Manan ss Yeh Hai Aashiqui TEASER Ch 30 B pg 126 - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manikmalhotra2

This is just an amazing and mesmerizing story ... I am a new reader of your story ... I was just searching ... and I read the name of your story ... and I read it yesterday in one go ... and OMG ... I'm mesmerized by your story ... it's something too different I have read up till now ...And is really very amazing and mind blowing .. I'm saying it from my heart🤗👏

Manik and Nandini they had suffered a lot ... poor they as they did not remember any thing ... just feel like crying while reading them suffering and reading their past😭

Just love the scene when MaNan met each other ...

You penned down everything very beautifully and elegantly👏

Waiting desperately for the next update ... plz pm me if u can ... and Thanks A lot for writing this mesmerizing story



Glad you loved it so mch
Thank you for such an overwhelming reply
It means a lot
Will surely pm you dear for next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

seriously yar..too amzing chapter. ...itsss nice ...well superb...seriously thiss a big surprise. .seriously m waiting .n finally u updated ...vo bhi doublee dose...awesomeee surprise. .back to update. .update was amzing n emotional too..thank god u reveal past...seriously I alwayss think abt their past...itsss just soo pure love they share...kaun kaise janegaa ki nandu hi pari h...seriously dil ki language hi alag hoti h...ab dono phir pass aa rahe h ...that's awesome. .cabir n dhruv accept nandu .but mukti she is confused. ...n alyaa she is toh deffinate upto something. ...let's see now..waiting for their marriage...aise surprise deti rahnaaa...keep updating like this. ..update soon. ..waiting for next update eagerly impatientlythanks for this emotional update. ..n yaaa one thing cavyaa r fab...navya ne entry mar hi li..ab waiting for more...:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)


Thank you for such a lovely reply
Will try to give you more surprise like this
Try to update asap as can
Keep loving
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_valli


hey kritika baby...first of all congratulations for this amazing story...ana a biiiggg warm hug from my side...

i came across this story yesterday and guess what i read all the parts in one go...i must say u r an amazing writer who having great expression skills.
u made me cry with nandini in previous episodes...thats an great achievemnt for u...it is not easy for a writer to make readers to connect to the story...but u dud it girl...hats off to u...
i like the way the story is progressing and the characters travelling...plz put some light moments from next updates...
stay blessed and keep entertain us...plz pm me for ur further updates...


Thank you so much dear dill se
Lots of hug for cmnting:)
M really glad that I could connect to you guys to d story as i was
Will surely pm you for d next
Keep loving
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzooarora

Such a emotional update.

How Manik can't remember anything by seeing nandini.😲


He didn't know anything about his past hiw he could remember anything
But i showed that they both feel connected
But they couldn't actually just remember everything na it'll b so unreal
Let d story unfold more will get all your ans soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazing story dear
Read all the parts
Tab pta nhi kya hoga sbka reaction jb unki memory wapis aayegi aur sach pta chlega ke nandu hi manik ki pari hai...
Lovd it
Continue soon


Thank you dear
Glad you liked it
Abi usme tym h dear 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome I read your story today
Only in one go it was
Awesome yaar manan ki marriage
Tikh se ho jaane do aur yeh aliya hamesha bad character plz uske dimak mein kuch budhhi dalo plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE ABOUT STORYLINE



hey guys first of all thank you so much for loving me nd my story means alot its all your love that m here THANK YOU SO MUCH
So here i mean to clarify some imp things about d story
This story is about how two people r stranger yet not they don't know each other yet they do know nd how they find out what's d real story is how they cover up all distance that had been created by their destiny challenging d almighty nd get back to eachother
So guys it won't b in favour na nd not injustice to story if they remember everything so soon then it won't match up what exactly i wanna portray. So uh guys need to keep some patience as to when they will get their memory back it still have some tym so plzz have some patience nd m sure uh won't regret it.
One more thing i wanna clarify is Aliya is not a villain she is a sweetheart don't hate her she won't do anything harsh its just a sudden shock leading to her insecurities nd increasing her anger inside her which is making her do things like that but don't worry she too had to accept d actuall reality.
Yeahh actuall villian of d story is yet to b disclosed yr m sure that will do actually villian types things par abi thoda tym h uski entry m. Abi thodi shanti maintain kr rkhi h mne story m warna villian toh ashanti phelayga hi na 😆 😆
So i hope i have myself nd d storyline clear to uhh guys if still u r having any doubt or queery drop it down in your comments will surely reply.
One more thing guys i want to add a banner to d story it's really close to my heart my first ever writing so anyone of you who could help me just pm meh will add a banner with credit

Bhout bola n mne ptani kaise itna toh ni bolti m so enough of my bak bak guys
Stay tuned picture abhi baki h mere dost 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Waghalekar

Awesome I read your story today

Only in one go it was
Awesome yaar manan ki marriage
Tikh se ho jaane do aur yeh aliya hamesha bad character plz uske dimak mein kuch budhhi dalo plz


Thank you dear uh liked it
Yeah refer to d above note all your doubts will b cleared
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 24


Chacha consoled chachi who had now stopped crying. Chacha understood her point of view but still was having doubt what if everything didn't happened the way she's imagining nd situation can b worst.

He tried making her understand that they should not take it too fast nd need to think of otherwise consequences too.


But chachi at her best made him understand that he should believe her nd that she's having a positive intuition about it nd everything will b alright.

Chacha agreed to him not finding words to argue more so he surrendered



IN HALL

Cabir sneaked out of his room making sure there is no danger. He was damn hungry thats why he came out otherwise no way that he will come out of his room...he made his way towards kitchen walking like an alert army man who even sleeps with open eyes is ever ready to face his army but that what d diff btw him nd an army man he wasn't ready to nd was just to stay as far as possible who in his eyes was his big enemy

But to his bad luck his stars were not in his favour right now nd d thing he feared happened he again heard d most unwanted persons voice...making a bad face he turned having no way out

Navya was standing at door her annoyed face lit up d moment she saw most wanted person in her lyf...she was struggling as she was holding a heavy bag

NAVYA: Cabir ji...ap hmri madd kr skte h yh bag bhut bhari h she said making a face as she was carrying kilos weight

Cabir looked sideways hoping anyone there who could rescue him but today his stars were actually in wrong position there was no one in the hall except them too

CABIR: Mai haan woh...ohk he said what he didn't wanted to utter

There navya was just thanking her stars that she was alone nd he accepted to help her

Cabir came to her nd forwarded his hand to help her nd there hands brushed a little nxt moment he took his hand off while navya was standing lyk a shy bride 😆

CABIR: ummm...tumm yh bag niche rakho m utha ta hu he said looking other side

Navya was unable to say anything followed what he said

Cabir took d bad nd it was really heavy in his mind yh kya pather bhr k lyi h phirse mera khi phle jaise koi test toh nhi le rhi goddd yhi ladki mili thi puri duniya mh hmri padosi apko aur mere piche lgane ko mai apko kbi maff ni krunga iske ly he was cursing god under his breath for sending her

CABIR: yh tum isme kya layi ho bhut heavy h yh...he said making face carrying d bag

NAVYA: Are kch nhi bas suits h woh chachi n kha tha na woh Manik ji ki dulhan k ly

CABIR: Kya suits...wth tumne mjh pagal smjha h kya suits itne heavy kbse hogy wase bh chachi n bas ek do suits lane k ly kha tha wase bh shopping krne wali h woh toh

NAVYA: woh hme smjh ni aya konsa leke ay isly hum sare le aye aur yh heavy hain kyuki yh bridal suits h aur woh heavy hi hote h

CABIR: BRIDAL SUITS he said all confused

NAVYA: Aur ni toh kya are chachi n kha na ki unki shadi horh toh woh aise kaise kch bh phn skti h yh sb heavy bridal suits h woh...hmne apni friend hai na uski shaadi m ly the apne ly jb hmri shadi hgi tb ke ly she said last line in a little shy mode

CABIR: ohhkk...acha mai yh guest room m rkh deta hu he said in a hurry moving towards guest room he didn't wanted to take ahead any conversation with her thats why he rushed from there

Cabir keeping the bag inside just rushed out without sparing a gaze to nandini who was just confused nd navya standing at door

As soon as he reached out in hall having a sigh of relief wiping fake sweat from his forehead but it was like really his stars were at bad position he felt a tap on his shoulder he turned to find a smirking their champ rishu

RISHU: woaw..!! Bhai m impressed helping your new friend haan... He said smirking

CABIR: champ not now i already had enough for today's drama a day can not be more dramatic than today's he said rubbing frown from his forehead
I can't handle more plzzz he continued

Rishu was laughing loud seeing his bro's condition but stood silent receiving deadly glares from him

Really it was a very dramatic day today so much in just one day

Everyone had there lunch but aliya didn't showed up she was in her room mukti too taking their lunch went manik was silent giving them their tym to accept it. Nandini was there wearing a plain light yellow chudidar looking elegant but her face was pale. After lunch manik wanted to have some peace aftr so mch happening he left. Cabir followed him. It was tym according to him for some bro's talk. He don't want any clarification but just wanted him to share his inner turmoil which he was hiding from everyone but can't be hidden from him.




Precap: ManBir talk



Done dana done guys tried making it light with cavya hope you like it
Won't beg you dis tym those who lyk leave a reply others I don't wanna talk to uh koi asar toh hona nh but bhut jald m taking a step you'll get to know soon
Nd peoples jinhe bh memory wapas ek dum super fast lyk a bullet train chachy plz read d top first post of d page bacha will get ur ans
Hope to see uh soon
Keep loving
Good night
Bbye
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's amazing ... I just love your story line ... it's something really different and interesting
and really you penned everything very well ... Cabir and Navya talk just lighten up the situation...

and Cabir and Rishu scene was epic


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