Manan ff - heartbeat imp note on pg 132...30/06/16 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Jealous manik.. Awesome update.. Next part soon pls..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

School mein hain and they are already about to get married ?? Which time period is this ?


no dr. thy r not gettng maried... bt ya unke rlsn ko jst ek nam diya hai jo koi nhi tod skta in prsnt bt future ka kuch bol nhi skti hai...

n scl bhi ovr hone vala hai its thier lst yr in scl... sry dr. agr apko meri story achi na lgi ho to...
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it was evng whn nandu sleep got distrb bcoz of manik cell phone ringtone... she was still in sleep so without checkng the name she pick up the fon n said hlo in sleepy voice...

prsn - who r u...??? n manik kaha hai...
nandu - m jaan n manik so raha hai...
prsn - wht the hell...??? kon jaan ho kon tum
nandu - stop shoutng n tum kon ho... bloody losr tumhare karn meri nini khrab ho gyi...
prsn - m aliya n manik ko fon do... uska fon tumhare pass kya kr raha hai...

aftr lisnng aliya name nandu cut the call n was thankng god bcoz whn evr she speck in sleep her voice bcame diff... so aliya doesnt get to knw n she without wastng tym again hug manik n sleep...

aftr half n hr niyo came n knock thier room n said...

bcho jldi utho n frsh ho jao its dinnr tym raat ko nind nhi aye gi agr abhi nhi uthy to...

manik - yes mom comng in hlf n hr... ( in sleepy voice )

niyo - ohkk m waitng...

manan room

manik give a kiss on her forehead n said jaan wake up now mom is callng...

nandu jst hug him tightly n said baby plzz 5 mints..

manik said no 5 mints raat ko fir nind nhi aye gi n thn u will say me k story sunao movie dekho n all so jst get up...

nandu makng a cute angry face said i hate u...

manik said i knw jaan say somethng new n ya i lv u n give a quick kiss on his cute lips...

nandu thn said acha hai lisn vo aliya ka call aya tha...

manik said so kya baat hui..

nandu - she ask me k mai kon hu n i was in sleep so i said k mai jaan bol rhi hu she was askng abt u i said u r sleepng n thn she start shoutng i didnt rmmbr y so i cut the call n again sleep...

manik start laughng n said hahhaha u said jaan bchari ki shkl dekhne vali ho gi fir to kl dekhna mere class me entr krte hi puche gi k mai kaha tha call kis ne pic kiya tha... n all chlo chodo ill handle it...

nandu said ya i knw vase rmmbr na stay away frm aliya... n u wait ill get frsh n up manik hold her hand n said should i acompny u...

nandu jst smile n take manik in washroom he was shock tht how nandu gave prmisn... bt nandu jst push him inside washroom n said baby ap yaha frsh ho jao mai mom k room me ja rhi hu n lock the washroom door... n said tht jb vo frsh ho ah jae gi tb khol de gi tb tk u take ur tym...

OPN THE LINK GUYZ TO C MANAN BED ROOM HOW IT LOOKS LIKE...

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aftr gettng frsh nandu goes to her room n unlock the washroom door n jst thn manik crsh her lips nd start suckng her lips madly... n nandu was jst takn aback with suddrn kiss bt aftr some sec she too response thy were wildly kissng each othr aftr brokng the kiss manik said this was ur punishmnt for lockng me...

nandu jst smile n hold his hand n thy both come down stairs...

niyo - so my both childrns look frsh now...

manan start blushng rmmbrng thier kiss...

niyo - ohkk bcho maine tumhare liye ek teacher ko ghr bulaya hai bcoz yeh tumhari +2 ki pdhai hai n i knw nandu to top kr le gi bt manik tum... tum fir se no. km lao ge which i cant afford u knw +2 k marks bohot imp. hai or agr tumhe nandu k sath same colg me lgna hai to tumhe ab se hi study pr dhyan dena ho ga...

manik - mom mai stdy kr lu ga plzz koi teachr mt bulayo plzz mujhe nandu pdha diya kre gi uski bhi rvisn ho jaya kre gi mere sath... plzzz mom

niyo ask nandu n she said mom ill make him stdy ap teachr ko mna kr do vase bhi u knw na agr yeh nhi pde ga to ise guest room me bhej diya jae ga... n both niyo n nandu start laughng n manik make a shockng face...

aftr dinnr manan wnt to thier room n manik jst hug her n said i promise mai pdu ga bt plzz no guest room u knw na maine pura one year kitni mushkil se tumhare clothes k sath bitaya hai...

i knw baby maine bhi to yeh hi kiya tha...said nandu... n give a swt kiss on his cheks...

manan ly on bed bt sleep was far far away frm thm...

nandu - baby mujhe nind nhi a rhi...

manik - jaan mujhe bhi...

nandu - baby movie dekhe kya...??

manik - ohkk bt which one...??

nandu - baby lepi to lao hm seach kr te hai koi new movie...

manan start searchng for new movie whn thier a adlt movie come... nandini eyes popped out... n manik start smilng seeng her exprestion...

manik - jaan wht say yeh vali movie dekhe kya...

nandu - nohhh...

manik - jaan plzz maine kbhi nhi dekhi u knw mere frndz dekh te hai yeh vali i too wanna c...

nandu - manik i said na no...

manik - jaan bt mai konsa kisi or k sath dekh raha hu tum meri would b wife ho n vase bhi hme bhi to yeh sb krna hi hai agy jah kr... m playng this movie or tum mujhe roko gi nhi... if u love me...

manik put head fons in nandini n in his ears...

movie get started n nandini jst hide her face in manik chest bt head fon was still in her ear so she hear the sound ( do i need to tell which typ of sound was comng )

nandini hold manik shrt n manik jst shrt the movie n said jaan maine movie bnd kr di so u can sit proprly...

nandini jst hold him tightly not leavng him...

manik undrstand she is not feelng comfrtable so he hug her tightly... which give a shivr in her body...

manik ly on bed n nandu was on the top of him...

manik put blanket on thm n thn nandu opn her eyes seeng manik eyes closed she got up frm manik n sit on bed n hld her cell fon...

n start searchng related movie... n jst thn she feel manik was nozzng on her neck...

she jst shut her fon...

manik came near her ear n said jaan u dont need to worry... n vase bhi hmari shdi ko bohot tym hai...

n yeh movie me sb kuch jada hi ovr dikhate hai... u knw i cant hrt u so jst relax... nandu jst trn n hug him tightly... n said i trst u more thn anything... i lv u so much manik...

manik - i lv u too jaan now sleep n forget abt the movie...

thy ly on bed in huggng position only n in midnite nandu feel manik hand inside her top...

she jst hld manik tightly n sleep givng a kiss on his forehead...

precap - new entry... c who get jelous MANIK OR NANDINI...

plewww sry guyzz agr apko yeh bhi bda nhi lga thn i cant do any thing... bcoz mere pas do stories hai so hope u will undrstand... vase mujhe lgta hai yeh bda update hi tha bt baki apko pta ho... bye for now n nxt update will be on 31st on my bday... n for pm buddy me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Plz plzzz manik
Srry icnt com bcz of broken hand
I'm now left hady so understanding. ...



Awesome



Fabbb
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Read all parts in a go...
Its awesome and different too...
Thanks for all the PMs 😊
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Manan:Anything For You
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Wow amazing pls make manik jealous nandu to already hai aliya se
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Superb update!
Nind main bol diya jaan bat kar rahi hu hehehe
that adult movie scene was narrated nicely!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: daman9292


no dr. thy r not gettng maried... bt ya unke rlsn ko jst ek nam diya hai jo koi nhi tod skta in prsnt bt future ka kuch bol nhi skti hai...

n scl bhi ovr hone vala hai its thier lst yr in scl... sry dr. agr apko meri story achi na lgi ho to...



Yaar this is not your first story and I am not reading your work for the first time.. Infact I am quite addicted to it. And I like it too. Par not being a new reader of yours I just wanted to articulate what ever I feel.
And one more thing, never say sorry to people if they don't like your work. Your work, you should like it. Bas, that matters
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Right now they are so sweet and all things nice.

About the jealousy part, I hope it's Manik who gets jealous

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