Manan ff CRAZY LITTLE THING CALLED LOVE part 9 pg 14 28/5 - Page 2

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Awesome..
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super story line,,,,,,,,,,,,plz pm me😛😛😛
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Nice concept
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BUMPED ...I am sure he is MANIK MALHOTRA....😉
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For sure he should be MANIK...
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When u'll update?
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guys i can't give the long updated so bear this that m not well


Part 2


The guy was constantly looking at nandini without blinking his eyes .

Before nandini and her friend (Ankita) could look at the guy many people comes surround the guy.

Both gives each other confuse look and that guy was trying to look at the nandini but people are not allowing him .

Nandini and Ankita also want to know who was that person they all try to aside the crowd but in the mean tym both gets their duty call and rushed from there but before going nandini give one glance to him but couldn't see him due to crowd she was feeling unusual today.

After asiding the crowd finally the guy comes the crowd and look for her but couldn't find her today he was feeling different.

Suddenly something stuck in his mind

"Oh freak i have come to meet daddie here I hope she is fine " he rushes towards the reception.

"Hello M Manik Malhotra could u plz tell me the room no of Parvati Malhotra "he says in serious tone.

Receptionist was giving him zst idiotic smile and shying with him she was lost in him .

Asking several times also he didn't get any response from her he was pissing off so he bang the table and yells "Do u have some hearing problem say me the room no Parvati malhotra "

Receptionist became scared of his yelling and immediately answer " Room no 501 " she stammers

Manik says thank u and leaves from there he was getting tension

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"Good afternoon dad die" nandini comes with a tray of food and says with smile

By looking at her a 60 yrs old smiles " Good morning pretty girl "

"So how are u feeling now " she checks her file

"Very bad " the women replies in childish tone

"Oh daddie don't worry look what i brought for u soup and fruits " she puts the food on the table.

"No i don't wanna eat i so yucky" she complains like a kid

"Daddie if u don't eat food than how u will be healthy " she tries to feed her

"I will be that day only healthy when my grandson will get married and bring me a cute daughter in law like u who take care of me " she says lovingly to nandini

"Then what's the problem ask him to get married " she was checking medicine

"If he listen than only naa y cant he understand that i don't have to be admitted in hospital if he gets married by half disease will be gone " she makes a sad face

"Don't worry daddie am sure he will understand u " she tries to assure her

"I always pray it's not like that he didn't listen to me he always obey what i say but sometimes i feel scared after me who will take care of him . He is zst like a baby who needs love and i hope one day he will get his.love which he always dream of getting for being craziness in love . U know he always say if i will love someone than then i will prove love is zst a crazy thing which every people crave and i will always make her fall in love crazily where she will not see any boundaries so m waiting for her " her eyes were moist

Nandini takes daddie hands and smiles "Trust ur grandson sure he will get his crazy love and he will be indeed fortunate only some unfortunate people don't get it" she says last low tone.

Daddie sense something is wrong but she embrace her in motherly hug " Nandini ur one of the fortune dear u will get ur crazy love whenever i see u i always found a connection between us . U take care of me more than what ur job says u love every one unconditionally m zst a mere patient for u which u have been assigned for ur duty but u think as me m ur own daddie and took care of me and girl lyk u who is selfless how she will not get her crazy love god can't do so discriminate " she says with motherly love and affection

Nandini was simply hugging her and listening to her quietly and thought "I dont think m that lucky to get my love otherwise destiny would not played this worst game with me " she brokes the hug and and rubs her tears.

"Ok daddie take rest doctor have written some medicine for u i will bring for u and without complaining have this food i will back in jiffy " she says in stern voice and walk out from there

"God bless u my child i hope u will get all happiness which u deserve " she silently pray to god

As soon as nandini leaves the room Manik enters.

"Daddie"he was about to hug her she stops him and turns around.

"Now u got time to meet ur grandmother I m angry with u " she makes anger pout and cross arms in her chest

"I m sorry daddie i was stuck in the work as soon as i got to know again ur admitted in hospital I rushed but u know fans they start chasing me in hospital also how difficultly i came " he makes a baby face


Daddie twist his ear "U became very big star naa that u forget ur daddie and now a days u don't listen to me also 1 thing from many days m asking u ur not obeying and now y to obey daddie became old so she is not needed right " she fake crying


"AAhh daddie leave and don't say like this u r always needed for me ur my life line without u m nothing " he placed his head in her lap

"Then y don't u obey what i say " she says ruffling his hair

"Daddie i have already told u the day when i will get my crazy love i will be ready for marriage plz daddie let me wait for her " he says with a pleading face

"Ok but don't be late otherwise i will myself search for my daughter i law " she shows his finger

"Ok daddie " he kissed her hands

"Manik" his daddie ask

"Hmm " he simply hmmmed

"What type of girl do u want " she asked with excitement

"hmmm i want a girl who is zst lyk a child who loves and care for others unconditionally without expecting anything from them but she also want crazy love lyk me and daddie whenever i will look at her i will be lost in her she must be cute and loving like a child but handle every situation maturely "

By saying this nandini face flsahes in front of him and immediately wake up " Why m thinking about her " . Daddie also remembered nandini her smile goes wider.

"Oh my sweet golu " she pulls his cheeks

"Daddie don't say that m not a kid anymore" he makes a annoyed face.

Before she could say anything doctor come inside.

"Good afternoon Mrs. Malhotra" he says with a smile

"Good evening doc " manik forward his hand and both shakes hand.

"How is the condition of daddie doc " manik ask while doc was examining her.

"She is fine little weakness is there i will write some medicine " he starts to write in prescription

"Doctor can i go home i don't like here " she makes a sad face.

"No Mrs. Malhotra we can't allow u still ur weak and u need better care 24 hours more days u must be kept in observation" doc says in serious voice.

"No i won't i want to go home " she starts behaving like child.

"But daddie" but cut by in middle

"if u will not take me home i will not eat anything and I will not talk to u " she says frowning her face.

Both doc and Manik were helpless Manik gives him a pleading look and the doc blink eyes in assurance.

"Ok take her home but we can't risk her health so to take care of her i will appoint a nurse with u who will take care of her " he says with faint smile.

"Then i want only nandini because i can't trust others than her " she again forward the condition

"Nandini"



phew ok done with part 2 i hope u like it there is manan part today i have shown daddie bond with both of them plz gives ur views then only i will get energy to write more

Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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SOOO GOOOD
YAAR
GET WELL SOON
MAY GOD BLESS U
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Ab to dadi hi kch kregiii
Lovd it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
so good , nice story waiting for what we happen next
update soon dear

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