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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

this was really really cute yrrr..😛

but last part was really horrifying😭😕

...hehe ...lol😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Awesome update

Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
Waiting for the next update
Update the next part soon

Thanks dear And I'll try to update soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

amazing ...

last part was mesmerizing ...
losing each other now is the last think thy can't imagine a minute without each other so pure ...

all the best ..

stay bless..

Thanks dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Sorry dear 4 late commenting...😭😭

Suprb update... Thnk u so much 4 d pm diya..

Manan romance as always rckin...😛
Lvd d way manik treats nandu...
His concern s so nice...

Nandu's shopping n meetin her frnd..
Hahaha.. 😆 final prt was awesome..
Waitin 4 manik's reactn aftr seeing nandu...

Awesomly penned dear.. Do continue...

It's okay dear ...and thank you SooO much😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiara115

I read all the parts just now .. and now I am thinking why u didn't find ur stories before .. They are actually good na best ...

Plz give more such stories to us ..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

I will and am glad you like it😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...

happy that manik wants to experience what being a husband feels like...

loved the gist that nandu bought for manik...waiting to see what their decision is about the honeymoon...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thanks dear😉😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Amazing update

manan were being naughty

...hehe ... Thank you😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys ...am back ...did u guys missed me ...well I toh missed you guys a lot ...a lot se bhi jyada ...but here I come with a short ...short update ...I hope you guys like it ...aur haa response was very nice 120+ likes ...and 10 pages of comments ...so niceee ...okay now here is ur update...ENJOY😛

Part-10 (A)


Manik stops the car in front of malhotra mansion ...manik looked at nandani who was sleeping peacefully in his arms ...she was holding him so tightly as if he is going somewhere ... manik smiled looking at her ...he kissed her forehead...and gently picked her up and entered in the house and came towards there room ...he placed her in the bed carefully ...make sure not to wake her up ...he put the quilt and sit beside her...caresses her hairs ...he was just looking at her without blinking ...

Manik Pov :

Today I want to make her best day ...but see what happen ...today ...I ...I was about to loose her ...she was about to hit ...agar aaj main naa aata toh ...nahi...nahi ...now I will not let anything happen to her ... I will protect her ...she ...she is my life ...my everything ...but the way that car was coming ...it's ...it's like ...they deliberately do that ...I don't understand what was happening ...I was so happy...we are so happy ...she was with me and now this ...but one thing is for sure ...I wouldn't let anyone to harm her ...

He looked at nandani and her peacefully face ...

Manik pov :

Aaj jo peace tumhare chahre par ha ...main usse kabhi jaane nahi dunga ...tum meri zindagi ho ...mere jine ki vajhe ...meri strength ...I wouldn't let anyone to snatch ur peace ...ur smile ...

He kissed her hand lovingly ...nandani smiled in her deep sleep bcz she realizes his touch ...manik smiled looking at her smiling face ...

His trance were broken by a knock ...manik left her hand and opened the door and saw his dad ...manik who was very worried for Nandani ...composed himself and said

Manik : Dad

Rohit : haa voh main

But he stops when he saw manik who was very worried

Rohit : kya hua manik sab thik ha naa

Manik couldn't hold it more ...he just hugged him tightly and told about the whole incident ...after listening this ...Rohit looked more worried ...that was didn't get unnoticed by manik

Manik worriedly said : dad kya hua ha
...sab thik ha naa ...

Rohit : haa ...voh ...

Rohit looked at nandani who was sleeping peacefully ...he smiled a little and said

Rohit : Manik...voh ...mujhe ...mujhe tumse kuch baat karni ha

Manik : haa dad boliye naa ...kya hua sab thik ha naa

Rohit looked at nandani and said : yaha nahi tum chalo mere saath ...

Manik looked at nandani and closed the door and follow Rohit ...both entered in the study room ...

Manik : Dad aakhir baat kya ha ...please kuch bataiye ...

Rohit : Manik do u remember mr. Mathur ...

Manik confusingly said : yes dad ...voh hamare rival ha ...par aap yeh ab ...

Rohit : Manik tumne unke bete ko jail bhijwaya tha...last week ...when u find that he is involving in drugs ...

Manik : haa par

Rohit : Manik mr. Mathur ne dhamki di ha
...he will do anything for harm us ...aur ab sab jaante ha ki meri weakness tum ho ...aur tumhari nandani...and I Don't Want anything happen to my children's ...issiliye main chahta hu ki tum log kuch time ke liye kshi chale jao ...kyunki yeh jo aaj hua

Manik angrily said : That means ...mera shak sahi tha ...voh uss mathur ne kiya ...how dare he ...how dare that jerk trying to harm nandani ...he have to pay for this ...am not leaving him ...I will not ...

He is about to go but Rohit stop him ...

Rohit : Manik pagal mat bano ...tum nahi jaante in logo ko ...they can go at any extent ...please understand beta ...abhi tum dono ke liye yahi thik hoga ...

Manik looked at him and said : Par aap

Rohit smiled looking at his sons concerned and said

Rohit : Don't worry about me ...am fine aur voh mujhe kuch nahi kar sakta ...vaise bhi main Mumbai jaa raha hu for some meetings aur main tumhe aur nandini ko Akela chod kar nahi jaa sakta issiliye ...

Manik : it's okay ...

Manik goes to his room ...but the words was still ringing in his mind ...the thought of hurting her ...makes him so weak ...if anything happens to her ...what eill he do ...he entered in his room and saw nandani who was up and was about to get up from the bed ...manik immediately runs towards her and said

Manik : why are you up ...that too so early ...if u need anything ...u should tell me naa ...

She is about to say something but again manik said ...

Manik : ab chup kyo ho ...kuch bolo naa

Nandani placed her hands on her chest and said

Nandani : what?

Manik looked at her in confusingly

Manik : what ? What ..what

Nandani : Exactly what happened to u ...why are you behaving like this ...

Manik looked here and there and said

Manik : Nothing ...Yaah it's nothing ...

Nandani raised her eye brows and said

Nandani : okay nothing ...aage bolo ...

Manik : kya

Nandani : vahi jo nothing ke aage ha ...jo tum mujhe nahi bata rahe ho ...

Manik : wiffy it's

Nandani : Nothing aage

Manik looked at her ...he knows there is no escape ...so he said

Manik : MUJHSE SHAADI KAROGI

Nandani looked at him in shock...hrr face is oO shape

Nandani : what?

Manik : yes will u marry me

Nandani : Manik Malhotra ...if u forgot am already ur wife ...do I need to show that certificate...whom u showed me...

Manik smiled and sat on the floor and holds her both hands and lovingly said

Manik : I knew ki hamari shaadi ho chuki ha ...toh tumhe mujhe toh voh certificate dikhane ki jarrurat nahi ha ...but the way we married ...it's not the right way...and I knew u always want a Indian wedding and I ruined that too ...so sorry for that ...so yaah mujhse shaadi karogi ...

Nandani : so u r asking me to marry you ...

Manik get up and side hugged her and smirkingly said

Manik smirkingly said: Naaa am not asking u ...u r toh already my wife naa ...so am telling you we are going to marry again ...

Nandani raised her eye brows and said : Accha ji

Manik smiled : Haaji

Nandani : aur agar main naa kahu toh ...

Manik : toh ...toh...haa...iss baar main ...tumhe ...utha kar le jaaunga ...

Nandani hit him with her small ...small hands ...manik laughed loudly ...

Manik : Accha ...acha bas ...

She stops and hugged him and manik hugged her back ...

Manik teasingly said : vaise yeh wwf jaisi wrestling kaha se sikhi ...

Nandani looked at him and punched him in his stomach ...

Manik fakingly said : aaooohhh

Nandani looked at him with concerned ...

Nandani : jyada lagi ...

Manik : hmm

Nandani felt guilty and looked down but manik again laughed loudly ...

Manik :...hehe...god my wiffy looked at ur face ...hehe ...

Nandani : bahot hassi aa rahi ha naa ...ab hasso

She picked the pillow and started bitting him ...

Manik : arre ...arre...acha baba sholly ...

He came on top of her and pecked her lips and said

Manik : I love you my wiffy

Nandani : I love you too my hubby



So how's it ...I hope you guys like it ...
Well it's quite enough long ...
So tell me which part u like The most
Aur haa this time I want
Long ...long comments
Tabhi update jaldi milegi
...hehe ...
Aur haa next update ...
I will give ff ...on 26 ...
Aur agar kal ho paya toh pakka dungi
Bye guys
Love you all
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛😛😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update was good. ..
Amaziing. ..
Loved it..
Grt wrk. ..
Keep it up. ..
Bye tc. ..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update. .. manik is very worried for her...
I hope sab thik ho... utha ke le jaunga part was the best
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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