Manan ff - heartbeat imp note on pg 132...30/06/16 - Page 73

Fabulous...mindblowing ur ff is damm good and now its one of my favorite!! and I like more cuz u don't show 18+ and more intimate parts... which I hate the most especially on MaNan immediately I discontinue a ff when they show too much intimacy n rape n all on nandu which is disguisting hope u don't show that and pls don't feel offended by my this post cuz I wanted to convey my feelings thats it !! ...ok its too Much and pls update next part ASAP n ya pls use a lil small font size sry if my post seemed u hurting...and loved it a lot when u used pics to make scene more realistic... pls even show nandu's attire pls...

Originally posted by: angelanadar087

kya kahu me iss chapter ke liye kon kiska tha kis ke pass chala gaya but in all a very nice chapter sorry for small comment but thoda busy hu par pukka next time lamba wala comment

Love,

Frizz

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

It was amazing update . please post the next part soon . keep smiling 😊😊

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

It was amazing update . please post the next part soon . keep smiling 😊😊

Originally posted by: sheetalky2

Okay so I guess she came back to teach manik a lesson?
Still bit confused
hope u'll clear it in next chapter

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92

Ohhh god nandu ka bf mandy ab ye kya hogy

Originally posted by: shruti_gupta

Nice update...
Mandy is nandu's bf...and Alia is manik's gf...
But when Abhi is nandu's brother like then why she kissed him and what plan they are talking about...
Update soon...

Originally posted by: anjaliii84

wow wow wow..I can't wait fr next chapter plaza dhamakrdar entry dena..Kaiser ki nandu center me n abhi,arya,n maddy sides pe aur car se utarke aisa kuch n sabka muh khula ki khula rah jae plzzz plZzz n plz pm me

Hi dear..

owaoo new start.. bt manik has to pay back harrrd...
the way he broken nandu is not at all forgotten... huhh