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anya21 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
fabulous update!!!
loved it ...
its a long update mawara...
tq 4r such a long update...
manik scared 4r d 1st tym...dat 2 infront of children...aww...
jiju wala scene...yupieee loved it...
bro-sis talk...itna cute...
nd finally there comes drunken nandini...
aryaman nd slap...he needed dat one...
nd nandini's jealous ...dat 2 4r soha...
haha...i like jealous nandini...
nd my fav part...my manik sir...
hooo ...itna cute ...nandini...
nandini's 2 conditions...hoho..wat a girl she is?
nd then chocolate scene
their 1st kiss...
manik's regret...
nandini's trust...
overall njoyed alot...
wtng 4r d nxt part...
cont soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
SAB SE PEHLE...APPI APPKE HATH...BHTTT ACHE HAIN...HAHAHHA...😆...ALLAH AISE HATH SAB KO DE...AMEEN...JO BHI HO BUT APPI U ARE SOO TALENTED...ALLAH NE APKO BHTT HI ACHE TALENT SE NAWAZA HAI...NO DOUT...U ARE AWSOME...FANTASTIC...MUAHHH!!!
APPI...UPDATE KE BAAD JO APP APNE P.O.V BATATE HONA...THAT WAS...AWSOME...I LOVE IT...
CHALO AB MERI BAK BAK BHT HUI...😆 NOW IT'S TIME FOR LAMBAAA COMMENTTT ...😆

COMING TO THE UPDATE...

4A...FIRST...MANIK AND BACHO KA ENCOUNTER...HEHHEHEHE...😆...SUPER SE BJI UPER...HAHHAHAH!! MANIK WAS SO SCARED...AND THANK GOD NANDINI NE BACHA LIYE..BECHARE KO...HEHEHEH...😆...AND THEN JEJU...HAHAHHA...GUD GUD BACHO...YOUR FUTURE JEJU...🤣...SOO FUNNY AND MINDBLOWING SCENE...THEN MANIK AND MAA SCENE...NICE...THEN MANIK PRAISED NANDINI...AM I DREAMING...WOOW...BECHARA KITNA STAMMER KAR RHA HAI...AND NANDINI FROWNED...AND SAID LARKIYOUN KI TAREEF AISE NHI KARTE...THEN HER FILMY IDEA...😆...AND MANIK LAUGHT...SERIOUSLY...OMG!! NANDINI FEELING SO HAPPY TO SEE MANIK LAUGHING...LOVE LY SCENE...LOVED IT...AND MANIK GIVE HER PIRMISSION...PLAYING MUSIC...NAZDIKIYAN BARH RHI HAIN...I OVE IT

4B...THEN THEY ENTER PARTY...AND THERE...BROTHER SISTER...CONVO...AND SHE TAUNTED MANIK...SOO AWSOME...THEN SOHA...CAME...SHE IS SO CHIPKO...AND MANIK NOTICE NANDINI'S EXPRESIONS...AWW..NANDU IS JEALOUS...AND MANIK ENJYOING HER EZPRESSIONS...LOVED IT...NANDINI...DON'T LIKE..SOHA...THEN SHE DRINK WINE...AND TALLI NANDU...HAHAHA😆...AND ARYAMAN KO PARA...ZABARDAST...THAPAR...😆...MAZA A GAYA...AND CABIR MANIK KO BULANE GYA...Q KI AB SIRF WAHI NANDINI KO HANDLE KAR SAKTA HAI...NANDU...JUNGLI BILLI WALA AVATAR...SO AMAZING...THEN SOHA AND NANDU SCENE...MY MANIK SIR...AWSOME...NANDU ROCK MANIK SHOCK...🤣

4C...THEN MANIK NANDINI KO WAHAN SE LE GAYA...OR USE CAR MAIN BETHAYA...BUT SHE IS SOO ANGRY...GIRLS TALK...HAHHAHA...SHE WANTED TO PULL SOHA'S HAIR...🤣...OMG!! SOO FUNNY...THEN NANDINI RUN FROM THE CAR...HER CUTE TALKS...AMAZING...HAR CHEEZ KA JAWAB HAI NANDINI KE PASS...THEN HER 2 CONDITIONS...HER 1 CONDITIONS...KE MANIK KABHI SOHA SE BAAT NHI KAREGA...AND MANIK AGREED...SUPERB...THEN HER 2 CONDITIONS...HEHEHEH...USE NANDINI KI TAREEF KARNI HOGI...WO BHI FILMY STYLE MAIN...BUT MANIK DON'T AGREE...AND THEN HE AGREE...WAHH...KIA TAREEF KI HAI MANIK..SO INTENSE...LOVED IT...AND SHE KISSED ON MANIK CHEEKS...SO SWEET...THEN HER...EMOTIONAL TALK...😭...MINDBLOWING..SCENES...AND SHE ASKED MANIK KE WO USE CHOR KAR TO NHI JAYENGE NA...AND MANIK AGREED...SO LOVELY...SHE CRIED AND MANIK CONSOLE...HER...AND NANDU KA MIND DIVERT KAR DIA CHCOLATE SE...HEHEEHE...AWSOME...AND THEY CAME HOME...HER CHILDISH BEHAVIOUR...SOOO SWWWETTT OF HER...AND THEN MANIK GIVE HER CHOCOLATE...AWWW...SO CUTE...😳...THEN THERE KISS...THERE FIRST KISS...AMAZING...MINDBLOWING...LOVED IT...THEN HE REGRET FOR KISSING HER IN THIS CONDITIONS...AND NANDINI SAID I TRUST U......AWSOME...MINDBLOWING...LOVED IT...

I HOPE APPI MERA COMMENT LAMBAAA THA??

THANKS FOR PM...
CONT SOON...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mawara I'm so sorry I didn't reply to your previous update. Par koi gal nahi, I'll talk about both the updates now!
Manik ka gussa Nandini par asar nahi hota. Gosh Nandini is so damn cute. Manik's anger has no effect on her, she knows its all a pretence. Nandini getting scared of the Rat... 😆 Poor Manik. MaNan going for the meeting & she called him Kharoos, though he heard it, he wanted to laugh! Nandini ka asar! Aryamaan eyeing Nandini, both of them didn't like it. Nandini crying & Manik consoling her, like Mr. MANIK MALHOTRA was consoling someone! Totally loved the way he understood her innocence & that shes so pure. His Promise to always protect her, making Nandini trust him. Manik coming to know Nandini living in an orphanage! He definitely never expected that as shes always smiling. Though she told her life story casually, it definitely affected Manik! Cabir telling Manik that he needs to Protect her even more after knowing this! Cupid Cabir...
Now the recent update ke liye, I have no words! Manik coming to pich Nandini up & she saving him from the orphanage children! Jeeju & then Kharoos Boss, Poor Manik 🤣 Manik ne Nandini ki tareef ki & then she told him how to compliment a girl. Manik laughing & she saying his smile is awesome! Pyaar thoda thoda ho gaya hai! MaNanBir is just the Perfect Trio! Cabir complimenting Nandini & Nandini taunting Manik indirectly!! Best Part Drunk Nandini 🤣 She getting Jealous seeing Manik with Soha & Manik ki pata chalta hai! Nandini didn't like it & poor Cabir didn't know what would happen! Aryamaan & Nandini tashan was amazing! "MY MANIK" dil ki baat bahar aa gayi! Manik knows she accepted him bus ab Manik ki baari! Nandini wanted a Girl Talk with Soha, Manik is smart he knew what would the talk be about! Her conditions made me go all Aww!! Shes so innocent! Manik playing along promising to not talk to Soha & doing her Tareef! Manik CNT throw her out now! Shes become his life! He taking her home & the KISS was something else! She does trust him & she expressed it after the Kiss! Their first Kiss!! Always will be memorable! Let's see how she reacts once she wakes up!!!
Haaye itna lamba I commented! Mawara I love you & your stories!!! 😊
Edited by Claire_D - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just loved it!!drunk nandu hahahahahahahahahahhaha
Awsome I was laughing at that time and then emotional scene btw manik and nandini!!mawara how everytime u portray all emotions in one update !!I just love reading your update!!!!!!
Keep updating!!!keep entertaining!!!! Love u😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
100% Full on Entertainment 👏👏👏
Hats off ⭐️⭐️⭐️

What was really that ...Nandini so cute so adorable & little jealous

Will they be able to realize their feelings for each other

Poor Nandu ..will regret what she has done, i think Manik ll handle her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
No doubt... A complete package... very beautifully written..
Talli jealous... nandu... shayad soha ke baal abhi bhi baki hai...

Kids already know who is their future jiju... Loved that part...

liked the part where while entering the party... nandu walking behind manik and his proud moment being with her. ...

Cabir nandu bonding was nice...

Thank you for your beautiful update...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update...Mawara_Ejaz...for this u deserve a CHUMA...lots of kisses...
Awsome...
Hats of to u!!!!
Talli nandu...
Frist kiss!!!!!
U gave me shock i never expected this...
Mindblowing...
Kitni tareef karu...
Jin haatho se tum ne yeh chapters likhe hai
Bus unhe ek bar chum lon..(lol mein bohut ganda mazak karti hun)
Waha...Wallah...kya update...
Dil khus kar diya!!!
Thanks for the pm..
Update the nxt chapter soon ..
Can't wait to read further...
N plzz pm me...
Bye
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Posted: 9 years ago
heyy
okkk so that was amazinggg..
I usually dont comment ... ( i am sorry for that😳)
but gosh this ff has become one of my favorites in such a short span of time...
It is totally superb...
drunk nandini was a treat...😆
waiting for the story to go ahead...
update soon...
waitinggg...😊😛😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awesoem updates
manik was too shock to see her in tht attrie
tht kids called him as jiju
jeasolu nandu
cant see manik wth any one wth nt knwg the reason
bechara aryamann koudo ko pasadala
nandu was saying my manik to manik
manik was too surprise to here frm her
manik was too shock abt th kiss
he wa feeling gulity
continue soon
waiting wt gng to happen next
thnks fr pm
stay blessed
keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
OK long wala update wowww!!it was damn DAMN DAMN awesome update sacchi loved it haww!! well thapar she darr n lagta sahab hehephir b lonG wala comment try karrhi huwell sista u r 2 sweet and I always love ur bakBAK awww Nandu was sHoo cutooab tera Kya Hoga ManIk wese kYa hoGa MaNik ka???BTW it's fabulousmind blowing superbBTW Plzz ConTinue soOnThanks 4 D PMsaDa khusH raho oR hUme laMBee LaMbee walE uPdaTe DeTe rAho.. 😃 I know its not lambA sorry
Edited by ArishaKhan - 9 years ago

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