MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE INDEX ON PG 1 - Page 90

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Posted: 9 years ago
MANIK KO WAPIS LE AAO ANU PLS & MANAN KO SAATH ME KAR DO PLS
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Posted: 9 years ago
Least expected twist. Amazing writer u r... The way manik left lvg all d ques unanswered n nandani being strong keeping manik's promise. Fab 4 being thr for nandani. Every emotion is b'fly penned down. Can't wait for d the mystery to b revealed. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vanithanambi

It was really damn AWEEESOME dear... Matlab Kaise kar lete ho!!!!!!!!!!? U ve penned each and every emotion so nicely... we can feel the pain if the situation s worst and we too blush if its a romantic scene... annnd really never expected this twist... I thought u r tooo gud at romance but nooo... u r tooo gud at penning twist, pain, happy, emotional and ROMANTIC parts as well... Gud going... becoming an professional writer day by day... seriously ur writing has improved a lot, not like that ki starting was not gud... but the way u write now has an professional approach compared to the earliest parts... So keep on writing... LOADS OF LOVE... STAY BLESSED... and as usual I'm eeeaaagerly waiting for ur next update... finger crossed...


Wooo that's really a very big compliment dear thank you so much dil se 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
I were eager to know what have kept in store for us in future updates
Its good that nandini has hope that he will be back
And lastly I love your writing
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PART 125 :

Nandini was walking towards upstairs but was stopped seeing a laptop on floor.

RAMU : nandini beta aagaye aap

NANDINI : haan kaka aagayi main lekin ye sab kya hain ye laptop ye sari cheze aisi neeche kyu padi hai

RAMU : woo beta bade saab kaam karre the na isliye

NANDINI : kaka maine aapse kaha na ki unhe aram ki zarurath hain aapne unhe kaam karne se kyu nahi roka

RAMU : maine kaha tha beta par

NANDINI : kair chodiye aap jayiye

RAMU : main ye sab nikal detha hoon

NANDINI : nahi kaka rehne do main upar hi jari hoon main leke jaongi

Ramu leaves and nandini walks upstairs taking laptop.

She goes to mohan room and sees that he was not present there. She keeps the laptop on table and walks out.

Mohan who goes for a walk in garden returns back and sits on couch reading newspaper.

KABIR : koyi insan newspaper bi itni seriously padtha hain kya

MOHAN : kabirrr

DHRUV : vaise mohan jee zara headlines padke sunayiye na

MOHAN : ye tu kehra hain

DHRUV : haan

MOHAN : headlines tho main baad main sunaonga lekin ye batao tum dono yaha kar kya rahe ho

MUKTHI : doon nahi

ALIA : chaar

FAB 4 stands at door smiling

MOHAN : kya bath hain subah subah surprise haan

FAB 4 : haan and comes and settles on couch

MOHAN : achanak se ye surprise kyu

KABIR : kyu sirf apki beti hi yaha roj aa sakthi hain kya

MOHAN : arrey aisa nahi hain

DHRUV : chodiye mohan ji chodiye

MOHAN : tu na pehle mohan kehna bandh kar agar meri pyari si bitiya rani ko ye bath patha chelegi na tho

ALIA : haan bath tho sahi hain uncle hamari princess zarur dhruv ka murder kardegi

DHRUV : arey mohan ke baad ji bi tho bolra hoo na

KABIR : chod thu mere shona ke hath maar kake hi sudrega

MOHAN : acha vaise tumhari shona aur hamari sab ki princess hain kaha bai

MUKTHI : arrey wo tho hamse pehle hi nikli gar se in fact usse bi nahi patha ki ham yaha ane vale hain

MOHAN : agar tum logon se pehle gar pahunch gayi tho phir

All look each other and then in unison "vahi hogi aur kaha hogi"

"Listen mr malhotra ye aap bilkul teek nahi karre hain main thab se tumhe apne presentation ke bare main bolthi jari hoon aur tum ho ki hmmm and making a cute angry pout looks at MANIK

After some time she holds her ears and "chorryyy"

Dekho I know tum bahuth busy ho isliye mujhse bath nahi kar sakthe tho its ok main samaj sakthi hoon aur offooo main bi na acha acha listen am once again sry I know tumhe meri muh se ye bathe sunna pasandh nahi hain sooo I'll change the topic haa.

Aaj bahuth hectic day hone vala hain patha hain aaj mere pure chaar meetings hain jis main se ek ke project ke bare main tumhe already patha hain. Baki teen thode chote projects hain lekin phir bi I hope wo deal hamari company ke sath hi ho"

LIVING ROOM :

MOHAN : pure panch saal hogaye hain

KABIR : lekin uski muskurahat ek pal ke liye bi uski chehre se nahi hati

DHRUV : uski pyar hi uski thakath hain

ALIA : aur wo khud hamari thakath

MUKTHI : bilkul sahi kaha tu ne alia patha nahi agar princess nahi hothi tho hamara kya hotha

Kabir smiles

MOHAN : kya hua kabir

KABIR : kuch nahi bas purani yaade

DHRUV : bolna kya yaad aaya

KABIR : yaad nahi din kahu tho shayad sahi hoga

MUKTHI : mathlab

KABIR : same date lekin panch saal pehle

All had an unknown smile on their faces.

FLASHBACK :

MOHAN : pagal hain kya kuch bi kehtha hain kuch bi kartha hain kabir tu uska phone try karthe reh

KABIR : haa haa main kartha hoon

MOHAN : dhruv tu apne sare friends ko call karke puch kayi usne kuch kaha ho unse

DHRUV : jee jee uncle

Mohan gets busy trying to trace manik's number.

Mukthi and alia come running

MUKTHI : guys kya hua manik kaha hain

Dhruv explains them everything

ALIA : has he gone mad

MUKTHI : wo hame aise kaise chodke jaa saktha hain

Everyone was busy calling,talking moving from one corner to another controlling their tears while one person sat silently observing everyone.

After two hours they get information that manik flight has been taken off long time before and now they can't reach him because they had no idea where he was.

KABIR : hame us jana hoga

DHRUV : haan

MOHAN : main yaha sab teek hothe hi us aaonga

MUKTHI : lekin koyi tho rastha hoga jisse ham use dundh sakthe hain

ALIA : wo number nikal diya hain aur hame ye bi nahi patha ki us main wo rahega kaha

KABIR : haan lekin shayad hame jaldi kuch patha cheljaye which could

There discussion was disturbed due to someone's laugh.

All turn and look who was the owner of that laugh.

All say in unison "nandiniii"

NANDINI : guys relaxxx

MOHAN : beta tu teek hain na

NANDINI : haan papa main bilkul teek hoo aur aap sab bi please tension lena bandh kariye

KABIR : ye tu bolri hain

NANDINI : haan

DHRUV : nandini tum pichle kuch minaton thak rori thi manik ke liye pareshan thi uske liye ye sochri thi ki wo kaha hoga kaise hoga kana kaya hoga ya nahi aur ab

NANDINI : aur ab kya dhruv hasri hoon hain na haan bilkul sahi kaha tumne kuch der pehle thak main pareshan thi uske liye lekin ab nahi hoon kyuki main janthi hoon ki ab wo teek hain us jara hain

KABIR : nandini wo us ja nahi raha hain jaa chuka hain wo bi ham sab ko chodke

NANDINI : main janthi hoon kabir

MUKTHI : nandini tum aise kaise react kar sakthi hoo

ALIA : wo tumse door jara hain aur

NANDINI : wo mujhse kabi bi door nahi ja saktha alia kabi bi nahi

MOHAN : beta dekho

NANDINI : papa ek minute main thabse chup thi kyuki agar main kuch bolthi tho tum log meri bath nahi manthe lekin ab main kuch kehna chahthi hoon

Guys manik us ja chuka hain and am sure ki uske us jane ke peche koyi na koyi vajah zaroor hogi

MUKTHI : aisi konsi vajah ho sakthi hain nandini jiske karan use sare apno ko chod kar jana pada wo bi bina bataye

NANDINI : vajah tho main bi nahi janthi mukthi par itna janthi hoon ki uske liye bi bahuth mushkil raha hoga hame bina kuch bataye yaha se chele jane ke liye

KABIR : tu kehna kya chahthi hain

NANDINI : main chahthi hoon ki ham sab wohi kare jo manik chahtha ho

DHRUV : matlab

NANDINI : agar wo nahi chahtha hain ki ham use contact

KABIR : tu pagal ho gayi hain

MUKTHI : hosh main tho hain na

ALIA : tum ye bol bi kaise sakthi ho nandini

NANDINI : kya ek sawal kar sakthi hoon

All look her silently

NANDINI : tum log manik ko mujhse zyada janthe ho na tho kya tum logon ko nahi lagtha ki manik ye jo kuch bi kara hain uske peche koyi strong reason hoga

KABIR : haan bilkul lagtha hain

DHRUV : aur ham us vajah ko jana chahthe hain

MUKTHI : aur wo thabi hoga jab ham manik se milenge

ALIA : jiske liye ab hame shayad us jana hoga

NANDINI : guys tumhe kya lagtha hain agar manik wo bath hamse share kar saktha tha tho kya wo nahi kartha

She stops for sometime and then again am sure usne har possible way ko apnaya hoga thaki ham sabko aise chodke use US na jana pade aur jab kuch work out nahi hua hoga thabi wo ye decision liya hoga

Guys main nahi chahthi manik ko hamari vajah se koyi bi problem ho agar usne kaha ki wo hamse contact nahi rakna chahtha hai tho uska bi koyi reason hoga

KABIR : tho thu chahthi hain ham chup chap bait jaye

DHRUV : uske vapas ane ka intezar kare

NANDINI : haan

MUKTHI : damnnn nandini ye tu kya bolri hain

NANDINI : kya manik hame kabi dhoka de saktha hain

ALIA : never

NANDINI : tho bas wo jaldi hi vapas ayega aur hame bas thab thak ka intezar karna hoga

MUKTHI : lekin

NANDINI : wo ayega mukthi wo hamare bagair reh nahi sakthi hain

KABIR : ek baar sochna nandu ham kisi bi tharah kuch bi karke use dhund sakthe hain

NANDINI : kaise

KABIR : ham US jayenge aur

NANDINI : kabir US hamare school ke jaise chota nahi hain tum log kaha kaha dundoge usse

DHRUV : we know US chota nahi hain lekin dundlenge na nandini tum please

NANDINI : dhruv tum apne buddy ko janthe ho na agar tum log uske kareeb bi pahunchoge na tho phir bi wo tum logon se kabi nahi milega jab thak wo khud aisa na chahtha ho

Mohan who was listening all this silently sits on chair having tears.

Nandini sees him and sits on her knees holding his hands

NANDINI : papa

Mohan looks her

NANDINI : aap mujhe apni beti manthe hain na

Mohan nods his head as yes

NANDINI : kya aap mere liye ek help karenge

Mohan just looks her.

NANDINI : aap mujhe apni beti ke sath sath apna beta bi man lijiye

Mohan couldn't utter a word and tears roll down from his eyes

NANDINI : papa please

Mohan pulls her and hugs her tightly.

FAB 4 have tears looking them.

Nandini slowly breaks the hug and dekiye main abi se bathari hoon jab manik vapas ajayega na tho wohi apka beta banega bas thab thak ke liye main dual role play karungi

Mohan smiles slightly

NANDINI : haan tho teek hain

Mohan nods his head

NANDINI : pakka na

MOHAN : haan

Nandu once again hugs him and he kisses her hairs.

Nandu gets up and turns towards FAB 4

"Kya main tum logon ke liye nandini ke sath sath manik bi ban sakthi hoon"

All smile with tears and share a group hug.

(END OF FLASHBACK)

ALIA : uss din se aaj thak hamari princess ne hame ek pal ke liye bi manik ki kami mehsoos hone nahi di

MUKTHI : haan aur itna pyar diya hain ki ab tho agar mujhe koyi puchega na ki pyar kya hotha hain tho main usse hamari princess ko dikake kahungi ki "pyar nandini hai"

KABIR : ye zindagi bi kitni ajeeb hain yar

DHRUV : haan ajeeb tho hain

MOHAN : lekin sundar bi hain

MUKTHI : aur ham isi tharah yehi baitenge na tho hamari princess bi niche nahi ayegi aur ham yaha se bahar bi nahi jayenge

KABIR : haan bai hame manik ki deewani ko hamari duniya main vapas lana hoga

DHRUV : chelo

ALIA : haan let's go.


If we love someone we should trust them...truely and completely...and here nandini did the same. According to me the presence and absence of a person doesn't really affect the amount of love we have for them so yes though manik was far away from nandu her love towards him did not changed not even a single percent. Don't know how you are going to react to this but please let me know your opinion regarding the update and mine way of thinking...
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Posted: 9 years ago
when will manik cum??
will he cum back
so much mystery
loving the suspence
nandani is very responsible now
and fab4 loves her soo much that is sooo cute !!!!!1
👏👏👏
nice update

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Posted: 9 years ago
Plsss bring him back... tears are not stopping Plsss... 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing yaar i loved it u r marvalleous writer and i too agree if we love someone we need to trust them and manik tho promise ki na wapas aneka.. and i loved the bonding between fab4 n maniks dad plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sohalee

when will manik cum??

will he cum back
so much mystery
loving the suspence
nandani is very responsible now
and fab4 loves her soo much that is sooo cute !!!!!1
👏👏👏
nice update


He will be back let's see when 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: puzzz

Plsss bring him back... tears are not stopping Plsss... 😭


He will be back dear please don't cry I beg you 😔

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