MaNan SS//Lips Do Lie//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150

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sahasimren

@sahasimren

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Posted: 9 years ago

#581

Oh my god.

This is even better than you last ff.

This is just so exciting.

Loved loved it.

Thank you so much.

Post the next update soon please.

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hpzaya

@hpzaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#582

hey...no its fun am laughing while reading your ff...its so much n light hearted loving manik and nandini...both are equal...pls keep writing dear...😊

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prrk86

@prrk86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#583

I seriously hope manik is not criminal but under

Cover Agent kind of thing and story is so unique I loved it

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#584

Yaar i was frequently checking my account for ur update.

Loved dis update.Aww manik cant do wait to kiss her.

Poor nandu she is hurt ,manik was really mean yaar ,he could have helped her.

He s sooo possessive.

Aww i have to wait for next sunday for next update.😭

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#585

Don't stop and keep on rocking as you are doing! God! I love this

The best part for me was the last part when Nandu clears it out that she ain't a dumb chick who will chase him after the way he treated her. I love her!

Manik is I don't know, a mystery, the moment I think he is normal he goes on to being a very unpredictable person. How con someone be like that?

The four of the group definitely have some game going on, a chip can mean lots of things and right now it seems to be with Nandu. I don't know, wild guess

Go on! I want Nandu to get respect and if Manik is her guy, he needs to show it to her

Continue soon

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Soha

@sohalee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#586

mysterious manik

Nandani is now gonna act all strong heheh!!!

lets c what is gonna happen nexxt

he kicked her out of his room now she is gonna teach him a lesson

ENjoying this story so much

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khadupam

@khadupam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#587

Wow that was superb
Kya Hua MANIK Ko
Can't wait to read more continue soon

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Dashreyaa

@Dashreyaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#588

It was totally mind blowing...

you really can write the two different story at the same time and next time don't doubt on yourself...

coming to the update...

⭐️⭐️⭐️

yaar loving this manan a lot...

so cute of Nandini to check his room like that to find out who he is and end up caught by him...

they kissed again...😳

Then Nandini was ordering him to bring her stuff to her room and Manik being Monster Manik didn't want to help her...

manik is full on jealous mood...

So I guess the chip is with Nandini...it was just a guess for now...

I am also like Nandini...who is Manik????

omg I am addicted to this story dear...it was full of suspense and trill and of course romance also there...

this is a total package and don't say you are writing crap next time...

as I get the feel of watching a movie rather then reading it...god only you have capacity to do it...

👏👏👏👏

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Suma1973

@Suma1973

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Posted: 9 years ago

#589

Hi first thanx for da pm .I guess I ll start all my comments this way only an awesome update .truly all ur update make me reread umpteen number of time at least till nxt update.Now even I am curious who's Manik,nandu smart to make him jealous n take revenge .Who asked u to stay so far from me superb dialogue crsly😃luv the way u twist n turn u r stories. And yesterday exs war comment I typed at least 3 tyms n could not get it posted hope at least dis 1 will reach u.these slipping incidents draw them closer isn't it.how many tyms nandu slips Manik hold her still its sooo romantic.their fyts as romantic as der romance.they luv r hate each other incidents btwn them r sooo cute .MissM.M..M our Manini multhy malhotla sooo cute waiting will her missing make her parents come close or add fuel to fire.shh got to wait till nxt weekend na.it sucls but OK.intezar spl for ur updates is always sweeet.waiting for u ,praying god it net keeps working while u require it .ok#thanks#bye.