MANAN FROM HATE TO LOVE(CHP 3:PAGE 4)

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Posted: 10 years ago

HI GUYS I AM A SILENT READER OF INDIA FORUMS...FROM MANY DAYS I WAS THINKING TO WRITE A STORY...FINALLY TODAY I AM ABLE TO WRITE A STORY...PLEASE SUGGEST A NAME FOR MY STORY...I AM WRITING CHARACTER SKETCH ...AS I WILL GET COMMENTS I WILL START WITH A CHAPTER...

CHARACTER SKETCH:
MANIK MALHOTRA: A RICK SPOILED BRAD...HANDSOME HUNK...EVERY GIRL WILL FALL IN LOVE BY SEEING HIM...DIFFICULT TO UNDERSTAN...TILL NOW EXCEPT FAB 5 NO ONE HAS UNDERSTOOD HIM...HE IS A CEO OF MALHOTRA INDUSTRIES AND A LEAD VOCALIST OF FAB5.

NANDANI MURTHY: A BEAUTY QUEEN...FULL OF DREAMS...LIVES WITH AMMS AND HIS BRO RISHAB AND CHACHA CHACHI...RANKER OF HER COLLAGE ...COMPLETED HER STUDIES AND CAME TO MUMBAI FOR AN JOB INTERVIEW. ABHI & NAVYA ALSO CAME WITH HER TO MUMBAI FOR JOBS.

CABIR THAKUR: DRUMSTICK.THIS FUN LOVING GUY, ALWAYS LAUGHS TO COVER UP HIS SADNESS FILLED INSIDE HIM.HE SHARES A GREAT FRIENSHIP WITH MANIK ON A EQUAL LEVEL...HE IS R'J(HE IS NOT GAY).

NAVYA NAVELI: SHE CAME MUMBAI WITH NANDANI...TO FINT HER TRUE LOVE...AND TO BECOME A INTERIOR DESIGNER.

DHRUV VEDANT:MYSTERIOUS HOT GUY,WHO FALLS FOR ALYA AND HE IS LIKE BROTHER TO MANIK. HE IS ALSO THE CEO OF VEDANT INDUSTRIES.

ALYA SAXENA: A FASHION DESIGNER...HOT AND PREETY...IN LOVE WITH DHRUV.

MUKTI VARDHAN: SHE WORKS WITH ALYA...BOTH ARE FASHION DESIGNER...HOT AND SEXY...AND EQUALLY PREETY...IN SEARCH OF TRUE LOVE...

ABHIMANYU THAKKAR:A CUTE BOY...WHO LIKES TO SEE EVERY ONE HAPPY...AND MAKES EVERYONE HAPPY AROUND HIM...FRIEND OF NANDANI...HE IS THE DOCTOR

INDEX:
CHAPTER 1: PAGE 1

CHAPTER 2: PAGE 3

CHAPTER 3: PAGE 4

REST OF THE CHARACTERS ARE SAME AS THE SHOW...PLZ COMMENT GUYS ABOUT THE STORY...CHAPTER ONE WILL BE UPDATED SOON...KEEP COMMENTING...AND DONT FORGET TO SUGGEST AN NAME FOR STORY...AND PLZ PLZ TELL HOWS IT???

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samiksha singh

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice
N thank god alya is vith dhruv
Waiting for lllooonnnggg update

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__mistt__

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita2393
Nice
N thank god alya is vith dhruv
Waiting for lllooonnnggg update

thanku so much for your reply...please suggest a name...i will write long chapters...this is just a character sketch...thanku...keep reading and commenting

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samiksha singh

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry...actually m not good in this..
Hey anyone here give d beautiful name of this beautiful story
Plllsss suggest[I][/I][B][/B]

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__mistt__

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CHAPTER 1

MANGLORE SCENE:

AMMS: NANDU KANNA!! JALDI UTHO...TUMHARI FLIGHT KA TIME HO RHA H...

NANDU: HA AMMS BAS 5 MIN.

NAVYA ENTERS

AMMS: AAGHI BETA...

NAVYA: HA AMMS HUM TOA ITNE EXCITED H JANE KAI LIYE...KI KYA BTAYE...ACCHA AMMS NANDANI UTH GYI?

AMMS: KHA BETA...KAB SAI AAVAG DE RHI HU ...5MIN ...5MIN KAR RHI H...JA TU HI UTHA ...TUJHE PTA H NA VO KAISI H

NAVYA: NANDU UTHO...HYE MAHTA RANI YEH LADKI DEKHO...HUM ITNA JALDI TAYYAR HO BHI GAYE PAR YEH TOA AB TAK SO RHI H...

NANDANI: NAVYA TUM AA BHI GYI..ITNA JALDI?

NAVYA: KYA JALDI? 9 BAJE H? UTTHO HYE MAHATARANI!!

NANDANI JUMPED AND GOT UP: KYA 9 BAJE GYE?

NAVYA: HA MAM AAP TOA BHUL HI GYI THI KI HUMKO AAJ MUMBAI JANA H...12 BAJE KI FLIGHT H...AAP TOA APNAI KHABO SAI SAI TOA BAAR NIKLO..

NANDANI: NAVYA AMMS KO BHOLO NASHTA LAGAI...MAI BAS 10 MIN MAI READY HOKE AATI HU..

NAVYA: PKA 10 MIN?

NANDANI: BAS 10 MIN...PKA

NAVYA GOES DOWN AND NANDANI FRESHES UP...AND WEARS A ICE BLUE COLOR JEANS AND A PINK CROP TOP AND LEAVES HER HAIRS OPEN AND COMES DOWN...

AMMS: KANNA ITNA LATE KOI KARTA H KYA? ITS 10 AND U HAVE TO LEAVE TILL 10:30 BCOZ YOUR FLIGHT IS AT 12PM

NANDANI: SORRY AMMS

AMMS: ACHA TUMHARA N NAVYA KA SAMAN GADHI MAI RAKHVA DIYA H...AND SAB PAPERS ACCHE SAI LIYE H NA?

NAVYA N NANDU NODDED YES

AMMS: ACCHA CHALO ABHI NASHTA KARO

NAVNI DOES BREAKFAST AND BIDS GOOD BYE TO THERE PARENTS AND SAT IN A CAR AND LEAVE FOR AIRPORT

FAB5 WAS OUT OF INDIA IN DUBAI FOR A CONCERT AND THEY TOO WERE RETURNING MUMBAI ON THE SAME DAY

IN DUBAI:
CABIR: GUYS READY?..MAINE SAB SAMAN RAKVA DIYA H

FAB 3: YA..BUT WHERE IS MANIK?

DHRUV: THERE HE IS!

MUKTI: TU HUMESHA LATE KAR

MANIK: SORRY NA..

ALYA: ACCHA ABHI JALDI CHALO NHI TOA FLIGHT MISS HO JAHEGHI

AIRBORT SCENE:

NANVI CHECKED IN...AND AT THE SAME TIME IN DUBAI FAB5 CHECKED IN

NANDANI CALLED ABI

ABI: HI NANDU NIKLI TUM?

NANDANI: YA ABHI ABHI CHECK IN KIYA

ABI: GOOD!...WHEN WILL UR FLIGHT LAND IN MUMBAI?

NANDANI: MOSTLY TILL 6...WE WILL COME OUT

ABI: ACCHA OK I WILL BE THERE TUM DONO ACCHE SAI ANA AUR KUCH BHI HO TOA CALLL ME

NANDU: OK!

AND THEY HUNG UP!

THEY HEADED TO THE RESPECTIVE FLIGHTS...

SO GUYS THIS WAS THE CHAPTER 1...LETS SEE WILL THEY MEET AT AIRPORT OR NOT...LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENTS...KEEP COMMENTING AND SUGGEST A NAME FOR STORY...AND SORRY FOR SMALL ONE...

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__mistt__

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manya_189
Niceee
:)

THANKS😊...SUGGEST A NAME

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ayush

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey..
Nice start..
N about title what about "love is trust"..
I can suggest more.. But ryt now mjhe bas yhi samajh as raha h..

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amrutha.shetty

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey its a good start ...seeing for your further updates will surely read ...abt name may b u can keep ...-- Of TwO HeArTs WhIch cOmBiNe❤️😊

LoTs Of Love...

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__mistt__

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: puccha
Hey..
Nice start..
N about title what about "love is trust"..
I can suggest more.. But ryt now mjhe bas yhi samajh as raha h..

Thanks for your reply

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__mistt__

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: amrutha.shetty
Hey its a good start ...seeing for your further updates will surely read ...abt name may b u can keep ...-- Of TwO HeArTs WhIch cOmBiNe❤️😊
LoTs Of Love...

Thanks for suggesting name...and thanks for story reply...will see through the name thing

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