2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 104

Originally posted by: siyaaali

hii...your story is so emotional... last update ke bad laga kuch happy wala update padhane ko milega parrr ye to pura opposite nikala yar...aisa mat kar...totally heart touching tha ye...nice... update next soon

they are just the glimps of the dark zone aj tak sab kuc extreme kia hai to dark zone me bhi sab kuch extreme hi hoga na and devil's hmesha different hi hoti hai dont predict anything about devil's coz my story unpredictable anyways i m gonna update soon if i will enough comments in this part

It was emotional... Hey do, I m new to this if. Jst happened to read ur ff...I just love it... Pls do send me pm if its possible for u...I l very grateful...

Sach mei
what was that
fir se i mean fir se
i really wanted a presnt track
but this
kya karneka irada h aage
itnaaa saaara pain

first of ol tgsnkx for d pm... BT plz don't do this... ye read krte krte mujhe khud sad feel ho RHA tha... yr aj ka update toh bsss... manikk Itna gussa kyu h nandu se???? plz disclose this olso... OK... and I must say ur writing skills r dam good... and yr koshish kia kro jldi update krne ki plz. .

Originally posted by: ashi1995

Was expecting make out... But none the less a heart wrenching update... I m guessing there is some mis communication... Somebody has misleaded Manik... Anyways... Will wait fr the suspense to unleash... Since u r building up a lit abt makeout hope it is upto our expectations... Which I am sure will be...thanks continue soon

it will be i promise coz no emotional drama in make out only hottness and love kyuki mene apne andar ki drama queen ko chutti di hai for this last two updates of happiness than sepration is on the way

I JUST WANT TO SEE MANIK REGRETING IN HIS WORDS...YES.. But only when it becomes too late.. Ab itna rulaya so thanq.. And thanq for pm... And please please please..thoda jaldi update karo na.. And thoda lamba...

superb yaar...but plsss reveal the suspense soon Na

Hy yr i was expecting a little luvy duvy update
But see there won't b any difference ki agr jo hum soche woh hme padne mille
Similar our hopes dashh!!
I lyked it yr hm jo chahe woh thodi hga agr aisa hua toh uh hav to chnge d title 😆
So as per d title it was perfect devilish update
Continue soon

Originally posted by: Sonalmanan

It was emotional... Hey do, I m new to this if. Jst happened to read ur ff...I just love it... Pls do send me pm if its possible for u...I l very grateful...

sure dear send me buddy req i will surely pm you from next update thnks fr liking my story

I seriously do pity on Manik,
kya hoga uska when he will come across the whole truth, hope you will reveal all those to him before its too late.
Yaar, kya yaar?
Emotional bana diya pura ka pura.