Manan SS'Two Hearts'beat as one part 6 update pg 49 28/5/16 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

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Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

awesome story oye..

curiosity on its peak now..

Originally posted by: chair1992

I don't want to sound harsh but you should proofread it before posting

You should also use complete words

Don't take it as any attack

I am in no way an expert in writing but if I see something that could be improved than I would suggest it

Now to the Story, I am a bit confused because Nandini said "I love you" but Manik says he doesn't know her, so that means they had no real contact

Could it count as love or is it only a crush since she has seen him and finds him attractive and can't distinguish love and attraction

Originally posted by: paarsaa

part :1 present

Nandini sleeping on bad n manik doing his office work on couch
nandini saw same nightmare she running behind manik "Manik stop plzz stop manik" but manik don't look her back he keep walking n disappear in dark
"Manik" suddenly she woke up with a jerk..she sweating badly n breath heavily
manik understood that she saw same dream he take a deep breath n come close to her
"Nandini plzz sleep m here "...
manik I saw dream...
Manik sit beside her she rested her head on his shoulder"..
"U R not well nandini I'll take u to the doctor tomorrow"..nandini doesn't speak anything she closed her eyes how can she told him that she doesn't want doctors treatment she want his love n care the she gives him but she knows that it can't be happen ..y I did it?? she always thought about their past she fall into sleep by thinking to the past...
manik made lay down her on bad n covered her with comforter n came to his balcony he knows she loves him from that day he saw him as his brothers best friend but he don't love even he didn't love aliya with whom he commited in past..
______________past_________________Aliya how can u even think like that??
Manik asked aliya with disbelieve
"Manik face the reality nandini hamare bich aagayi hai"
Aliya its not like that " plzz try to understand.
I m going to my dad plzz take ur ring she placed her ring in his hand
Tum ye engagement tod rhi ho??
Haan...said aliya ..
How nandini ?? how u said I love u to manik?"asked cabir angrily ' u know he is commuted to aliya n they both soon going married ..they both loves each other thant how could u ??
Bhai plzz listen to me it was all just prank ..
"prank?? like really in prank u let out ur inner feeling for him in front of everyone??..

Bhai ..nandini hasited " u ..u kn..know that..she left her sentence in mid way..
Yes I know .I know that u love him but I can't do anything for u ..cabir also start crying..
How can I tell manik that marry my sister by knowing that he is getting married how??
y nandini y ? y u love him y? how can I face him now..
they both start crying cabir knows his sister loves manik but he is helpless he can't give her her life her happiness which is Manik Malhotra..
"Papa accept dhruv's proposal for u " this Sunday u r heating engage with him.. cabir said while looking down
"No " ...nandini replied

okk here is the first part do like n comment or ignore.