Manan-SS Unbreakable Bond. Part-13 updated at page-30 (25 oct) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So I am back with another update! This is the first time I am writing and I really do need your views and suggestions. Please comment or at least like if you think I am appriciable enough!!
For everyone who commented I love ypu all lots and more and I hope I am upto your mark. Tysm all!
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Part-7
Manik's POV-
The sight in front of me gave me another shock! It was a beach I guess and there was a path, directing me the way which was full of lanterns!! Under the stary night the view was completely breathtaking.
I walked only to cover the distance and meet her! As I walking forward I got yet another surprise. Near the sea was the table for the two of us! The table was surrounded by lamps and candels!!
I was about to walk forward when a voice caught my attention, the one I am very familiar with- her voice something I would listen all my life without the curve leaving my lips! I turned to only find her standing there! Looking like a angle, my angle!
There she stood wearing a peace and silver prom-frock. It was sticking her upper body like a second skin and the silver twinkling material of the dress on her upper body only increased her beauty! The frock was till her mid thighs and the peace-orange nets and colour clothes of the frock only glowed her sexy legs! Her curled hairs did nothing but invited me! With that pump matching my height she was surely my death today!!
END~POV

Manik! Baby I hope you liked the surprise. You know I am bad at expressing my feeling but you always helped me and went with the flow! Times when you understood me even before I spoke, my love for you increased more!
When you always ask permission before taking a step forward, my respect for you increases! When to bear my stupid acts and protect me from the world, I get a fatherly care from you- I fell safe! I feel pampered when you act like a typical mother and scold me! I feel like I am the luckiest girl in the whole world when you love me like a mad lover! And above all you take my responsibility like my husband!
You manage to play role of all person in spite of being a single one!
You are the best man I have ever seen Manik and I love you so much amd I an so proud to be called yours! It was only bhai before but now you are there!
I am blessed to have you! I love you
Hamesha!

This was the first time Nandani was confessing so openly! And it brought tears in his eyrs! He ran and pulled her in a bone crashing hug and both of them cried together! Tears of love, of pride, of trust, of joy on remaining the same always!
Nandani pulled out and wiped his tears - so did Manik! They hugged each other again!! Both if them walked towards the table to eat! Nandani pulled the chair for him and smiled - I am host remember!!
She sat on the other chair and both of them started to eat, feeding each other with lots of kisses and love!

Did you like it??
I loved it, I loved whatever you spoke, I love you Nandani Hamesha! He said pulling her as they sat on the sand .
They sat there in complete silence, gazing at the stars, their hands entangled!
Continue next part!!!!
Please drop your comments!!
Preety please!!
Ily all!!



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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
The update is gud but chotu
The way nandini expressed her love was gud
Continue soonn
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Awesome update
Loved nandini's confession
But so short update
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
So cute she s...her surprise and confession was sweet..looking forward to the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
read all the parts in one go. U are an amazing writer
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Hello dear...
Update was superb...
The way Nandini express her feelings... its beautiful...👏
Update next part soon...
Keep it up..
Keep smiling..
God bless u ..
lol

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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
awesome update...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
It was amazing update . please post the next part soon . and don't be late this time . thank you dear . keep smiling 😊
Edited by anjanbapidas - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
woww!!
what an update yaar!1
but itna choti=u sa kyun..
plzz update soon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Amazin'
the way nandu expressed her feelings is just mindblowing
loved it!
Update soon

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