MaNan OS: All This Time - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: srstrulez

This was something I have never read before! I want to appreciate your work but I can't find the right words to... First of all, I am not very familiar with Manik and Nandini; I only came here to read because you have written this and I am glad I did though. I found the story open to the reader's perspective as to what really happened and I really like that. It's a little confusing though since the initial part has been written in Nandini's point of view but she doesn't remember it ever happened... or has it ever even happened? Or is it in Manik's head? Like I said, he meets Nandini from a future where Manik isn't with her. As for why Nandini doesn't remember, it's because it hasn't happened for her yet.

What is going on in your head woman! So much, Srishti. So much. 😆

PS: It reminds me of Dumbledore's dialogue: 'Of course it is happening inside your head, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?' Potterhead :")

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: filter.coffee

I have been thinking that i'd ask you to write something.but i didn't even have to!its really interestion.again your writing so beautiful,clear,i could see all scenes happening in front of my eyes. Thank you! :)
But this story is a bit confusing too.is it a time travelling thing or two different dimension,worlds met ?!specially in the 1st part.i didn't quite get that.would you explain? High-five for the time-tavelling guess! 😎

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: filter.coffee


i was right then.really loved reading it.please write more fics like this. I'll try? 😆

and doctor who.heard so much about it and have seen bits of it in gifs :P but never felt like watching it :S I will not talk about this. I will not. I will - YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WATCH IT!

please Ri keep writing this kind of different manan fics.you know how much i love reading your fics.and besides we need different types of manan fics Thank you! :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cooldude101

I love all of your works! You write magic! Please keep on writing and filling our lives with happiness through your magical works!😃

Thank you so much! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow , just soo splendid it was
you are such an amazing writer , all your works till now are my fav
and this one , is yet another unique piece of writing
i loved the concept and the story
a subtle and beautiful story and def one of the best on the forum yet again
all i shud ask u is in manik's voice*kaise ..kaise ..karleti ho tum*😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Wowhhh...!!! 😲

What was that? Whatever it was, it was amazing...😲 God, I love fantasy genre, esp this dimensions, past-in-future, future-in-past sort of thing...But there wasn't any thing written on MaNan, yet...So gald you did...!!! 🤗Haha, thanks! I love fantasy too! *_*

I love the fact that it was so open to interpretations, I know mine, but it makes me want to find out what is yours and others interpretations are...😆 I'm not much for sad endings, but I was reading something angsty and it just inspired me to write. And also Doctor Who. Something like travelling through time just removes so many restrictions, and it becomes easy to explore emotions and reactions to things that otherwise might not happen. This was Nandini getting to see Manik one last time when she thought she'd never see him again.

And it makes me wonder so many things, like did Manik remember her and the encounter all this time or he just was reminded of it? What was his reaction when he first met her if he did remember her? How did he feel when he first "officially" met her and she behaved like a total stranger? SO, so many to wonder about...🤓 No, he remembers. He met a strange girl on a rainy evening, and he feels like he knows her when he couldn't possibly.

But what I loved the MOST is:-

How in 2012, she smiled a sad smile when he didn't "remember" and she said the same thing what his future self have...

And how in 2015, he smiled a sad smile when she did "remember" and said what she has said to his past self...

So, so amazing and mind-blowing...!!! Parallels! My favourite things! 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..

Wohoo😲

I mean i loved it i really did. Supernatural sort of things fascinate me, it was amazing just amazing. I love all your works though😃

Thank you so much! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: drnidsur

wow , just soo splendid it was

you are such an amazing writer , all your works till now are my fav
and this one , is yet another unique piece of writing
i loved the concept and the story
a subtle and beautiful story and def one of the best on the forum yet again
all i shud ask u is in manik's voice*kaise ..kaise ..karleti ho tum*😳
Should I blush like Nandini then? 😆

Thank you so much! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os dear😃😃
so cute😳😳
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love it... as always a very unique piece of writing from you..terrific job...

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