Devil's Bride Manan ff thread 2 link on page 150 - Page 68

Originally posted by: Sm0405

Woohooo ... It was awesome ... Full on entertainment ...

I was laughing in the whole update ...

This was sooo good ... So awesmmm ...

Tht smrufy thing to the dream sequence ...🤣🤣I soo loved ittt ...

Manik's reaction knowing smurfy licked his face was epic ...🤣🤣... Then tht bedroom thing where Nandini realises its manik room, his bed n his towel😆😆😆... Then comes the hilariously epic dream of Mrs Nandini Manik Malhotra ... Like seriously, a battle field with all the cheering, shank, nagada n all ...what a dreamm ...

Only she can dream this crazzyy ...🤣🤣then Manik's utter cool behavior which not only shocked her bt me too ... Lyk how cool n clam he was ... As if nothing happened ... N then comes his sarcastic comment ...

Why not make a room for you here in malhotra industries there you cn sleep whole day."

Ohh God ... I was laughing like crazy on this ...🤣🤣n then after all this comes his outburst ...

Her latest facial status was " a dog's tail is always crooked. N it will remain the same always."

Mr. Malhotra wants to see Mrs. Malhotra weeping n being scared of him ... Bt ahh ... Thts least gonna happen ...

Soo all in all ... I jst loved the update ...❤️❤️❤️... It was a much needed dose fr all of us ...

Thank u soo much fr posting ittt ... N kehne ki zarurat hai kya ... U also know u r awesmm awesmmm awesmm writer n we all love ur ff very much ...

Originally posted by: Roshni8

What an update dear, I am falling short of words

Its superb, mind blowing, super hilarious, awesome amazing and more... You nailed it👏

Nandini naming herself as a dish, Nandu paneer kofta, Nandini ke paranthe and then Nandini briyani... Oh God its so funny

And then her mission, Manik felt ticklish on his cheek as if someone was licking his cheek & he murmurred "Stop it naa...".And may be, air quotations 'May BE'... Nandini was in his dreams... But soon his beauty sleep got disturbed and he got scared because it was Smurfy ( perfect re entry of our little hero who can only and only it can scare the Devil... )

And then A KING SIZE BED N AN ACTION THRILLING MOVIE RUNNING IN FRONT OF SMURFY, so TOO LAZY TO BARK NOW... Hehe😆😆

And even the I PHONE 6 thought of playing a small role in this movie. Awww... Superb it is...

And then "Bhaag Smurfy..."

And how can I forget the most, most and the most hilarious part of the whole update

She dreaming about the battlefield... It was so funny...🤣

She had a strong invisible shield around her to protect herself

And Devil Malhotra was actually having horns, devil's teeth and a tail like a DEVIL

And and "Nandini Malhotra ki jai!!" And dhol, nagadas... Perfect dreams yaar

AND I REALLY LIKED THE NAMES - Angel Malhotra v/s Devil Malhotra

And when she came out of her DreamLand, she knew that today was her official death day

And "Haww... Smurfy is still single my poor baby"

1st thing that will change is her name plate, i.e., fromNandini Murty to Late Mrs. Nandini Malhotra (1987-2015)

And she praying to aiyappa that he should suffer from Partial Amnesia and forget last 15 mins

Fantastic update, each and every part of this update was so funny...

OKAY SO QUITE A LONG COMMENT I GUESS. So wl end it here

Waiting, and eagerly waiting for the next update. Till then, take care and update whenever possible

Thanks a lot for the pm also

Originally posted by: anushi3012

Seriously!!! I laugh all the way reading it!!
Nandini rocks!!!
Her POV was so amazingly funny and her day dream!!!hahahaha i sooo loved it!!

This was the best part I have read and you nailed it!!!

Originally posted by: ReneeAmora

oh dear😆😆😆

👏👏

superbly funny..

And thank u fo the update n pm..

And yes had to inform that ill be inactive for over a month or two..So sorry wont be able to comment and read

But will miss u and your super duper fun... '

Tke care and pls do continue writing..

As im hoping to come back soon and fall dead laughing on the floor again..

😊

And i just love your nandini yaar shes too goodand uska smurfy.. mast hai yaar love him