Manan ss Yeh Hai Aashiqui TEASER Ch 30 B pg 126 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
This update was really nice..
it was full emotions..
one side nandini crying and cursing herself and her fate for meera's condition..
and on the other side good family outing..
loved it..👏
waiting for the mystery to get unfold...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar nandu ki khamoshi dekhi nehi jati 😭
Pls update soon ..And nandu ko thik kardo
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Posted: 10 years ago
THANKS FOR PM
LOVED THE BOND BETWEEN MANIK ND CHACHI
U WROTE IT IN BEAUTIFUL MANNER
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love this... looking forward to seeing how they end up meeting...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

it was jus amazing story...wow u described the story i jus mindblowing...m speechless
while reading only one word came from my mouth is wow...hats off dea...must say u blessed with writing skill keep it up
n thanks for the lovely n wonderful update ...continue soon..desperately waiting for next part...nd plss try to update as soon as possible cant wait soo long dea


Thanx dear glad uh guys r lyking it 😛 😊
Will update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

<font size="2">emotional ...and perfectly penned update...
feeling so sad for nandu...
loved manik and chachi convo
thanks a lot for the pm
continue as soon as possible
take care


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Thank uhh dear 😃
Nd yah nxt update on d way 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riyana7

Yaar nandu ki khamoshi dekhi nehi jati 😭
Pls update soon ..And nandu ko thik kardo


Bas kch din or then she won't b khamoshhh 😆 😆
Till den enjoy d ongoing track 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

This update was really nice..

it was full emotions..
one side nandini crying and cursing herself and her fate for meera's condition..
and on the other side good family outing..
loved it..👏
waiting for the mystery to get unfold...


Thank uhh dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 12


Morning
A new day a new beginning sun was shining to its fullest birds were chirping . Its a beautiful morning a beautiful day but d ques is will it remain same or its just d indication as something will gonna happen will it b for gud or bad lets see as d day go ahead...



In hospital
Nandini was awake she didn't sleep whole night was just fighting with her inner trauma
Dr malhotra came early today she was checking on meera
She came out of iccu
Nandini went near her nd asks her if she can meet her by pointing towards d gate
She understands her and nods allows her to meet
As she entered d room she didn't move ahead as d scene infront of her was scaring her to death seeing her mother lying on d hospital bed needles were dipped in her both hands machines were there all around her nd pipe was in her nose to help her in breathing she just froze there as this was d last thing she wanted to see nd tears made their way
She wiped it nd move close to her see her face which was all pale eyes were closed she moved her hand close nd caressed her forehead as if asking her to wake up for once but seems nothing was in her favour she keep staring her
After some tym nurse entered in nd said mam patient needs rest uh should not disturb her nd visiting hours r also over aap bhar wait kr le jy
Nandini nods pecks on her forehead nd leaves with nurse
Meera senses her presence as she can feel her daughter she tried hard to open her eyes after lots of struggle she managed to open her eyes
View was blur she tried to find her but no one was there she tried to get up but failed she moved her hand
When she hears a beep it was of her mobile which was kept on her side table
She some how managed to reach there nd picked her mobile she checked it
A message frm an unknown no: jo kam apne hme dia tha wo ho gya 2 ghnte bad aap whi ayiga jha hm phle mile the
After reading message meera had a blank expression as she didn't understand that she should b happy as jo wo pichle do mahina s intzar kr rhi thi woh ho gya h ya dkhi hna chachy ki kahi saach jan k bad woh apni beti ko na kho d
And dr enters meera hides d phone dr was happy that she is in conscious now she checked her nd moved out after instructing nd scolding her fr her negligence
She told nandini that meera is in conscious nd she can only meet her after she had her medicine she leaves frm there

Dr malhotra gets call frm mr malhotra asking her when she'll b home as they need to leave she tells she'll b there in an hour she hangs up

There nurse hands d prescription to nandini nd ask her to bring d medicines she too leaves frm there to get medicines

Meera gets up removes all wires nd wears d shawl nd sneak out frm hospital

Nurse enters d room nd finds meera missing


At an isolated place
Meera some how reached there but was in a very bad state she seated on d near by stone nd tried to get her breath back to normal she was gasping for air
After some tym a man too came there nd called her
She looked up
Man: r uhh ok uh don't seem to b fine
Meera: m thik hu she said in a low nd trembling voice as this could only she managed even a small talk was making her breath unevenly
But she shooed of nd gathered courage nd managed to say what did uh find out still seating on d stone
Man: ohh yeah we managed to find out what we could he replied
Meera again said in trembling voice What??
Man: jo identity card apne diya tha use hum uss collg m gye pr wo kch btane ko tayar nhi the par mne apko apne dost k bare m btaya tha na uska ek relative usi collg m tha toh use hme pta chla ki uss ladki ka pura nam NANDINI MURTHY hai wo 2011 batch ki bcom last year ki student thi or woh delhi ki hi rhne wali h wo apne grandfather k sath rhti thi unka nam KISHOR MURTHY hai hme uska ghr ka patta bhi mila lkn ab wha koi nh hme neighbour s pta chla ki unki granddaughter ki death k baad wo yha s chale gy or koi ni janta ki woh ab kha hai aur haan hme yh bhi pta chla ki uski shaadi hne wali thi lkn uski sagai k kuch din baad uska mangeter aur uski family ka accident hua aur uski mom dad ki death ho gyi lkn koi ni janta uska mangeter kha h bas unhone nandini ki death s phle suna tha ki woh coma mh lkn uski death k baad koi ni janta ki wo kha h na hi uske grandfather kha h
Meera was hell shocked with d new things she just get to know tears were rolling down frm her eyes
After some tym she managed to say yh kaise ho skta h nandini toh zinda h how can dey say she is dead as she said this tears were flowing continuously
Man: woh sab mjh ni pta apne jitna kha tha mne kia jitna m pta kr skta tha mne kia aab ap wo kariye jo apne kha tha mjh mre paise chahy he said without having heed to pay a look at her condition
Meera: came back to reality she stood up nd said woh mre pass jitne bh paise the wo hospital m chle gye pr m jldi tumhe tumhare paise de dungi she said still in tears
Man: apne kha tha kaam hote hi aap paise dengi aur ab apko aur tym chahy apki halat dkh k lagta nhi h ki khud apke pass jada samay h mjh mre paise chahy he said this a bit louder nd coldly
He then look at her necklace a gold chain she was wearing with a beautiful pen den indeed it look expensive
Man: thik h age ap paise nhi de skti m isse hi kaam chala lunga he said moving his hand towards d chain
Meera looked at him nd backed off holding her chain tightly nahi m yh nhi de skti she took some step back clutching it tightly
( The chain was gifted by nandini 2 yrs back when she first tym started working nd after few mnths of working frm her earning she bought this for meera nd frm that day meera didn't take it out no matter what)
How can she give it was love of her daughter she can't let anybody snatch it frm her
But d man became more greedy nd took further step towards her nd grab d chain he tried nd finally with his force he took it out nd with d force he took it made her neck bleading nd she fell down hit d stone as d force was very mch to handle she hit d stone her head was bleeding badly
Man realised what he had done he was very scared don't know what to do he thought of helping her but as he saw some people after hearing d scream were heading towards them he just put d chain in pocket nd ran frm there without even looking back
Meera was in severe pain but it was not for lasting as after few minutes everything was blank to her nd pain had soothened nd her breath became slow as she was moving in d lap of death which one day everyone has to experience
She was not scared to death she it will come soon she was ready fr d day but only regret she had that she couldn't tell truth to nandini she wanted to tell her her identity which she don't even remember she wanted to give her her life back which she had before when she met her 5 yrs back she wanted to tell her that she still had someone who care cor her who love her nd was her true family nd at last she wanted to tell her apologise her frm hiding it nd ask her not to hate her tell her she too loves her nd these years she survived only because of her
Now she can't even see her when she was breathing her last breath
Soon everything was numb around her she couldn't even hear people who had come to her when she screamed nd were trying to wake her up but know she couldn't hear anything nor could feel anything


Precap meera died manan second meet



Done with this part hope u'll lyk it tried my best nd sorry for being too late i wanted to post it yesterday but couldn't so here it is but i compensated with big update there is no manan but nxt will b manan update . Half of d mystery is unfolded but there is more ignore mistake as i couldn't read it
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Edited by Kritika_05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was superb. ...
Thanks for the pm. ..

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