superb update dear though i never commented in ur ff bt i must say SUPERB writing... The way u r showing various steps of life after marriage is briliant...i agree life is not bed of roses..Hardships, pains, sufferings are the other side of lyf.. but da way of overcoming da pains, hardships dat u r showing in ur ff is OUTSTANDING... every girl wants such a caring, loving & supportive husband like da way u r presenting MANIK is rllyyy rlly beutiful... am speechless bt i wana thank u fr presenting such a wonderful piece of writing... the more i read ur fcc start falling in love again & again...the role of FAB-4, Manik's Family is totally excellent ...seems lyk am reading a fairytale, they r so supportive,loving, caring, free minded people and bond with nandini iz rlly touching... u r a briliant writer Mashallah...
now talking about ur last update it was superb..i never expected nandini 2 be so bold... frst nandini's birthday was a wow factor.. the way manik celebrated her brthday and treating her as his queen is so beutiful..the presents that he gifted her were so pretty specially da disney toys dat was rlly swt any girl would love dat...the surprising element was nandini wearing a bikini dat was rlly a sweet shock 2 read i can imagine how manik was trying 2 control his desire... Den coming 2 da party nandini was briliant though she was drunk bt it was a treat 2 read as we had seen her drunken state in da show... the way she was claiming manik her and tagged as "HER JAAN" was wow... uff da killing part was the tight slap given 2 dat arrogant girl by nandini was rlly a treat 2 read dat girl deserves it and da way nandini pour her heart infront of manik in her drunken state was da best part fr me in da update.. all her words were so heart touching
thanks fr wondrful update... keep updating regularly...srry fr all my rubbish ... hope u will update rlly soon ...may allah bless u...👏😊😆