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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing...
Finally nyonika's truth is out...
She deserves a punishment...
Awww their family tym was super cute
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww😳 mawara seruxly ur a rockstar man⭐️ u looted my ❤️ away literally hats of to u for penning sch a wondeful story with perfection👏 there was all emotions emerge in ds chp😃 finally after 4 long years two bodies n one soul meet☺️ really loved manik n mano moments specially bathroom one😲 n wht shuld i say abt romance😳 no one can beat u in dt☺️ wanna hug u man🤗 plzz take gud care of ur self as i my self is not well😭 i dnt want u to b dowm😃 post another chp soon will b eagelry w8ting for it😃tc love ya😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsum update
cont soon
get well soon
take care dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update😊👏⭐️
loved it from core of my heart
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

"What will you name her Nandu?" Mrs Kumar asked Nandini.


"Manvi..!!" Nandini whispered and kissed her forehead.


"Wow..!! It's a beautiful name..!! Kahan say socha tum nay itna payara naam?" Mr Kumar asked her.


"Her Papa wanted to name her Manvi..!!" Nandini told them and they both smiled sadly.

...


(That's the power of love...even when you are so far...yet it makes you feel you are so close... Coz he gave a reason to live...

Manik gave nandini his life to protect as baby girl was manik's dream)



"I saw that you left us alone again..!!" Manvi told him innocently and Manik felt like someone had torn his heart in thousand of pieces. His own daughter had doubts on him that he will leave her.


"Baby..!! I promise..!! I will never ever leave you alone again..!! Trust me Mano..!!" Manik tried to convince her and she nodded. She then gently placed her head on his broad shoulder and closed her eyes. Manik kept pacing here and there while patting her back. Soon her breathing became even she was fast asleep. Manik sighed in relief. He walked towards Manvi's bedroom and lay down with Manvi in his arms. Soon he too drifted to sleep.


( snif snif... I am missing my dad...

...kya mawara senti kar diya...

When ever I cry...I always had my dad by my side... He loves me like no one can...not even my mom...)


Manik and Manvi were lying on the bed cuddling to each other. Manvi's head was on Manik's chest and Manik was holding the little one tightly.

(That's is most cutest thing about the relation between a father and dad)


Ouch..!! I am sholly(sorry)..!!" Manvi shouted putting her hands on her eyes and turned around. MaNan instantly broke the hug and Nandini got down of Manik's lap and she was red tomato now. Manik laughed out loud.

(Oh my god!!! That's so embarrassing... Our manvi really have etiquettes)


What the hell are you both doing?" Nandini shouted on top of her voice. Manik and Manvi who were ready to throw water on each other again instantly froze on their places.


"It was Papa's idea..!!" Manvi shouted and hide behind Manik.


"Haww..!! Jhot..!! No Nandini...!! It was Mano's idea..!!" Manik tried to defend himself.


"Shut up you both..!!" Nandini shouted again and both put fingers on their lips. Nandini was fuming with anger.


"Papa..!! Mama is vely(very) gusa on us..!!" Manvi whispered and Manik nodded.

(Best part... Daughter and dad are playing around and mom finds out...

Shit abh toh ham gaye... Abh toh rabh rakha hai...hehehe)


and not to forget...

NIYONIKA...

( now actually I am pitting her... Bahut bura haal hoga bichari ka... Dhobhi ka Kutta...no no correction...dhobhi ki kutti na that ki na ghat ki...;))


Manan romance was well explained... Yar your work is really appriseable... And most importantly you update really soon and that to 3 parts in a go... Hats off to you...

And that to when you are not even well...


Take care of yourself Mawara... Dont stress yourself... Your updates as well as readers can wait...Your readers really will understand... Just look after yourself... Get well soonish sweetheart...


Ps- this is 3rd time I am posting it...if it doesn't get posted I will kill myself


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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow amazing mind blowing update it was I mean the 4th chapter. .
Emotional loving caring family scenes...
Loved the way manvi was showing her toys to manik nd he was just admiring her little angel. ..
Then the scenes were manvi was so angry that her father does not know about the manners nd she was teaching him..was lovely awesome cute...nd manik was just listening to her...
The way manvi nd manik fed each other..Awww
Then manvi also made manik to feed nandini. ..awww again...
Manik is behaving do maturely ...loved it...
Ice cream scene was awesome with the song perfectly matching with their situation. ..
Amazing great going 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautfiul yaar!!! I felt like killing Nyonika when I read it, so can't imagine what Manik would do!!!! Manvi is so cute :) Waisy aao dono lomance kal lay they?!!!! ROFL!!!!! I also really want to know Fab 4's reaction to this... Manik was pissed at only Nyonika but Fab 4 is gonna be pissed at Nandini too!!!!!
But seriously, health comes first... Don't even think about stressing your dimaag until your fully OK!!!! Thank you so much for the PM!!!! And update when you get better!!!!!!
Get well soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly take care of yourself. .. We will wait mo issues 😊
Update of 5th chapter was again awesome mind blowing. ..
So the truth is out...It was neyonika who did this. ..
She threatened nandini that she would kill her child nd tortured her yo throw her put of manik life. ..😡neyonika
She also blocked all the ways of contacting ...
And Manik ohh god reading that letter nd not seeing nandini around went to coma...Ohh god
But at last they both shared their part of sufferings nd spent a beautiful night together 😳
Morning scene was nice nd lovely showing the bonding between the trio...
The last bathroom scene was do cute the way manvi nd manik were playing with water nd when nandini got angry they started blaming each other. ..
Then nandini too get along with them...
Such a lovelunch update 👏
M in love with your writing...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
SUPERB
👏
UPDATE WAITING FOR ITS LUV ONE
⭐️

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