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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Wow it was so emotional..
How nandini ran away but manik understood her..
then nandini explaining him that rishabh was the reason and he took the responsibility!
Fab👏 waiting for ring exchange😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Aww...soo nice update
manik understood her...n thn he promise tht rishabh will be alwys with them n he took his responsibility...soo sweet
Lovedd itt
Awsummm...soo beautifully written
Thnk uh for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Amazing one..loved it...nd ur back with a bang...Update the next soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Chapter Three


Manik : Come on we will go to my home, everyone has waited for us.


Nandini : Sure but please call chachi and ask them to come.


Manik : Ok, done.


When they are going to his car he calls chachi, he drags a kiss on Nandini, she just blushed.


They come to his house. All are tensed inside. Navya comes to Nandini.


Navya : Kya waa? Why you escaped like this?


Nandini : For nothing don't worry.


She pinches Navya's cheeks.


Manik : Why you are so sad?


He puts his arm around Cabir's neck.


Cabir : Because u don't tell anything about the engagement.


Manik : Ok chill actually Nandini will announce something after her family will be here.


Chachi and everyone come.


Chachi : Manik beta why u call us?


Manik : Because of Nandini.


Manik smirks to his girl.


Nandini makes a cute face.


Manik : So about ur proposition it's ok for us.


Kabir : What proposition???


Manik : Woh Nandini or mera ka new step of our relationship?


Mukti : What you mean mere dost?


Nandini looses her patience : We are ready for the engagement.


All laugh.


Navya : Actually we understand with both of ur smile. But we love to tease you issliye we did this.


Manan blushes.


Cabir : Mere gudiya you are to cute. He pinches Manik's cheek.


Manik makes a serious face.

Cabir : I was just kidding. He runs behind Nandini.


Nandini : Waisebi Cabir is telling the truth.


Manik stops and glares her smile.


They lost in each other.


Mr Malhotra : So Mrs Murthy are you okay to celebrate the engagement today in front of us and their sagai in two days with guest?


Chachi : Apki marzi.


Nyonika goes to her room with servants.


She comes back with couple of dresses.


Nnyonika : I know I never doing anything for you Manik, so I hope I will give you a grand wedding like u want.


Nandini signals him to go to Nyonika.


Manik comes to her and hugs.


Nyonika has tears : Thanks for everything Nandini.


Nandini : It's ok maa.


Nyonika : I earn two children Manik and you. I am very lucky to have you as a daughter in law.


Cabir the breaks their emotions.


Bhai : Give my princess clothes to make her more beautiful.


He picks up Ayushi.


Navya stops them : Stop it Cabir.


She takes her daughter : Ayushi he is not ur daddy samji or tum Cabir don't play with her sentiments.


She goes to change with Ayushi.


Cabir has tears : Navya stop she is my baby too I love her so much.


Manik hugs him. Nandini with dress and girls goes to Navya.


Cabir : Ayushi is my daughter.


Manik : Calm down, I understand your feeling but in other side Navya's fear is also true. If you have a man in your life after that she will be alone and think about Ayushi.


Cabir : Why you all think that I will abandon them alone. She is my madhubala and her daughter is my baby doll. The bonding between my Ayushi and me, no one see that.


Manik : I never say you don't have any feelings to her but I just say be in limits like us, I mean all the men who are here.


Cabir : Impossible but you know what, forget it for now and let concentrate on ur engagement.


Nyonika gives them the clothes to everyone and she changes too.


Nandini : Don't cry Navya .


Navya : Why he can't understand that he gives dad love to Ayushi, she will love him like that. How I will manage her after?


Nandini : Ok I have a solution for you!


Navya : What?


Nandini : Your wedding.


Navya : KYA???


Nandini : Yaa. I know a good doctor who works with me. He is very kind.


Navya : I think you become mad.


Nandini : Not at all.


Navya : But???


Nandini : I decide now make me ready for Manik.


She wears a beautiful red and white lehenga.


Everyone comes to the hall, where all couple see each other but only Navya doesn't look Cabir.


Ayushi plays with a doll.


Nyonika : So lets start.


She tends two rings to both of them.


Manik kneels : I never thought that I will give you a ring like this. But I think it's the best place because each person who are here wants that our union. Nandini the first time I met you, I thought you a looser. But I was wrong, you are the strong girl who step back against the Fab 5. I find in you one thing I never had to be kind with a monster. Every look, smile, word, hug, fragrance, hate, touch, fight, lecture... make me fall in love more on you. Sincerely you are my lucky charm not only for me but also for my friends and family. For everyone you give love and intention issliye more than me they love you. Today it's best day of my life kyu ki after now I can romance you whenever I want and no one can stop even me. I just love you and want to share until my last breath beside you. So will you accept this ring who represents my love to you?


With tears she accepts.


Nandini : I will not be long, thanks Manik to come in my life. To give me two extraordinary persons as mom and dad. I am lucky to have Fab 4 in my life because everyone are fabulous. When I lost my parents I thought I will never have happiness in my life but when I entered college I learnt that I was wrong. Every day with you was just awesome. You make me so happy with your extreme love. Every phase make us very strong. We fight against every villains. And yaa Manik forget about our romance because I am doctor. So do you want to share loneliness night without your wife?


Manik accepts : Of course I will put a bed in your medical room for us.


She blushes.


They takes bless and hugs from everyone.


Cabir sees Ayushi takes some pills. He runs to her.


He throws the pills and embraces her.


Ayushi : Papa kya waa?


Cabir : Kuch nai.


He kisses her and sees Navya. She gives Ayushi to Aliya.


Cabir : Bolo abhi! Damn it! Sun lo Navya. You can tell whatever you want but I will love her forever. Do what you can.


She has tears. He takes Ayushi and goes to the garden.


Manik : I know you have all rights on your daughter but don't insult Cabir, he was always with you. He doesn't need this bad treatment of yours.




Precap : Manan makes a plan to unite Cavya. What will happen?

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
update is awesome..

Liked MaNan talk..🤣

And Cabir and Ayushi part too..
Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Addrita.Jesin

update is awesome..

Liked MaNan talk..🤣

And Cabir and Ayushi part too..
Update soon.



Ty
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Congratulations for new ff dear.. .
Nice update
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
The proposal was so cute, I want to jump like a little girl 😳
Those words were very fitting

I really believe that she is his Madhubala, they arent couplish in the Show but they are so unique

Very excited for the plan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
very nice update and so finally engagement is over 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Awww tht was so cute proposal n all😛 ...I was missing ur updates from soo long ...i'l put bed in ur medical room😆 ...navya's behavior is also sort of justified ...bt cabir genuenly cares for ayushi ...now nandini would make navya meet tht doc i guess bt may b tht would become a part of manan's plan to unite cavya ...anyways I know u would have some good stuff with u in the store fr the next ... thnk u fr d PM ...update soonn n a bigger 1 ...will b waiting ...😊
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