she was STAMMERING in just taking my name..

N- i..i...me..mean..mm..manik sir..

M- yeah..

N s.t.- no nandini tujhe usse bolna hoga... Baki kuchh nahi pata just bol de..

N- manik i am pregnant..

And BOLT...
i didn't knew what to say.. Did she said..?? What i heard..?? Or i just thought..??

M- WHAT..COME AGAIN..!!!

N- i am PREGNANT..!!!

M- WHAT..I MEAN HOW..??

N- do i have to tell you ki how i got PREGNANT??

M- ohh just shut up.. And if are trying to pick on me...then you would PAY HARD..!!

N- not again...i am just fed up.. " main " , " me " , " myself "... Isske ilawa bhi hai duniya..it's not about you always.. And if you think that i am trying to pick on you then you are highly mistaken..Mr.Malhotra.. I have better things to do.. And waise bhi har chizz.. Every thing it's not about you..
It's about a life which is growing inside me... My child...
And i thought ki biologically...it will be your child as well so i should tell you..

M- just SHUT UP YOU SL*T.. How can you say ki yeh mera bachha hai... Main janta hoon tum jaise logon ko..

Although i knew it was a wrong move but still i did it..i just didn't knew what to say..
I just yelled and she started crying silently..

N- just mind your language...JUST MIND YOUR BLOODY LANGUAGE..!!

But this time she also shouted and before i could say anything she continued..

N- and if you think so then ek bari is bachhe ko world me aane do hum DNA TEST karayehge.. And agar yeh bachaa tumhara hua na so then i will LEAK IT IN MEDIA..
that THE MANIK MALHOTR ia a WOMANISER and i got PREGNANT with his child..

After she completed , i was all shocked..like in a trauma..

M- are you sure..??..

N- yeah..

M- ( still in a trauma ) abort it..

And that was it..i got out of the trauma with a THUD..
no, she didn't slapped me... She left the room.. And i knew the damage was done..

OUTSIDE CABIN..

NANDINI'S POV..

I came out and was going to the parking when cabir saw me..

C- hey are you okay.. Why are you crying..

N- nothing..yeah and the deal is over..

C- what..!! But..

N- no cabit it's just that i cant do it anymore..

And i left..

FLASHBACK ENDS..

S- what seriously usne aisa kiya..

N- haan.. Achha chalo bye.. Janvi jag gayi..

SAMETIME LONDON HOTEL..

D- are you MAD..!!!

M- nahi..ww..woh..dhr..dhruv..

D- nahin dhruv kya.. Bol tu PAGAL hai kya... Kuchh bolta kyun nahhin..

C- haan bol chup kyun hai..??

M- guys dekho aab isse kuchh nahi hoga.. Aab mujhe kuchh karna hoga...


And this is called BACK WITH A BANG..!!!
Hehehe..i know i am very late.. And i am sorry ( kaan pakad ke ).. Please maaf kar do..!!! Ouchh..
Achha chalo joote - chappal toh mat maro yaar..lagta hai..
Nai- nai guya tamatar bhi nahin.. Please mujhe pasand nahi..!!

Achha mujhe pata hai ki aap sab ko gussa ayega but kya kare story yahi hai..
And dekho toh kya din aagaye hain.. Chee chee aise karta hai kya koi??
And ABORT IT..!! I know ki yeh toh kissi ne expect nahi kiya hoga..!!
So, achhe-achhe , lambe-lambe comment karo and like karo..
Nahi toh main roungi.. Bohot zyada..!!😭
Please Please..!!!

LOADS OF LOVE..

ADYA..!!



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