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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awsum update!!
Luved car parts n d manan jungle n storeroom scene
As always u penned it down beautifully!!!!
Tysm..!!
Eagerly waiting for d next update n looking forward to some awsum fun in d marriage
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just awesome,,. In love with ur ff,,, the best arranged marriage of the year... Manik, the perfect husband for everyone girl... Kaaassshhh muje bhi future main Manik jaise husband mile, care, respective, lovely, naughty wale... Lol 😛 😛... N Nandini,, sooo cute like a child... Woh kehte hai Jise koi bhi us k deservation se kuch zayada love, care and respect de do woh automatically child bann jate hai.. Jaise aap ne apne ff main potrayed liye hai... Just awesome... Just love it... Continue sooon and keeeppp writing...
And thank for the pms...
Love, Aisha 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ab bechare Manik Nandini se door Rehna padega or may b I m wrong coz Manik koi nah koi bahana soch hi lenge Nandini k Saath naughty naught things karne k liye.. Hehe,,, just love each and every character the way u portrayed... Especially Nyonika,, she's just tooo sweet,, Kaash ky2s1 main bhi aise hote...
And now finally navya k entry hoge phir Cabir k bhi love sguv shuru ho jaiyege... Hehe.. Ok now keep writing..
Love, Aisha 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update... soo nice
Lovedd it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwwhhh how cute manan
Can't stay away from each other
Their love and thier aura are so much to stop ourself to not to fall in love with them
I miss them yr...
Very beautiful update
Thanks for updating
Waiting for next
Update soon yr...
Keep smiling
Stay blessed:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
As always amazing..
mindblowing...
itsss just a pure story


I just love it .
itsss so nice..
n manan bonding as always..

sweet...
n all tease manan...
that's soo nice...
n cabiraaa iss so awesome...
n their sweet romance...
n judaai haaye..
mjaa aa gya..
fabulous...
keep updating like that...
waiting for next update eagerly impatiently...
update soon...
lotsss of luv.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. It was cute to watch manik's desperation abt being with nandani n how he is gonna sleep without her. Purest love story. Good job n continue soon dear... eagerly waiting for 41 part😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dear...now it will be tough time for both manik and nandini to stay from each others for 7 looong days...waiting for ur next update about hide and seek bwn manan and others...and also waiting for some terrace,under sky romance...thanks for the pm girl...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly congratulations for 3rd thread
Mujhe pata hi nai chala about new thread
Read both ch beautiful😊
Your story is going very nice

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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 41

after spending some cozy time with nandini finally manik's mood was a bit better now and he returned to boys room but didnt find any of them.

m=yeh log kaha chale gaye??

manik heard laughing sound from outside. he looked through the window and saw DruLya, MukhBhi and cabir gossiping in the garden. he smiled and went inside the washroom to be freshen up. nandini was passing from there when she saw the boys room empty and the door was open. she peeped in and saw manik was not there when she heard water sound from the washroom

n=manik washroom me ha, usne abtak apne kapre nahi nikale, main hi nikal deti hu

nandini opened his bag and took out a white tee and shorts for him. manik opened the door of washroom wrapping up a towel and saw nandini there. as soon as he saw her alone in the room as rest of the gang were outside his mind became notorious. he again stepped back inside and opened the door but this time he didnt come out. he pretended to call out cabir

m=cabir... cabir sun na

hearing his voice nandini went upto the door

n=manik kya hua u need anything???

m=nandini tum yaha??

he peeped through the door and looked at her

n=ha woh...

m=nahi.. i thought ke cabir hoga yahapar, woh i wanted my clothes shayed nikal na bhool gaya

n=usme kaunsi new bat ha?? tum humesha esa karte ho.

m=bhool gaya solly... accha ab dedona kapre,

n=ruko

she went to bring his clothes which she had chosen for him and gave him but manik being manik waiting for this opportunity instead of taking the clothes holded her hand and pulled her inside the washroom locking the door behind.

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c=yaar yeh manik nandini kaha reh gaye??

mu=aur kaha? phirse romance

c=tu chupkar, kuch din bad tera bhi wahi haal hone wala ha

ab=lol cabir, mujhe toa dar ha, ke college me jiske bhai se itna mar khata tha uski behen meri kya class lene wali ha

mu=very funny

c=accha main zara un love birds ka romance kharap karke unhe yaha lekar ata hu

cabir was going towards the room when accidentally he bumps into someone and the person falls down

"andhe ho kya, dekke nahi chal sakte?? " cabir opens his glasses and looks down finding a girl wearing salwar suit talking to her own. he had not seen the girl before since they had arrived here.

c=um sorry.. maine jaan buchke nahi dhakka diya

cabir forwarded his hand to the girl. the girl gave him a glare but at the end gave her hand to cabir and stood up

c=ap theek ha?? um sorry woh..

"ghar ke andar bhi chashma lagakar ghumoge toa dikhai kaise dega?? andhe kahike" the girl yelled at cabir and left from there.

c=why so serious??? i said um sorry

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n=manik kya karraheho??? tum pagal hogaye ho?

nandini was trying her best to free herself from his grip and manik was enjoying her expressions. he took the clothes from her hand and put hanged them on the wall. he gently took her hands in his and entwined them.

n=manik kya karraheho?? koi ajayega..yeh koi jagah ha kya??

while nandini was continuously doing her blabbering manik was admiring her.. he was never tired of admiring his lady love. he began to push her slowly and finally nandini hit the wall.. she felt his intense gaze on her which were creating goosebumps in her tummy. she didnt know when her hands went to his chest and his hands on the wall hovering over her. it took less than a moment to turn her into crimson. manik smirked and bent down to kiss her .. nandini closed her eyes for the kiss but manik being the teaser instead of kissing lightly pecked her lips. nandini opened her eyes and saw him smirking

n=manik yeh..

m=kyu??? tum kuch aur expect karrahithi??

she knew he was being notorious and so nandini also decided to be a bit cozy with him. she snaked her hands around his neck seductively giving him surprise. he always looses his control and specially when she was in mood too. nandini tip toed and lightly brushed her lips against his

n=i was expecting this

she replied in a husky tone and manik pulled her even more closer. her kurti was already wet because of colliding with his wet chest.

m=you are making it even more harder for me jaan... trust me

she caressed his cheeks and wiped the water droplets from his cheek

n=mr malhotra, tum din pe din badmash hote jaraheho

m=kyu mane kya kia??

manik said with a cold attitude and made his grip on her waist more tighter

n=acha?? kya kia?? yeh jo kapre lene ke bahane mujhe andar leke agaye..whats this??hmm?? agar kisine dekh liya hota??

m=toa?? tumhe lagta ha ke i care what others think?? apni biwi ke sath main sabke samne romance karsakta hu. i dont care what others think...

n=mr damn care mujhe pata ha ke apko koi farak nahi parta but manik sab bahar humhe dhund rahe honge hato mujhe jane do

she tried to go but again he pinned her to the wall and this time he turned the shower on.

n=what the manik.. kya karraheho???

m=sshhh..

soon both of them were drenched standing in eachothers arms under the shower. he caressed her pouty lips . she shyly looked down not being able to meet his eyes. manik knew how she was feeling.he bent down and came close to her ear

m=it has been a long time since we have been like this together under the shower

nandini blushed hard hearing him and clinged closer to himself while he was nuzzling and nibbling her neck , biting her earlobe and dropping marks on her body. though how much she tries to stop him but yet gives up before his charm and love. he looks at her face if she was okay or not and finds his jaan turn into a crimson and hiding herself in his chest. he lifts her face from chin and fused his lips with her. he kissed her hungrily letting all his desires coming out biting her lip and then again soothing it with his pecks . his one hand made its way to the zip of her kurti and explored up and down of her back. her moans were instigating him to go on further but he could also feel her body turning into ice cold also shivering. he immediately turned the shower off and backed off. nandini was a bit confused why the hell on a sudden manik backed off. he took the towel from the shelf and gently wrapped it around herself. nandini smiled seeing his unconditional care for her. because of her he was ready to sacrifice everything , control his desires. for him his love was beyond just sharing the bed.. he loved her from the bottom of his heart and that too unconditionally irrevocably. she knew how much he wanted her and she too did feel the same but yet she knew her Patidev that he would never risk with her health and hurt her and that is why he control his desires and lust. while she was admiring him how cutely he was drying up her hands and dropping gentle soothing kisses on the love marks on her body he was caressing and lost in her beauty. after drying her hands and shoulders he zipped up her kurti and looked at her

m=was I too much harsh???

she smiled and pecked his lips

n=never... u can never be harsh on me manik

he lowered his gaze in guilt

n=manik kya hua???

m=i know ke tum kabhi mujhe nahi rokogi, trust me jaan i try to control myself but at the end i hurt u

n=manik tumhe esa kyu lagta ha that u hurt me???

he brought her infront of the mirror and slided down her kurti a bit and pointed to the red flushed love marks of him. nandini smiled and turned around while he was just caressing them with ever so love and affection

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mu=yaar yeh dono kaha reh gaye??

ab=unke ate ate we finished five rounds of carom and yeh log abhitak nahi aye

c=mujhe lagta ha ke abhi aur mukti ke shadi ko chorkar yeh dono khud apne honeymoon pe nikal gaye

all started to laugh

a=there is possibility and we all know how much manik and nandini loves eachother

c=woh sab theek ha but agar honeymoon pe jana hi tha toa ekbar bolke jate , humhe kya shokh ha unka romance dekhneka???

mu=chalo..andar chalkar dhundte ha

ab=ya lets go

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n=manik..meri taraf dekho..

she cupped his face and made him look into her eyes

n=i love u and i love the way how u claim me yours.. i always say to u ke tumhe guilty feel honeki koi zarurat nahi ha, um yours jaan.. always humesha and you have the right to love me the way u want, kya main nahi janti ke how much u control yourself yeh sochke ke shayed tum mujhe hurt karoge if we end up doing everyday?? i know everything, samajhti hu tumhe but kehti kuch nahi cause tum bhi khamosh rehte ho. manik all these things makes me respect u even more and i love u to the crore.

nothing could lighten up him more than her words, her smile and her assurance kiss on his forehead was all he wanted . he pulled her in a bear hug and she hugged him even more tighter

m=i love u so much nandini.. words are not enough to express my feelings and love for u

n=janti hu manik... and i love u too humesha

after sometime they broke the hug and he pecked her forehead once again

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a=were are these two?? garden me nahi ha.. bahar lawn me nahi ha.. ha kaha??

c=i guess jaha bhi ha sathme honge

d=i think humhe room me chalkar dekhna chahiye

ab=ya good idea chalo

manik and nandini came out of the washroom blushing and looking at eachother. manik in bare chest and wearing jeans while nandini was drying her hair. they were stealing glances and blushing when rest of the gang entered the room. nandini turned her face to the other side while manik was rolling his eyes here and there. five of them exchanged looks to eachother as it didnt took them long to realize that both of them were in the washroom together till now as they were equally drenched . after sometime they began to giggle and manik frowned

m=whats so funny???

c=yaar manik, nothing is funny but just one thing kuch to sharam kar... yeh tera sasural ha, agar humari jagah tum donoko ams ese dekh leti toa???

they ended up laughing like hell and nandini was blushing like a tomato. she excused herself from there and ran out of the room. alya and mukti followed nandini and the boys were with manik.

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after sometime girls came out giggling and the boys were already sitting on the dining table waiting for them. Manik and nandini looked at eachother and gave a blushing smile.

c=ek dusreko badme dekhte rehna.. abhi dinner karlete ha

n=main khana lati hu, tum sab betho

ams=nandu, tu bhi beth ja beta, vishwa ha na khana lekar ata ha

m=ams apne khana khaya??

ams=ha beta, maine kha liya.. tum log khalo . main zara apne kamreme jarahihu rest karne kal subhah bohot sara kaam ha

n=theek ha ams ap jayiye aur sojayiye

ams=are nandu, tujhe batana bhul gayi main.. navya agayi ha tere bareme puch rahithi

n=navya agayi???? kaha ha navya???

suddenly nandini's eyes were covered by two hands.. nandini smiled and removed the hands from her eyes and hugged the person

n=oh my god navya...kitne dino ke bad

na=nandu...kaisi ho tum?? ek minute pehle tumhe dekhne do, bapre tum toa kitni badal gayi ho... yeh sindoor, mangalsutra aur pehlese zyada khubsurat hogayi ho

n=bass navya... saas toa lelo

na=accha but humare jiju kaha ha???

nandini looked at manik, manik smiled and stood beside nandini

n=navya...meet manik mera husband

m=so ap ha navya jee, kafi kuch suna ha apke bareme

na=humne bhi apke bareme bohot kuch suna ha, jijaji

m=jijaji?? navya please.. call me manik um more comfortable to it

na=accha theek ha, manik. really glad to meet u i missed the wedding of yours but maine pictures dekhi thi and i must say tum dono bohot pyare lagrahethe eksath

MaNan looked at eachother and smiled

n=thanks.. navya ao na baki sabse milati hu tumhe

nandini introduced navya to everybody one by one

n=navya last but not the least.. meet him, mera sabse pyara devar and brother cabir

both of them gave a weird glaring expression

c=tum???

na=yehi hume kehna chahiye.. i cant believe it ke tum manik ke dost ho. kaise??

c=unfortunately jaise tum nandu ki cousin ho

na=what??

n=ek second ek second..tumlog pehle mil chuke ho??

na=tumhara yeh devar.. iski akhen nahi ha button lagake ghumta ha

c=oh hello navya jee, agar main dekke nahi chal sakta toa ap kya asmaan ki taraf dekkar chal rahithi

na=are wah yeh..

m=hang on hang on... guys kya tum log tom and jerry ki tarah larraheho??

mu=ha yaar cabir, tu bhi na.. dekh abhi yeh sab chor and both of u shake hands

n=ha chalo... shake hands

both of them shake hands and give a weak smile

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after the dinner all of them were sitting by the bonfire in the garden. Mukbhi, Drulya and Manan were wrapped up in one shawl. they were discussing about random things, wedding rituals and all that

c=so its fixed ke two days ke bad mehendi aur sangeet ha aur hum sab perform karne wale ha

a=done, and at the end bride and bridegroom are gonna dance on a song okay???

na=aur hum ha choreographer theek ha???

while they were discussing about the sangeet things MaNan were busy playing with eachothers fingers, staring and stealing glances of eachother. manik was also being a bit cozy with her, nuzzling in her hair

n=manik kya karraheho? sab ha yahapar

m=toa?? as if i care?? kitni bar explain karu ke i dont care.. shadi ki ha bhai

n=tum pagal ho manik

m=i know um crazy for u

nandini smiled and lightly slapped his cheek

mu=um damn sleepy..mujhe sona ha

a=even i wanna sleep.. my legs are aching

ab=chalo bhai then aj keliye hum sab goodnight hote ha

c=owe love birds sona nahi ha kya??? chalo

m=ab...u guys carry on main araha hu thori der me

all of them exchanged looks and smiled

ab=duniya yahase waha hojayegi but in donoka romance nahi khatam hoga

m=abhi... bhul kyu jata ha ke teri shadi meri behen se hone wali ha??

manik said mockingly and everyone giggled

m=yaad ha na?? so chalo.. sab get lost

c=good night and ap dono please continue

two of them sat there cuddling to eachother holding hands and pecking eachother. none of them wished to move an inch

n=manik...

m=hmm

said in a sleeping tone and nuzzling in her hair

n=tum jakar sojaw, kafi raat hochuki ha

m=nandini it is the fifth time tum mujhe janeko bolrahiho and um telling u the fifth time ke tumhare bina i cant sleep and right now hum jaise bethe ha i cant help but i wont move at all

nandini smiled and kissed his cheeks

n=i love u manik

m=i love u too...

Edited by MaNan_KaShian - 10 years ago

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