True love is inseperable (Part 23 updated on page 25 on 24/7 - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

131

Views

57.6k

Users

39

Likes

885

Frequent Posters

sreesri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Amaxing update..
Manan fyt..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm
shaan... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Caring manik's so adorable...
Manan's moment was cute...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
Entwined_Fates thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing story yaar
Manan's cute nokjhoks are too good...
Caring Manik is super cute
Continue soon

Take care
anusha3003 thumbnail
Engager Level 2 Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Part:22

Manik: Phir tum kyu ro rahi ho
Nandini: Vo... Vo... kuch nahi bus aise hi
Manik: What? dont be silly why are u crying
Nandini: Kuch nahi hai
Manik: If u dont tell me then we arent going out at evening
Nandini: Manik... Then u should not laugh
Manik: Nahi to
Nandini: Vo kuch nahi just in this story the hero nd heroine ka jagadda hogaya nd vo bahut emotional tha isiliye
Manik: What ???????? Seriously... you are crying for this reason nd he begins to laugh
Nandini: U told me that u dont laugh
Manik: Yes now i dont laugh... nd he again laughs loudly
Nandini: Manik stop laughing otherwise i ... i...
Manik: U... what
Nandini: I will beat u nd she takes the pillow nd beat him
Manik: Nandini... stop beating
Nandini: If u dont forget then mera punishment avi vi baki hai
Manik: What? Which punishment?? i dont remember anything
and manik goes away from the room



At evening:
Manik: Nandini get ready we will go outside
Nandini: Ok
Manik: mai fresh hokar avi aati hu, u get ready
Nandini: Ok

After sometime manik comes out from bathroom and stunned seeing nandini in red dress
Nandini turns and sees manik
Nandini: Ye kya hai manik, U dont know to dry ur hairs neatly, she makes him sit on the chair nd she dry's his hairs with towel
Manik smiles seeing her care for him
Manik: Nandini ek baat puchu
Nandini: Ha
Manik: U bought this dress in XYZ mall na
Nandini: Yes, but how do u know

Manik: I went there to buy dress for mukthi with her, on that day i liked this dress but mukthi ko to pasand bhi nahi aya

Nandini: Manik u know what actually i and navya went for shopping when i am in changing room a guy stand outside with same dress and i mistakenly taken this from him but i returned back to him when i came to know it is not mine
After when we return back navya's cousin asked her to buy a dress for her so we buy this one but unfortunately navys's cousin dont like red so navya exchanged this dress nd mine so finally i got this dress back again

Manik: What ? is it u who is in changing room on that day
Nandini: Iska matlab u are the one who is talking in phone
Manik: Yes, vaise ye dress tum par acchi diktha hai
Nandini blushes
Nandini: Thanks for ur complement Mr. Manik Malhotra, ab tum jakar ready hojao then we will go out
Manik: Ok


After sometime manik gets ready nd they both went outside


PRECAP:

Nandini: Manik ye kya hai
Manik: Tissues for u
Nandini: But why
Manik: U are crying a lot na so i thought it will help u



Next part will be updated after my exams i.e., after 22 may
Edited by anusha3003 - 9 years ago
jamunamanik thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Niceee


Superrr


Goooddd

Thanks for the pm


Coun sooon
sreesri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..
Al d best 4 ur xam..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm
archu_asok thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Loved it. Manan's moments were beautifully penned. Manan's concern for each other was adorable. Eagerly waiting for next update .Continue soon. Thanks for pm.love to read more
Keep smiling
Stay blessed😊
All the best for ur exams. Do well
shaan... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Manan's moments were awesome & adorable...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
nanoNikki thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice best of luck for your exams
anusha3003 thumbnail
Engager Level 2 Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry guys as due to bad net connection i cant able to give updates




Part:23


After sometime manik gets ready nd they both went outside
Both manik and nandini went out
Manik: Nandini kidhar jana
Nandini: As ur wish
Manik: Tell na
Nandini: kahi bhi mujhe mumbai par bahut places nahi pata hain
Manik: What ???
Nandini: Actually i came here before 6 months only and if i want to go anywhere navya or abhi will come with me
Nandini: Ok lets go for shopping
Manik: What for shopping???
Nandini: Ha tho
Manik: Nahi kuch aur place, what about movie
Nandini: Manik pls
Manik: Ok then as ur wish

Both are going in a car

Nandini: Manik stop the car
Manik: Idhar kya hai
Nandini: Manik mujhe grocery purchase karna hai
Manik: Kya tum hostel me grocery ka shop rakha hai
Nandini: Manik, vo isiliye jab mai kal raat kitchen me dekha tab kuch saman bhi nahi hai kitchen me isiliye
Manik: To kya ham khana bahar se mangwaleta haina
Nandini: Outside food is not good for health
Manik: Maito roj bahr ka food hi katha hu
Nandini: Par iss do din mai banunga
Manik: Par nandini
Nandini: Manik chup if u dont want to come inside then sit in the car but dont disturb me
Nandini goes from there

After some time nandini comes back after buying groceries

Manik: Nandini chale
Nandini: Hmm
Suddenly nandini sees golgappe stall
Nandini: Manikkk..
Manik: Hmm..
Nandini: Manik golgappa
Manik: Ab nahi
Nandini: Pls manik
Manik: Abhi to tum keh rahi thi na bahar ka food nahi khana chahiye
Nandini: Oh to mai ..., pls manik mujhe ab gol gappa chahiye
Manik: Ok u eat i will come back, dont go any where
Nandini: Ok


After eating nandini looks for manik but he doesnt there

Nandini is searching for manik but she doesnt found him, then she about to call him but manik comes there
Nandini: Manik kaha gayi thi
Manik: Kuch karidne ke lye
Nandini: Kya
Manik: ye nd shows something to her
Nandini: Ye kya hai manik
Manik: Tumhare liye tissues
Nandini: Tissues but why
Manik: U are crying a lot na so i thought it will help u
Nandini: Manikkk nd goes from there

Manik smiles nd goes back to her
Manik: Nandini suno
just then nandini's phone rings
Nandini: Hello navya kaisi ho
Navya: Mai thik hu aur tum kaisi ho
Nandini: Mai bhi thik hu, kaisi ho raha hai shaadi ka preparations
Navya: acchi se ho raha hai, nandini mai tujhse baad me baat karunga, kuch kaam hai
Nandini: Ha its ok bye navya
Navya: Bye

Nandini silently goes nd sits in a car
Manik also sits beside her
Manik: Nandiniii..
Nandini: Turns her face to other side




PRECAP:
Nandini is laughing loudly while manik is driving silently
Nandini: Really manik tum to manik malhotra nahi Manik monkey malhotra hai nd laughs loudly

Edited by anusha3003 - 9 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".