THREAD 2 FF_MANAN_MADLY_IN_LOVE. PART 119 - PAGE 146 - Page 40

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: masoomii

u want more semi hot updates??, :D even mine too nd one more when she come with rauby nd manik ask her who was he :P tujhe mere sare ff s mai aise he majnu manik milega :D


ya I love semi hot updates!
saare ffs.. aur b hai kya?! 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 96 was just awesome.. stubborn & moody nandini ko sirf Manik hi handle karr sakta hai! ye hui na baat, biwi hubby se nhi daregi to aur kisse daregi!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part- 97 (a)

Nandani came out from her room..nd saw sidharth sitting on couch.with long face.she sat next to him..nd poked him.. but he ignored her and walked away from there to his room..
Nandani- isko kya hogya??
Ishika- laugh ask him nd bdw hwz ur hiccups??
Nandani- now its ok.
Ishika- wah we never knw manik is such a good doctor.. that u obey to him..
Nandani- blush stop it di.. nd walk away from there to boys room..she enter inside room nd was shocked to see room condition..whole room turned out into a mess..she saw sid sitting,on corner of bed..she start shouting at him...
Nandani- ohh god..what u guys have done to this room??
Sid- I don't stay here alone in this room then why ar u shouting only at mee??
Nandani- achha u don't stay here alone?? (She pick up wet towel from bed) this belongs to u na?? Can u plz tell mee yeh yaha kya kr rha hai?? How many tyms I told u wet towel bed pr nhi rakhte!! Nd yeh shoes (she saw pair of shoes lying near bed) yeh yaha aise kyun pade hai??? How irresponsible ur..!!
(meanwhile manik came out from washroom manan had a short eyelock which break with sid voice)
Sid- im not listening to u.. Did u ever listen to mee?? U only listen to him pointed his finger on manik.. Then why should I listen to u!!
Manan gave him confused look..
Nandani- folded her arms around her chest.. nd narrowed her eyes when I don't listen to u?? Just tell mee!!
Sid- when u don't listen to mee ok.. Aaj ka incident he lelo manik just said for once he will break the door if u don't open it..but if I was on his place nd told u the same thing..then ur reaction would be..go break it then I'll break ur bones..
Nandani- tried to cntrol her laugh..
Manik- I think I should leave..he excused himself giving some privacy to them..so they can talk without any disturbance..
Nandani- smiles) blink her eyes in thanku gesture to him...
Manik smiles back at her nd walk out from room shutting it behind..
Nandani -to sid) are u feeling jealous from Manik..??
Sid- no way why would I feel jealous from him??
Nandani- laughs) the way ur,complaining abt him.. it seems lyk ur jealous from him..
Sid- no!!
Nandani- lil serious) u knw why I open door for him at once??
Sid- bcz u love him thats why!
Nandani- wrapped her arms around his left,arm) yeah thats,true I love him.. but I open the door for him bcz I knw he will break it.. if I don't open it.without,even thinking it could hurt him.nd u if I told u to don't even try.. I knw u'll listen to mee..but manik he just don't listen to mee ..he just do what I told him not to do..isiliye!! Ab samjha budhu..
Sid- fine I understood..but seriously I don't lyk him ..!
Nandani- (tensed) what?? Why?? U promised mee u'll try to befriend with him.. nd I thought everything is going well between u two?? Nd now suddenly ur saying,this??
Sid- I never lyk him!! Ur already married to him..isliye I said yes to him.. Nd try to be friendly with him just for ur sake of hapiness..nd I realised in last few days..that he is not that bad.. The way he pretend he is a bad boy.!!
Nandani- if u realised then what is the problem??
Sid- irritated) he is the problem.. He is coming between us..he is snatching away u from mee..!!
Nandani- furious on him) how can u even thought abt,him lyk that?? He is not coming between us..neither he is snatching mee from u!! He is not lyk that!! Plz don't think abt him lyk that..
Sid- he is coming between us,coming between our friendship.. Intentionally or unintentionally he is coming..u remember we promised each other that noone mtlb not any single person can come between us.. Not even roshni.. ur,my bestest friend..nd after ur marriage he will take u away from us.!! From mee .away from our house .nd ur saying,he is not snatching u from mee.!! I never shared u with anyone nd now I had to share u with him..bcz he is ur husband Isiliye I don't lyk him..
Nandani- understood what exactly is bothering him..she took a deep sigh..nd look at him..
Sid- continue.. nd jbse wo aya hai..either ur busy talking to him on ph or else thinking abt him huh u don't have any tym for mee..
Nandani - achha chup bs..now listen to mee quietly!! Understood..
Sidharth- hmm
Nandani-nd he is not snatching mee from u..ur my best friend nd always will be.. U had ur own place in my heart..nd Manik had his own..nd u two can't replace eachother in my lyf..what he is,to,mee u,can never,be..i,love him..nd ur my,bestest,friend..nd he can be my friend but,bestest friend no..wo to siddu hai na.. then how he can be..nd ur not sharing mee with anyone.nd abt ph thing we stay in same house with so many ppls always around us nd u stay infront of my eyes all tym..so I knw ur ok Nd abt manik he had noone with him he stays alone..isliye uski chinta hoti hai.understood!!
Sidharth-,is now understood he was lil satisfied nd,happy nandani continue..nd who said im going away,from my house going,away from al of,u.. This is my house I can come,there any,tym..nd mai dur kaha jari hu lyk sanjana di nd tanu.. Mumbai mai he to rahugi na!! Ap sbke pass..tu kbhi bhi ajana..nd bol to tujhe dahej mai apne sath le jaugi..!!
Sidharth- laughs yeah,that is a good idea..
Sidharth hugged her..
Sorry motti wo mujhe gussa agya tha..now I understood..!!
Nandani- rested her head on his chest) its ok..) nd now what abt ur date??
Sid- date,?? What date,??
Nandani-,stupid u said na,u want to go on date!!
Sid- ohh yeah how can I forget..
Nandani-,tu bhi na. She turn around nd look at door shocked..manik was standing there.. he actually listen to there entire conversation...he walk away from there...
Nandani close her eyes in frustration..then look at sidharth..
Nandani- sidharth tu idea soch mai abhi ati hu.. She walk behind manik..he was in lawn looking at flowers..nandani came infront of him..
Nd hugged him..
Nandani- gussa ho..
Manik- hugged her back) no not at all!!
Nandani- lier I knw u heared everything
!!
Manik-i just came there for charger.. sorry mujhe waha nahi ana chahiye tha nd im really not angry nandani..i knw u,lov mee but I don't lyk sidharth..Nand ani roll her eyes nd look at him) not again..abhi usko samjhaya nd now u..
Manik- how can he thought lyk that..im snatching u from him..!! I admire ur friendshp..i almost forget my issues,with him..nd now he is bringing it back..
Sid- bcz,I'm idiot..
Manan look around nd saw sidharth standing,behind them..
He came infront of them nd hold,his,ears
Sid- im such a,n idiot im sorry manik..mai thoda gussa,tha kuch jyada he overreact kr gya. Actually I never shared her any one isiliye thoda insecure ho gya tha he pulled his hairs..im really really sorry..but now nandu ne samjha diya..!!
Manik-i can understand even I can't share her with anyone (manan look at each other) but i 'll forgive u ,only,on one condition
Sid- nd whats,that,??
Manik- extended,his hands..friends??
Sid- hold his hand tight nd hug him
.yes sure..love to have a friend lyk yew
Manik - same here
Nandani - smiles,nd,silently thanks to god..
Sid- sorry laddu once again..!! He hugged her..nandani hugged him back..
Manik smiles nd was abt to go from there..but nandani hold him with her one hand..nd they had an eye lock..

To be continued..!!

Author note- sorry for chotu part..enjoy reading nd keep cmnting :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N_Niya


& I love u shoo much! :*

luv u 2 ^_^
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N_Niya


ya I love semi hot updates!
saare ffs.. aur b hai kya?! 😕

ha 3 aur hai :D, pr abhi discontinue kiye hue,hai :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N_Niya

part 96 was just awesome.. stubborn & moody nandini ko sirf Manik hi handle karr sakta hai! ye hui na baat, biwi hubby se nhi daregi to aur kisse daregi!!

haha :P but abhi dar ri hai bad mai manik ko he draygi na :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love your story alott and manik is my fav character from ur story juat love his montrous side with naughty and possessive side and one more thing i send you a buddy request can you please pm me also
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Posted: 10 years ago
jst loved it
they way u narreted bteween tri ws simple super
the both too possive towadrs nandu

they way she managing was good
finally there were friends
too good update
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am just loving the way story is moving...imagine this friendly Manik become not so friendly ( in good sense) when he comes to knw Roshni is his sis...Hw Sid will convince him hahahaha thoda future imagination main chali gayi lol...update Jaldi se
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 97 (b)

Manan had an eyelock..sid ph start ringing so he broke there hug..Manik look syd,ways..Nandani leave his hand.. Sid check the ph.. It was roshni call..so he just excuse himself...nd left from there.. there..Nandani too walk behind him..but manik pull her back..
Manik- tum kaha jari ho! U stay here with mee!! Keep his hands on her waist..lock her in his arms.. hugged her.. Tight..
Nandani- stunned) manik leave mee!! Plz mujhe kaam hai chodo mujhe she tried to,move out from his grip..
Manik- no away.. Frst ans,my question?? Kya bol ri thi use?? Mere samne bhi bolo
Nandani- kya question?? Kis bare mai baat kr rhe ho??
Manik- yeai,ki manik stay alone..he had noone with him..isliye tension hoti hai meri??
Nandani-,laughs,) achha u want,to listen that??
Manik- yes,.. Nd one more thing u said u love mee..say it on my face.. Say I love u manik.
Nandani- laughs) no I will never say it
Manik- achha so ur challenging mee??
Nandani- yes.. Im challenging u!!
Manik-nd u knw I luv to win..
Nandani- turn around to look at him so??
Manik- so?? He pulled her close to,him from shoulder..say u love mee..he kissed her,own neck next target was on her lips..
Nandani-eyes got widen.. Ar u mad?? Manik koi aajayga!!
Manik- so what ane do..im ur husband..after all he winked at her..
Nandani- push him little nd move back!! Manik..- took a step ahead as she took one step backwards..say u love mee..
Nandani- no..she tried to ran away from there..manik hold corner of her duppata..
Nd pulled it out from her neck..nd hold,it in his hand..
Nandani- cover her chest with her hands..Manik give mee back my duppata..
Manik- u want this duppata?? (Nandani nodes her head in yes..) ok frst say I love u to mee..
Nandani- twisted her lips no way.. Huh
Manik- ok fine.. he again took a step ahead..nd open zip of his jacket..
Nandani- eyes pop out..what ar u doing. Manik behave ur self..(manik took one more step toward her.. ) we ar on terrace..
Manik- toh??
Nandani- annoyed) stop being so naughty nd stubborn all tym..
Manik- u just stop being stubborn all tym. Nd say what I want to listen..he put his,hand on her waist..nuzzle his nose on her neck.. Nd gave soft kiss on her nape..
Nandani- we ar going on date..na.. I'll tell u there.. Ok..
Manik- lifted his head pakka??
Nandani- hmm pakka!! Now plz let mee go..
Manik- ok go..still holding..her waist...nd kissing on her neck..
Nandani- manik chodoge tb to jaugi na,??
Manik- im not holding u..its my hands u knw na,they don't listen to mee..!! They just stop working..!!
Nandani - smirks ohh achha how can I forget.. She pinch on his hand..
Manik- ouchh ...but didn't move a inch away from her..
Nandani- hold his hands on her waist..) Manik plzz let mee go..mujhe sachh mai kaam hai..
Manik- kya kaam hai tell mee!!
Nandani- woh si..(stop) its a girl thing I can't tell u.. Ok..so don't ask..
Manik- what girl thing..i knw everything abt u..aise bhi waise bhi..he smirks at her..
(Nandani eyes pop out..) so just tell mee!! Nd don't be shy..
Nandani- chii besharm!! She slap him on his face!! im not feeling shy!!
Manik- then what??
Nandani- its not only abt mee its abt aloo mukti sanjana di extra extra (manik embarrass) u still want to knw??
Manik- ok ok stop I don't want to knw..
He freed her from his grip..
Nandani- laughs) its so easy to fool u..
Manik- what?? U fooled,mee.means u don't have any girly work to do??
Nandani- no..!! She start taking short back steps..
Manik- annoyed) now im not going,to spare u..
Nandani- pehle pakard kr to btao..
She ran from there..Manik ran behind her tried to hold her but,she was too fast she ran out of terrace leaving annoyed manik behind..
She came down laughing lyk hell..her cell beeped it was manik msg..he send her annoyed emoticon..
Nandani send him kiss in reply..
Manik- we ar going out for date in evening na then I'll see u..he msgd her..
Nandani- ok. Lets see... Then send winked emoticon in reply..
Roshni saw her laughing..ask her what happened to her..
Roshni- jhalli ho gyi hai kya??
Nandani- cntrol her laughter..) tu mere chodh tu jakr ready hoja..she gave her a packet from her wardrobe.. Ur going out on date with ur boyfriend..!!
Roshni- blush ok but sbko kaise ptayge?? U knw we ar in shimla not in mumbai..
Nandani- tu us sbki tension chodh I told badimummy that ur going out to knw abt market of shimla for ur project.. nd sid will give u company there..as u knw.. ek akeli ladki khuli hui tijori ki trah hoti hai.. U knw she said while cntroling her laugh..
Roshni- slap on her arm) nautanki!!
Nandani- laughs) isilye sid is going with u..
Roshni-smart move she smiles at her..
Nandani- im so intelligent u knw ..she raised her invisible collars!!
Roshni- laughs) but where ar we going on date??
Nandani- wo its a,dinner date. Now hurryup go get ready..!!
Roshni- ok !!
On the other syd manik was thinking how to take nandani out on date!! ..he was lost in his own deep thoughts.. Alvira shakes him..
Alvira- whatssup jiju kaha khoy hue ho??
Manik- nothing yr I was just thinking!!
Alvira- thinking what??
Manik- how to take nandani out on date!!
Alvira- coughs,) what date??? She look around to check if anybody here it or not..
Manik- to realises what he just said... he was lil embarrass!! ) woh im sorry..turn his face other syd..
Alvira- smirks I understand.manik. Jiju.. No need to say sorry U want to. Spend some tym alone with my sister!! Right??
Manik- sadly look at her) right!! Which is not possible here.. (He look at her ) sorry!!
Alvira- laughs) I knw sb hai yaha..isiliye thoda difficult hai !!
Manik- hmm!!
Alvira- smirks)but i,can help,u!
Manik- gave her happy surprised happy look..) how??
Alvira- wo sb,mujhpe chodh do
But,mujhe ek favour chahiye??
Manik-kya favour..??
Alvira- I will tell u later in Mumbai..but usko pura,krna padega?? Warna mai sbko bta dugi abt ur date??
Manik- smiles)tum dono behno ko blackmailing k alawa or kuch ni ata kya!! Ok I promised u.. What ever u'll ask mee to do I'll do it..but knw help mee yr..already its 5'o clock nd im late..
Alvira - ok ok.just give mee 10 min..
She whisper sumthing in namrata ears..to which namrta smiles at her...nd she called Nandani..outsyd
Namrata- nandani
Nandani- came out from her room saw manik sitting on couch alvira standing next to namrata..
Nandani- yes mom..
Namrata- get ready beta ur going out with manik...
Nandani-look at manik..) her jaw drop open..
Manik- eyes got widened he was just staring at alvira who had a winning smile on her face..!!


To be continued..!!!.

Author note- cmnt guys hwz it??


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