hey honey!!!
sorry 4 being late...
i love the way u again surprised me.. bt i think pregnancy sequence comes too early.. it may com after 50-60 chaps. will b better as ManAn r too younger to becom parents ...
its jst my opinion😊
ChAp-41
i love the way u have started the day oF MaNaN
WITH Aarav nd rests..
Navya's excitement was superb.. love their convo...😊
Tears rimmed her smiling eyes and eventually fell down her cheeks as that out of the world feeling seeped in to her blood and gushed through her veins; warming her and she uttered with a huge lump in her throat, keeping her hand on her tummy M .. Main Mam .. Mamma? A buoyant Navya smiled and then said, leading her to the loo Yeh toh hum tab bata sakenge jab tum yeh test karogi. Jao jaldi aur humein khush khabri sunao; taaki hum khulke naach sakein.
then the whole convo between Navni nd Nandini's explanation about Manik's thought..
My MoSt FaVr8 PART,,,👏👏👏
. Just like a child does to his mom on returning from a heavy school day; Manik enfolded her in his arms and muttered against her shoulder I Missed You so much Baby! I was feeling suffocated. Feels like I have got the life back. Nandini lovingly kissed his neck and replied, patting his back I Missed You too Mani! My Love is Worn - out?Pulling apart; he reposed his forehead on hers and answered Worn out tha! Tumhe dekhkar saari buri feelings na khidki se bahar chalejati hai. Bas I am very hungry. Tumhari tabyat theek hain na? She smiled and blushed at the little secret she was keeping but then shooing it away; she replied in her sugary voice I am as fit as a flea. Tum jaldi se jaker change karlo! I will set the dinner.
THEN THE WAY U MAKE NANDINI TO REVILED THE MOST PRECIOUS NEWS OF THEIR LIFE...👏
"Enough of baking your head now. I am really sleepy. She smiled on getting the chance and digging her face in the crook of his neck; she whispered Good Night Daddy!"
"In a trance, Manik spoke Goo .. but stopped and at once shot his eyes open realizing what she said. With a jerk he raised to his spine and looked at her radiant face and that is when this thought took birth; but at the back of his mind and slowly it crawled to the front and occupied the entire space as his brain studied all the indications; her amplified smile, Baby vegetables and the recent 'Daddy' instead of Papa.
Only with the thought; similar to Nandini; his heart began drumming violently in his chest and with the same hope as hers; he looked at her to voice that what ever he was thinking is nothing but the truth. Holding the dew in her eyes; she lifted her dress to expose her tum with 'Hello Daddy' written over it - for which she had used a lipstick - and then said, displaying a poppy seed kept on her palm to him
Mani! This is how big your baby is in my womb right now. Your daughter. Congratulations! You are soon going to be a Daddy.
For about 10 seconds or so; he just kept gazing at her and when her mellow words leached into him; he burst out crying covering his face with his hands.
I JST LOVE IT.. i dnt knw hw to express the situation which very beautifully penned out,, the rest chap..jst loved it..its amazed me a lott.. .
the fear that Manik has/... the fear of risking his life.. love the thing as alwayss..
ok nw a hamble request from a huge fan to her '⭐️⭐️ writer"
never stop writing on Manan coz u the writers can only make our Manan as Pani
alive..
thnx 4 the
BeAuTiFuL
MeAnInGFuL
MaGiCaL
DrEaMy
LoVeLy
EvEr So RoMaNtIc
"LoVe sToRy"❤️
update soon dear as Ky2 is finished 4 me without Pani..aka Manan
bt Manan is in my dreams nw,, there ralive becoz of uu
my lovely Writer..
nw 4 me ky2 means THE FAIRYTALE
Named
❤️LiFe WiTh NaNDiNi❤️
Edited by SIAZAHEED.1 - 10 years ago