MANAN vs ABEER OS By Aashna - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Oh my god how can i tell you how much i love your story
Its amazing i love it
I love everything
Mananromance issuperb
And abeer and manik hehehe amazing yaar
And manan talk i love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
am i dreaming or its real ...manan once again together n forever
hope it really happens as we all r missing manan sooo much
is it possible?nice update ...ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimnana

am i dreaming or its real ...manan once again together n forever

hope it really happens as we all r missing manan sooo much
is it possible?nice update ...ty for pm

nandani, manik will be super hero for his kids... he will look after them with care n love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Ohk guys its my first os coz i was missing manan very badly so i thought to write this coz we all know ke hum kitna b parth cast writers show ko bash kar le na dekhe but still fact is fact we all are missing our manan not manik not parth but our manan so keep myself in a sane state i thought to write this

Happy reading

She was standing infront of her aiyaapa
Nandini
Thank u so much aiyaapa u gave me my manik back i dont know how to thank u i dont have any words aiyyaapa i know you wont snatch my manik from me he wont leave me like appa or amma plz aiyyaapa always keep him safe agar koi musibat aaye to mujpe plz keep my love safe and happy
"She prayed to her aiyyappa tears brimmed in her eyes those three pain full month were flashing in front of her eyes she wiped her tears when her phone rang it was her monster a sweet smile came on her face she pick the
Call
"Where are you or kitna tym lgaogi come soon here i m waiting for you "manik said

"
"Arey wait na i m coming in ten "she said
"Ohk come soon "he said and cut the call

Nandini pov
I was missing you so much manik finally u came back to me hmara pyar ..hmari hope sab jeet gye manik and this tym i wont let anything happen to you i will protect you ..u were away from me for three months i was unaware by the fact u were in coma and kabir was under treatment nyonica mam ne tumhe mujse itna dur kr dia i couldnt find u but i now i wont let her snatch you from me we will be together forever and ever... I will be your shining star to always shine upon you to protect you from all the evil. Those three months I felt like my oxygen,my soul was snatched and hid in some box that was so suffocating par now I got you. And I will make every day of ours so so special. I've loved you for a thousands years and I can love you more

She reached college
Manik was waiting for her outside

"What took you so long hmm i know i know wahi auto nh mill rha hoga bola tha tumhe me pick krne ata h but your stubborn kabhi meri bat nh manti "he said pouting she pecked on his pout leaving him shocked

"What aise kya dekh rh ho apne boyfriend ko kiss karne ke liye i dont need anyone's permission "she said and winked at him.. he was blushing but he compose himself and that blush was quickly replaced by a playful smirk as he pulled her towards him catching her waist

"Hmm miss murthy even i dont need anyone's permission " while saying he leaned towrds her and she instantly pushed him

"Manik hum college ke bahar hai"

she was looking here and there avoiding eye contact from her

"Oh acha? Toh kya huva nanduuu we louuvvee each other and we can do anything we want as duniya vale hume pyaar karne se thodi na rokte hai? Aur mai kya darta hu kya kisi se?" He asked passing the cheesy line from his insides as nandini blushed scarlet and turned amazed by his words.

Suddenly she started laughing and said

"Yeewww Manik that was soo chessy!!" She said and laughed hysterically.

Suppressing the grin and the giggle in his stomach he mimicked her

"Manik I missed you so much! I cant stay without you. Tum meri zindagi ho. I was a dry leave of Autumn but when you came back you filled my world with springs happiness"she thought

She controlled her laughter as he said that and suddenly those painful memories of 3months without him was the worst nightmare of my you bring smile on my face again your reason of my smile manik "she thought

"Nandu kha kho gyi "manik said while waving his hand infront of her
"Kahi nh"she replied
"Ohk to chlo "he said
"Where"
"We are going to date nandu or tum na nh kar rh ho coz u know i cn kidnap like i did last tym "he said and winked at her

She was about to agree when her phone rang it was navya

"Ha navya bolo"she said
"Nandini plz help me na muje or kabir ko radio station jana hai or mukti is out abir ko akele kese chodu plz kya tum thodi dr ke liye uska khayal rkh skti ho kya"navya said

"Navya what is the need of this please i m coming "she said

"Thank u so much nandu"she said and hung the call

"What where are you going"he asked
"Manik abir is alone i have to take care of him "she said and make a puppy face she knew manik wont leave her so early

"What no are you crazy tum kahi nh ja rh ho let madhubala handle her own son "manik said wid fake anger

"Manik me nh hum ja rh h we are going plzz" Manik glared at her
"What the hell here i wanted to spend some time wid you and wanted to baby sit tht brat or me kahi nh aa rh hu not possible"manik said in demanding voice she rolled her eyes

Monster she mummerred to herself

"Manik we cn spend so much together in navya's house coz there is no one except you me and abir or abir wont disturb us so you want to come ya me khud jau"she said
He made a pokerface, This was probably not the way of going out wid her he had expected for
this morning.
he cursed his stars but having no other choice he gave in both sat on the car and drove away
Soon they reached navya handover every single things which abir needs the most and left from there abir was sleeping peacefully both sat on the bed manik pulled nandini in his lap wid a sudden jerk

"Well this place its not tht bad i cn spend some quality time here"he said in a husky voice His hands crept up on her waist
and in a flash; he pulled her body on himself, pressing
his warm hands on her back in
languid motions,his touches were creating havoc in her body and she
couldn't stop a beautiful moan that
erupted in the thin air as soon as
he bit her neck,

"Maa. ..ni..ikkk"she moaned his name which was turn on for him
digging his face in
the silkiness of her cold yet warm
skin making her comfortable on his
lap.he kissed on her forehead and eyes than cheeks he was about to claim her lips but his trance broke by a loud voice

Abir was awake now he was crying very badly
"Manik leave me abir ro rha hai"she said and instantly stand up from his lap manik was pissed now
She pick up abir in her arm but he was still crying she tried hard but the little brat was in no mood to show some mercy on her

"Manik i think issey bhuk lgi hai tum iske sath rho na me iske milk or baby food lati hu "she said in a pleading voice his eyes popped out from there soccket

"Are you gone nuts me kese i dont know about anything no i cnt take care of him"he said
"Manik its the matter of some couple of mintues i m here in this house only bhag kar nh ja rh hu ab tum iske sath rho me iske liye baby food lati hu"she glared at him and put abir in cradle and left from abir was crying very badly manik was trying to manoflying him but the little thing was showing tauntrams to manik malhotra

"Nandini or kitna tym lgega tumhe ye to chup hi nh ho rh h "manik shouted

"Manik usey apni godh me utho he will be ok give me ten mintues only "she replied

Manik picked abir in his hand his hands were shivering very badly he was still crying

"Shh listen chotu madhubala chup hoja ok she is coming "he said while taking him in his arms
But after listening his nick name abir started crying more loudly

"What the hell bola na mene chup hoja not a word i mean no more crying and all "he glared at him but as if the brat gonna listen him he was still crying

"Oh god nandini how much u will take baby food bna rhi ho ya choclate cake"he again called her

"Kya hai manik aise to bde stud bntey ho panch mintue ke liye ek bache ki care nh kar skte aa rh hu na"she said he was totally pissed now
He closed his eyes in frustration he opened his eyes when he felt some warm feeling on his hands

"Oh shit yuck hot shower me hi mila tha aj is chotu madhubala ko bta nh skte the tum"he again glared at him

"Ye to mere glare se b.nh darta you know your mother my one glare is enough for her she is hell scared from my glares achi chze b to seekho us madhubala se natak karna to sikh lia"he said abir was still crying coz he was feeling wet

"Ab tu kyu ro rha hai rona to muje chiye nandini dekho ne isne kya kia this shit plz come na baba i cnt handle him anymore"manik said in a pleading voice

"Offo uska diper change kar do he will be ok "she said very casually

"Diper...!!!
Ewww yuck manik make a discussting face and abir now was crying more loudly enough to make manik deaf

"Manik jaldi kro usey insfection ho jyega muje tym lgega this baby food pta nh navya ne baki saman kha rkha hai"she shouted from kitchen

"I want every bit of it as pay back nandini",
Manik said in sarcastic voice she ignored it
He put abir in cradle and started searching for his diper finally he found it he picked his diper with the help of his frst two fingers and thumb manik move towrds abir while making discussting face he reached and picked him in his arms he lied abir down on the bed and kneeled down infront of him
He closed his eyes then slowly opened them
Manik you cn do it "he mummerred and touched his leg he started removing his diper he closed his eyes tightly and turn his face to other side finally he did the most pathetic work of his life which he never wants to repeat in his whole life
Yuck ..he made face
Abir was smiling now seeing manik strugling like this

"Aise hass kya rha hai trust me ek bar bda hoja i m gonna take revenge from you "he said while gritting his teeth he open the diper and held abir's one leg he put diper in abir's legs and closed it soon nandini came there
She saw manik was glareing at her

Manik gave her a nasty look. She knew she
was going to be punished hard for this
but she didn't care some how liking seeing manik strugling wid abir
Ahh cute he was looking tht time
"Kya hua manik everything is ok "she asked very innocently as if nothing happend

"You know na your going to pay for this"he said while having pathetic look on his face
"Uffoo manik tumne abir ko diper b ulta phanya hai "she said while glacing at abir's diper
"Wo kya h na miss murthy mene isme professional training to li nh i think we should organise a work shop in space i will call professionls for this work shop ke kese bacho ko diper phnaya jata h "manik said in sarcastic voice
"Manik your unbelieveble how you gonna take care our child "she said and bite her tounge a smriked appear on his face she picked abir in her hands and manik held nandini from her waist he was nuzzling his nose in her neck while blewing air on her neck region she closed her eyes

"What did you say"he said in a husky voice

"Manik plz let me feed abir than "she was pleading to him

"Than than what nandu "he again said in husky and bit her earlobe a moan escaped from her mouth
"Than i m all yours pls"she said again in pleading voice little thing was watching the due while carrying a sweet smile on his face
"No i m not stoping you do what you want i m gonna leave you "he said in a naughty voice while roaming his hand on her upper body giving shivers to her spine
She was feeding abir while manik was busy in his own work soon abir falls asleep nandini put abir in cradle and manik pulled her towrds him

"Time for pay back miss murthy"he said and winked at her he was carressing her cheeks while playing wid her hair strands tears brimmed in her eyes how much she was missing his naughtiness He smirked but it was soon wiped
off as he saw the little droplets of
tears pooling in her flushed eyes.
"Hey nandu what happend baby why are you crying " He said in a
hushed tone which did nothing to
calm her down,
She immidately hugged him he took her in his embrace while patting his back she dug her face into him and cling to him more

He kissed her hair, sponging them
more into his hand he was patting her back which worked to calm her down to
an extent

"Manik i love you i love so much plz dont leave me ever again i cnt leave wid out you kill me if you want to leave me but pls pls dont leave me i cnt breath wid you i love u so much i cnt tell you what i have go through in this three months"she said now she was crying very badly she tighten her grip on his body

"Shh shh relax baby everything is fine see i m fine or plz stop crying baby i wont leave you even i cnt leave widout just forget those three months past ko bhul jao hum dono sath hai na its enough for me we are together forever and ever i love you so much baby thank u for keeping my family safe and having so much trust on us thank you for immense love i couldnt even thank u properly coz this mere word cnt discribed my feeling "he said he too was crying seeing his loves in so much of pain

"I m sorry i couldnt protect i tried my best but it wasnt in my hands i was so helpless "Manik promise me you will never ever leave me again. Mar jaungi mai. You have no idea how i've spent those three months without you. Ghut kar jee rahi thi mai. Har second meri existence ko noch raha tha... dont u dare leave me ever again" she sobbed harder and he let her emotion flow effortlessly she needed this and he stroked her hairs comforting her.

i couldnt protect you i m not your shining star i m really sorry manik plz maff kar do mje "she said manik broke the hug and cupped her face he wiped her tears

"Shh shh never ever said this your my brightest shinning star and promise me we wont discuss about our past no more tears now only happiness and love wese nandu love se yad aya what did you said how i m gonna take care of our child chill my daughter is wont b like this chotu madhubala and i will love her i just love my little nandu"he spoke very naughtily she was blushing hard now

"Manik i want a monster"she said he raised his brow

"Arey chill hum na puri cricket team bnayenge tum chaho to me abhi se practice shuru kar skta hu what say wese b last time your notes were higher than mine are you in mood of jamming nandu "he was teasing her she turned into a red tomato he cupped her face and placed his lips on her lips
chocolaty
sensuous union of their lips and
couldn't even think of letting go of
each other just now. She clasped
and danced her fingers in his hair
and the other hand on his chest
which sent tingling electrifying rays
down his toes he had never felt. In
the throes of passion, he wanted to
touch her more he wanted to claim her only his she belong only to him Their fused lips suddenly
broke coz both were panting heavily both were breathless they joined there forehead

"I love you so much nandu/manik"both confessed their love together manik again cupped her face and leaned towrds her he was about to claim her lips for another kiss but there trance broke by a loud voice

"Abirrr youuu"manik said while gritting his teeth
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Ohk ohk ab rona mt mene ye isliye likha hai coz i want to see you all smiling we will cherish our manan in our hearts and how it is plz let me know through your comments well its frst os plz pardon for all mistakes

so so beautifulll. please cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
lol
its dmn amzing
i mean i srsly cant stp laughing
ya its a bit emotional too
but more funny
firstly whn i read i was lyk who's this abeer
bcoz maine s2 k koi episode nhi dkha h nd koi news bhi nhi h mujhe
but whn i read it
omg i enjoyed it alot
nd also still hoping ki mnk waps aa jye
btw thnks for pm its dmn awesome👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Pls make it ss...that will be more interesting and so much fun
Pls pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
This is awesome dear.
Manik is back they both are in to each other.
Now comes the naughty abeer.
But I just loved this story .
This reminds me how much
We are missing manan.
Par with this beautiful story of yours
Laga sab wapis mil gya.
Their love, passion, his naughtiness
Were just amazing.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful story.
God bless you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
I loved it yaar. Especially Manik and Abeer part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Haha...😆😆😆 manik talking to abeer tht he will gonna tke revenge for this..😛 so cute lovely os
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
This was beautiful yet funny...
👏

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